[Original God] Ten [Time Travel] Ten [Daily] Ten [Love] Ten [Battle] Ten [Fu Fu] Ten [Slow Tempo]
In an accident, Hao Ling and his roommate traveled to the world of Teyvat and gained extraordinary power and a free-range system. But he also became separated from his roommate. When he found them one after another, he found that there seemed to be no travelers in the world, and how should he face the crises in various countries? Or how to make up for the regret?
Reader comments
On the whole, it's good. The plot is smooth, there are many jokes, and the rhetorical techniques are used naturally. However, there are some language errors and the sentences are not fluent, but the plot is smooth. I blindly guess that the author failed in Chinese.
On the whole, it's good. The plot is smooth, there are many jokes, and the rhetorical techniques are used naturally. However, there are some language errors and the sentences are not fluent, but the plot is smooth. I blindly guess that the author failed in Chinese.
Good luck, finally on the right track