People in the City Are Bound to the System of Cultivating Immortals

The book is a good one. I like to read this type of book the most. It makes people feel very immersive, but one suggestion is the author. Can you reduce the plot of the fat man? It would be best if the protagonist no longer has any contact with him after reading too many books. The main characters all have fat brothers, which makes people uncomfortable to watch. Also, I hope that the author will not let the protagonist become an inexplicable brother, nor give the inexplicable brother any help in cultivating immortality. It would be better if the protagonist and the heroine interact more. There is also no need to have the poisonous point of letting the brothers cultivate to immortality in the later stage. You can let the protagonist's woman cultivate to immortality. I hope the author can adopt this.

It's like the kind of urban immortality writing 8 years ago, e-sports live streaming, the old man in the park (classic routine), ancient martial arts cultivation, campus, making money, picking up girls, the whole pot is a hodgepodge. However, the overall logic is relatively smooth and bland, and there is no poisonous point like the villain's jumping face and taunting.

Nice. There are many female protagonists, it's just fun to cultivate immortality in the city without thinking. The protagonist Jin Dan is already invincible and is not afraid of doing anything. The most important thing is that you have to finish it after 100 chapters, unlike other urban campus immortality novels that have hundreds of chapters all because of high school (there are also ones that set the age of 18, but they still keep pulling.). This book, which is set as a freshman in high school, is really a must-read. It should be considered the best among the urban campus cultivators I have read. I hope it will be better in the future. [Laugh]

It's so cool, so cool Have you never seen a woman? A dual cultivation method is only beneficial to one party. What is the purpose of this? Is it weakening one's own strength? Pure Tang

I have to say that this is the best novel I have ever read. The plot is compact and there is no delay at all. The plot is exactly what it is supposed to be. There is no nonsense at all. I personally think it is very interesting. I hope the author will update more [laughs][laughs]

Very good-looking, a daily immortal cultivation flow, with a little bit of poison (I can tolerate it). I haven't seen anyone similar to Gu Wu so far, and I hope the author won't write about it later. Some people comment that the protagonist is too pretentious, but if you had the ability to be the protagonist, would you stop pretending?

Okay, overall it doesn't look like it could be written by a new author. Although the novel has many classics within it, the author has perfectly avoided those shortcomings. However, one thing that is not very good is that the exciting plots feel too fast. It is as if I am already happy before I have a good feeling. It makes me feel a little unsure whether I should be happy now. I feel that the overall rhythm is fast and relaxed, and it is an excellent short story. However, the story is rather empty, which makes me feel like I have read it through my mind, but can't remember anything. The overall logic of the novel is not strong, and it would be uncomfortable to read it if I read it seriously. The most important thing is that there are too few updates. I usually keep reading this kind of book and read it again, and there is nothing else.

The content of "Urban Cultivation" is to show your sainthood in front of people from all walks of life. With this theme, it must be fun, so you should lose your mind and read it, but in fact the content is not that brainless. It is said to be slow-paced, but in fact it is concise and capable, and it feels like it is more fast-paced. Chapter 105 starts from Chapter 105, which is generally more urban and not focused on cultivating immortals, but there is a main line of resurrecting the parents. Just to mention it, the male protagonist's parents are also orphans [face covering], and the buffs are superimposed. It's okay. I also read the book reviews and generally found them to be mostly positive. I saw that those who had opinions covered everything, so it was very comprehensive. This book is all about pretending to be in front of others, otherwise who would be happy to read it? The overall quality and the number of front-loading 13 items are also always online, which is good and continues to be good. It is very comfortable and refreshing. If I insist on saying it is not good, it can only be because the male protagonist's methods of cultivating immortals have gradually been exposed to the public, but it cannot be said that it is not bad, after all, he almost destroyed Xiaoli.

Anchor Anchor I am your ten-year-old fan [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's been a long time since I've read a book about cultivating immortality in the city. I think after reading "The Perfect Campus Madman", "The Innocent Overlord of Campus" and "The Perfect Mad God in Campus", there were almost no urban campus novels about cultivating immortality that I could read. This book reminded me of the novels about cultivating immortality in urban campuses that I had read back then. It was so refreshing.

I've finished reading them all, it's great. Invincible but humane, write whatever comes to mind, this should be the true meaning of urban immortality writing, instead of constantly upgrading and changing maps, which is too boring. This book is already invincible now, but it always seems interesting. This is the reason. You don't need to dominate the world, you just need to write whatever comes to mind, because the protagonist can do everything, and I am the only one who can do it. This is how I should write. Don't keep pretending, I am a native dog, I love reading this book [laugh][laugh][laugh]

I feel it's pretty good, I'm the only one who can do it. The female protagonist is actually pretty good too. I'm not crazy about accepting it blindly. I don't comment much, but I've actually read all of these works. There's nothing wrong with the male protagonist's character. Overall, I feel good.

It's a good daily novel. The plot is bland, but in today's novels where people fight and kill all day long, it's still short enough to read. However, it's best to update this kind of daily novel more than once a day. Normally, two updates a day will make people less interested in following it.

The point of this book is to have fun. It's so exciting. I think it's pretty good-looking, please come on and update it soon! It's cool not to bother with the details. [Angry] Although I always show off, it still makes me happy [Adoration]

Taking off the skin, there are nothing more than two hundred and six bones, flesh, blood, dirt, hair and intestines. When put on clothes, there are eighteen thousand features. Guess the human heart while alive, and look at the bones after death. Seeing a beautiful person as white bones makes me have no desires. Seeing white bones as a beautiful person makes me fearless. I have no desires and no fear. This can be said to be the appearance of all living beings. The appearances of all living beings are all false, and they may or may not have appearances. No sign of me, no sign of anyone, There is no sign of living beings, no sign of life-spans, The red and pink skulls are all made of white bones and flesh. All appearances are not appearances, and all appearances are false.

It's not bad. Anyone who doesn't have obsessive-compulsive disorder can watch it [laughing] The first one looked okay, but in the later one, it turned out that I wasn't alone. Even if it wasn't, the protagonist has no parents, but where are the parents of the heroines? And how will he face his parents if he lives forever and his appearance remains unchanged? You can really start dancing. Either there is a one-man approach, or all the people involved are cultivating immortality, which makes the people more contradictory.

The recruitment of girls is okay, and the plot is also good. I hope there won't be another spiritual energy recovery routine in the future that everyone practices.

I feel like this book is very well written, but I feel like it was written a little faster. Mainly because I forgot to rate it, alas. I feel a bit ashamed of the author. I couldn't find a place with ratings for a long time, but I just found it these two days.

IQ points are added online, and some of the stories are also very moderate. I feel that the first part is very good. I have read some contents of the table of contents later, but I haven't read it yet. I feel that it may not be in line with my opinion. The first part of the story is really good. I haven't skipped a chapter. However, when commenting on a novel, when I click on my homepage to view the comments on this novel, why does it show that this book is under review? Can I still continue watching? [What]

Let me comment, military training and fighting, the old man in the park, even Tai Chi, the old man has a beautiful granddaughter

The plot is quite interesting, but some of the words are unnatural, but overall it's still interesting, personal review

It's okay. In reality, there are people who are so defiant and have been targeted by the country for a long time. After all, this is a novel. It's all pretense and slaps in the face from behind

It looks very cool and not so unrealistic. Just change the name of the king and it will be perfect. The name of the king really looks weird.

Still good, but too classic for me personally to fully embrace, so here I go.

Come on, it's really good. It's a good book that I highly recommend.

Not bad, it's what I want to see

Well written, good luck to the author

This book is really beautiful

A very good novel

Good-looking, super good-looking