[Double heroines]+[Magic Farming]+[Sick Lord]+[Group Portrait]+[Imagination]+[Fei Shuangwen]+[Cure]
This article is slow to gain steam and contains many interesting points. I don't even know why I'm watching it.
She was reincarnated into a girl named Yvette, who was terminally ill but inherited her grandfather's manor.
Her life-sustaining medicine is a bead used as an ornament.
An epic story called "Jiangzhu".
The kingdom she saved bred life on tears,
A nation cursed with eternal sorrow.
Her adopted daughter is the "savior" of the world
A prisoner of fate in reincarnation.
Maybe death is the final outcome, maybe destiny cannot be abandoned.
But standing in front of tomorrow's starting point,
We have the right to enjoy today's happiness and contentment.
Even if it is about to slowly disappear in the arms of the most beloved person...
(The foreshadowing of the emotional line of this article will be very long. The second protagonist may not appear until halfway through.)
(The heroine's character is an unusual type)
(New author, if you have any suggestions or ideas, please let me know.)
Reader comments
The first seven chapters seem to be very imaginative and have a dreamy feel, but the writing is not supportive enough. The foundation is there, but the ideas cannot be described in detail. In addition, when viewed on a mobile phone, the volume seems too small and a bit thin, but I believe it will get better after writing. Come on!
By the way, there is also contextual logic. Write the logical chain on paper, perfect it, and then use it as a reference for writing to avoid missing some important descriptions that determine the coherence of the plot of the article. Otherwise, the reader may not be able to understand what you imagine.
The first seven chapters seem to be very imaginative and have a dreamy feel, but the writing is not supportive enough. The foundation is there, but the ideas cannot be described in detail. In addition, when viewed on a mobile phone, the volume seems too small and a bit thin, but I believe it will get better after writing. Come on! By the way, there is also contextual logic. Write the logical chain on paper, perfect it, and then use it as a reference for writing to avoid missing some important descriptions that determine the coherence of the plot of the article. Otherwise, the reader may not be able to understand what you imagine.
Overall good, worth watching