Hokage, I Want to Die but I Am Caught by Tsunade!

It was pretty cool, but I quit halfway through. The previous plots are well written, but I don't like them all. Later, he also created a manpower pillar with one tail. There are too many things superimposed on him. I can't stand this kind of thing. But radish and green vegetables have their own preferences, and the description is still very good.

It's still okay to write, but it would be better if the label says "No Send Girl" and is deleted. Because what I wrote was given to my daughter.

The writing is pretty good, the writing style is better than AI, the ideas are pretty good, the updates are too few, updating to 500,000 words will call me back to Akaishi [face covering]

How easy it is to die if you want to practice various forbidden arts, such as the Eight Gate Dunjia. When fighting the enemy, keep it open until the battle is over. This is not suicide, it is just killing the enemy to death from exhaustion [sneaky laugh]

I read a few chapters and it was so sweet

The female character portrayed by the author is more lively and proactive. She is not a passive puppet who is attacked by the male protagonist in many works.

The story is good

It's a bullshit, isn't it a funny article? Why is there still a knife and paper [I'm about to cry]

There is no problem at the moment. Although you sometimes seek death, at least you are not harming anyone. But if your feelings are deep, don't deliberately seek death. For now, it is no longer suitable to deliberately seek death.

Will Nohara Rin die? The author is great Looking back, it's a bit... Well... It's hard to say

Come on (ง •̀_•́)งThe author is great

It's well written. It's not toxic at the moment. You can watch it with confidence. In the later period, I felt more and more watery (in my personal opinion). It was tasteless to eat and it was a pity to throw it away.

It's good-looking. Although the introduction is a bit short, I have to say it has content and details.

Come on! The big brother who writes books

The author has a bit of a side job. I believe that the low score is because the brothers are suppressing the score. Hehe, but I am not suppressing [laughter] Let's give it three stars. After all, the protagonist doesn't know anything. It's boring if you watch too much. Think I'm trying to score points.

I've seen Chapter 106, although fan works shouldn't have too many settings. But if Jinchuuriki (non-kage) and Shukaku want to win against the third and fourth generation winds, they can only think about the next life. (Shukaku serves as a power bank) In the original work, Gaara won the fourth generation because Gaara was a pure sand shield that perfectly matched Shukaku. In the end, he won with the addition of his mother's magical power. At that time, Gaara was already a strong Kage-level actor.

Some of the changes are quite casual and not rigorous enough, but overall it's quite interesting and not too serious. If you just look at the content, you can follow it.

I give you four stars. Your writing style can be improved! After all, the magic has changed, but the characters of the original drama still need to be taken seriously.

It's pretty good. I haven't watched Naruto for a long time. The setting of this book is quite novel. I hope there will be more updates, otherwise I'll have to keep it.

Very beautiful, very novel subject matter, the current low rating is just because it just came out

The writing is still very good. At the beginning, because the protagonist only wants to go back, it may be a bit poisonous. Later, the writing is not bad.

It's beautiful. It's so beautiful.

Good book, very enjoyable to read

It looks good. If you like it, come and see more.

Love it. Come see more.

The traditional Dragon King text starts later, but the first part is okay.

@457 Author, if you write the protagonist to death in the later stage. Then can we watch the urban dragon king plot? (Funny)

If you read it without thinking, it is quite an easy book.

The single heroine Tsunade, who was a childhood sweetheart in the same era as Tsunade

It's been a long time since I've seen such a superb book. Although the number of readers is quite low now, it will definitely be high in the future [smile]