Life in the Alley: I’m the Lin Family’s Daughter

The characters' actions are logically logical, not only retaining the core characteristics of the original characters, but also exploring deeper character dimensions through new perspectives. The interaction between the narrative subject and the original character is natural and smooth, and there is no sense of inconsistency in forced grafting. Although the "brain storage" design at the beginning of each chapter reflects the author's interactive awareness, it has the problem of interrupting the immersion of reading. This type of creative notes is more suitable to be placed at the end of a chapter or in a relevant area of ​​the work, which can maintain the coherence of the text without losing the original intention of communicating with readers.

The content is actually very good, but are the big words written in big letters brother and sister or sister and brother? I can always see it written in the article that she was supposed to be the younger sister, but turned out to be the elder sister, and she was supposed to be the elder brother, but she was called younger brother. And which one is bigger, the protagonist or Zhuang Xiaoting? I hope the author can change it. (Can be deleted if struck by lightning)

Very good. The plot and characters are logical and the characters are three-dimensional. There is no OOC at the moment. I like 😘