North American Patrol, the System Says I Am Cultivating Immortality

The cultivation techniques are not used much. I think the second level of Qi refining should be much stronger than ordinary people. The protagonist has not broken away from the thinking of ordinary people and still has the behavioral patterns of ordinary people. Come on, the author! ! Demon cultivators should thrive in a country where guns are free, even if you are a good person! In the gang fight, it is suggested that the Ten Thousand Soul Banner is a good magic weapon. Demonic cultivator! ! ! ! ! !

Shengliu: He is a demon cultivator, but he only has a name. Cultivation can make you stronger, but only a little bit stronger Spells do damage, but not much The magic weapon is awesome, but the fragments of the Youth Edition were damaged in the battle, so they can only be used to hold things for the time being. The elixir is very awesome. I have taken more than 30 Qi Training Level 2, and after more than 100 chapters, it is still Level 2. So far, the output mainly relies on 9mm. All in all, the book is good, but one star will be deducted for the title. Just read it as an American police article.

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Who says demon cultivators can't be good people? Written by The Attendant of the Wrath Road I like to read all the topics related to the American variety show, and this book has a good beginning, which is very in line with my taste. Goldfinger is more interesting. The protagonist has a basic moral bottom line and what he does is very free and easy. I can accept it if the show adds other supernatural elements, and it may even be more interesting. But I don't understand the protagonist's appearance, fighting and handling style of vampires, and I don't like it either. It's not that you can't appear. It's just that the protagonist seems so cautious, but gives up the gun, and then what? Force a 50-50 split. The level has been lowered out of thin air, and the wantonness of laughing and scolding has been lost, which has lowered the pattern. About four to four and a half stars, New Book Seedlings is rounded up.

I read it in one go. The beginning was relatively ordinary, with the same old plot and clichés. The writing got better and better the further it went. By the time I got to Chapters 8 and 90, the ordinary laugh-out-loud cases in the background were very well written, and there were also many stand-out stories about various supporting actors. There are more than 200,000 words without any major upgrades or copy changes. The writing power does have two brushes. As for the slow and refreshing pacing, I can only say that it's a matter of opinion. After reading novels for decades, I can still tell the difference between good and bad. If I keep this book, it will at least be food +

It's unexpectedly good-looking. The title of the book is not great, and the rating is not high, but reading this book is like watching an American TV series. The key point is that other novels may take dozens or hundreds of chapters to write a story, but this novel has several chapters interspersed with a story, just like in some police dramas, one episode tells a story and the protagonist is interspersed. It is quite good for shaping the main characters.

It looks okay. There is currently no kill kill kill. It feels like the daily life of a Chinese policeman, like watching a drama with an Oriental-looking protagonist. Rating three and a half stars. Good weather, The harvest is plentiful, Sufficient food and clothing, People are happy, The country is peaceful and the people are safe, World peace. Namo Amitabha

As a demonic cultivator, he is very stable and will never go crazy. He describes things in detail, just like the person involved and will not miss any details. If he can summarize it in three sentences, he will not just say one sentence.

The number of words in a single chapter is nearly 5k, updated twice a day, so why do you need a bicycle?

If you want to watch Cultivation of Immortals, don't watch it. If you want to read salted fish daily writing, you can read it, it's not bad. The name is wrong. Instead of adding the element of cultivating demons, it should be better if we add some extraordinary elements and hang it in daily writing.

The writing is pretty good. In the early stage, the patrol solves the case, and in the middle stage, the demons and ghosts are laid out. The plot is relatively smooth. The only thing is that there is too little written. I look forward to the follow-up.

Great, why is the score so low?

It's quite fresh, give me a cheating tip

Brother, please write quickly [smile]

The book is okay, but sometimes the scene suddenly changes, and if you don't pay attention to the book, you may miss it.

The more I read, the more I feel like it's a good book. The title of the book doesn't affect the content [laughs] [full]

British style, very nice. I usually see too many domestic styles, so try it for a different taste.

The writing is smooth, although there are no major breaking points, but the advantage is that there are no blocking points, and plug-ins do not occupy a dominant position. The novel is rated 8 points

The writing is quite good, but the change is sudden. I thought it was an urban novel, and suddenly it turned into a fantasy novel, but it felt good, full marks.

It's rare to see a book with fluent writing in recent years, and this one is written with great skill! Delicate description and hidden metaphor! I particularly like this type!

A pretty good book

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Great writing, keep it up!

Quite serious actually

Very nice, very nice.

Very good, I like it very much

The plot is exciting and the writing is smooth.

It's pretty and interesting.

Well enough! It's okay to take a look

Good, good, good, wonderful