Ashes of the Long Night

The book is really good, but the updates are too slow. It doesn't feel like a mindless and refreshing article, nor does it feel like it's being mysterious. The most touching thing is the characters in it, especially the current heroine Gardenia. This character is simply, I don't know how to describe it. It feels a bit like my partner. He does many things that I have experienced in life. He is like a living person, a person with a soul, and he is really good.

It should be a female video. There are more emotional dramas, fewer and simpler battles. The biggest problem is probably that the male protagonist's character is a bit confusing. However, it is reasonable and there is a probability that it will happen. In terms of plot, the writing power feels a bit lacking, and the plot feels occasionally abrupt. Finally, in terms of character growth, the protagonist's character feels more indecisive as time goes on. This is a shortcoming of the character. Since it is growth, it should be improved. In particular, whether the male protagonist understands the relationship between responsibilities and obligations. The emotional development of the characters can be polished more in future novels. Friend is true after suffering is a classic, but it never goes out of style. Pay attention to the audience's sense of reading. If it is an important person, pay attention to more shaping and detailing. In terms of layout, small details can be separated into separate paragraphs to make them more readable.

It is very exciting, especially Shura Field. Each one has its own reasons, unwillingness and choices. There is no right or wrong, only the sparks generated by the collision of various ideas. The protagonist is caught in the middle and is neither strong nor weak. No matter what choice he makes, he will hurt the other party. The complex emotional relationship and the complex cause and effect make the protagonist deeply confused.

It's really good. I can feel the author's intention and respect for my IQ. The writing style seems to be the type I like. It's not like other cool articles that are all the same. What touches me the most is the characterization of the characters. It's so vivid that it's just a low-level plot. It's chapter 80 now, and I haven't accepted any of them yet. Come on, I want to see how the leading heroine Gardenia handles the other heroines.

The writing is not bad. If you are willing to read it, you can give it a try. It is best not to skip chapters. Otherwise, it will be very confusing. There is a part in the middle where the cause and effect are confused. The protagonist and his senior sister want to smooth out the cause and effect. As a result, the future protagonist appears. Generally speaking, the writing is not bad. I forgot at the beginning that the protagonist was 15 years old when he appeared. The only bad point is that the protagonist should stick to his heart, but the protagonist is only 18 years old, so it is not considered a bad point.

The plot writing, framework, and rhythm are all very comfortable. The characters are clearly created, and it's rare to see such quality films, especially those with this kind of appetite. When are you going to get on the expressway? Harmful.

The writing is quite good, although I haven't seen a single comment after reading dozens of chapters. If you have nothing to do, just write like this, and wait until the new book issue of three to four hundred chapters has passed.

I read Chapter 20 and I feel very good. Although the beginning is a bit fancy, I feel very comfortable starting from the fifth chapter. Also, Gardenia, the heroine, has no facial makeup and has a lot of personality.

I read it all night long. It was so enjoyable. The characters were flesh and blood, which made me feel that I was going through the same experience. It was not the usual feeling of reading a book. I hope the update will be faster.

Do you know how uncomfortable I felt when I saw the label single heroine? Fortunately, fortunately