Western Fantasy: Beginning with the Dragon Family

At the beginning, I had my first dragon, Thor, who died not long after. I wanted to complain, but after thinking about it, it was difficult to find a Game of Thrones fanfic on Tomato. I should be more patient. Fortunately, it got better later on, referring to the plot of conquering the glutton and Silver Wing.

If the author is willing to read my comment, my suggestion is that since the protagonist is obviously a member of the Long family, it is better to consider taking a seat on the Iron Throne. Of course, if you don't like the Iron Throne, you can build a dragon throne! He can replace it!

After reading Dragon Family, I have been looking for a fanfic to read. This book really satisfied me. The description of the grand dragon battle scene is very good, and the things the author himself added are also very interesting. It is a very good Dragon Family fanfic.

Because I haven't watched the prequel, I have to refresh my knowledge every time I watch half of it [face covering] Now updated to Chapter 50, there are some twists and turns in the middle. I got a full-level dragon at the beginning and it disappeared after a few chapters. Although it is said that there will be a resurrection game later, it will be fun to watch with two dragons starting from Chapter 50. Overall, my review is good. I didn't read the prequel, and then I made up my review on the prequel.

I can give it a score of 8.5. Some people say that there is a big gap between the book and the plot. I haven't watched the original drama very much. It's all part of the short video. After reading it, I still think the writing is pretty good. Of course, there are a few parts that I find problematic. For example, the protagonist's character is fine most of the time, but for a very few women At that time, I didn't understand it very well, and the world view seemed to be getting more and more grand, and the plot was smooth, but it suddenly sped up. I'm not sure whether it was because there was no traffic at the beginning, or the author couldn't eat enough, or whether it was a bit confusing when I first started writing the book. How can I put it, a good book is not afraid of slowness, and it is rare for a book to be read slowly, but it is too short!

It's a very good Game of Thrones fanfic, and the plot doesn't follow the crowd. Don't be fooled by the few low-scoring reviews. The current plot doesn't have too many bad points, just keep your own pace.

Recently I started reading Game of Thrones again, so I came to find the fanfic. It's a pity that the author doesn't have enough writing skills to continue writing. Fortunately, the general plot has been told. Originally, this book should have been a good novel if it was written carefully and slowly expanded the plot and expanded the world view. It is a bit of a pity. It can be seen that the author does not know how to write about tactics, and relies on strength to tear everything apart. It is quite open, and it is acceptable in terms of integrating a little bit of the world view of The Lord of the Rings. It is quite toxic in some places, but overall it is a good read at the end. I can read it to pass the time.

To be honest, I really didn't expect this book to win the resurrection competition. I also like the plot very much, not bad (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡. However, the rating is a bit low, and the ending feels a bit rushed. After all, the plot of Middle-earth can clearly be written later. To be honest, it is a bit of a pity😔. It is a pity but the rating must be given. Five stars, given!

Just one thing I want to say is why he died, that Valyrian dragon [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Too little, not enough to see. You must hold on to the good grass from the Long family.

Come on author! You can write about Dance of Blood Dragons or you can write about some low-end magic or curses! But don't include gods in it. That will make it more difficult to write later.

The author has grasped the essence. Game of Thrones only looks good if it writes about dragons.

Although the beginning story is very average and the plot is a bit inconsistent, maybe Ray is the protagonist, so some of it makes sense.

It looks good, but I just hope there can be no female protagonist. You can have women around you, but you don't want a female protagonist. It's good for the male protagonist to become stronger alone.

The writing is really good, I don't think it should be voted for Pomodoro. There are really too few people watching Game of Thrones. I hope the author can continue to do more I feel like this is the only Game of Thrones novel that writes about dragon battles so well. The author also added some of his own ideas. The world view feels even bigger. I am afraid that during the orc war, an old man with a white beard and a scepter in his hand and wearing a white robe will appear and shout - "Yu~Shavaka"

The writing is very exciting, especially about the dragon and explains a lot of issues. Very exciting, a completely different Game of Thrones fanfic. I hope to see different content. I hope the author will update faster and more.

I can only say that I can't see it

It's uncomfortable in the front, but it's great in the back, but no matter how powerful one person is, he can't control multiple dragons.

Good looking, good luck to the author

Come on, keep at it ✊Perfect works do not exist, I hope the author can persevere.

There is no comparison, no pros and cons. This Game of Thrones book has its flaws and is already the number one Game of Thrones book on Tomato.

A very good Game of Thrones fic. They are all top-notch among Game of Thrones fics. Good cheers, author.

Write quickly, I will update the rest of the week. I will post 15 pictures in the remaining three days of this week and I will reward 88(σ≧∀≦)σ Ahaha, that's okay, next week is fine too [laughing], I will give you 10 more chapters next week too.

It's pretty, very cool

The first echelon of Game of Thrones in Tomato [Thoughts]

Read it in one go, pretty good

A little bit toxic, but overall it's okay

Perfect, just not segmented

Sometimes you can really get gold out of shit.

No. 8 Owes Chapter 1 No. 13 No. 2 Chapter 14 No. 2 Chapter 7 needs to be updated tomorrow