Daily Fantasy: Adventures of Eastern Characters

Xingyu, Xingyu, every morning when you wake up Xingyu, Xingyu, there is a character waiting to turn into, Marisa, so cute. So cute It's not very cool to be a little devil. Not too handsome, Xueling is your good partner. Let me help you. Jacob is the boy you like, Jacob you are amazing. [Shy]

From the direction of a new author, the idea is good, but the writing style needs to be improved, and many places are a bit too taken for granted. The idea of ​​unit drama is a good one, but from the perspective of novels, it doesn't last long. Dongfang currently has more than 200 characters in total, which means that this book will not exceed 300 pictures. The connection between the plot can be continued to be optimized. There are currently no big problems during the holidays. The occasional OOC can also be ignored (it can also be regarded as a second and third setting). But after all, you only have 2,000 words per page, so it is not easy to change. In short, the idea is good, but there is still a lot of room for improvement in character design and plot connection. (Considering from the perspective of self-written articles, it is already excellent) Come on [laughing]

It's okay to just take a look P. S: I went back and watched a few episodes of Martin's Morning

The author may have some shortcomings in writing experience, but at least he can divide it into paragraphs, which makes me feel that his writing is better than many cute authors. The content is not bad, but the area where the protagonist moves is only the school, which is too small. It would be better if the map can be expanded later, but writing a large map will test the author's writing skills. It is actually very good now. I look forward to the author's progress.

I'm not used to the first person, can I change it to the third person? @136

How awesome🤓, come on, Xingbao is so cute🤤

Just like the author said, just watch it as a unit drama. Author, you'd better say it in the introduction

It looks good. The protagonist won't be able to turn into all the oriental characters in the end, right?

Wouldn't the author be done writing all the characters? (Laughs) Remember to bring the characters from Touhou's latest game and Ruiling too (laughs)

There are some things that are not common sense, but don't be bound by common sense

Rarely seen oriental fanfiction

Very interesting, good luck to the author