Journey to the West: I Am the Rat King

To be honest, after reading it, I can feel that this book is actually very good. Although it is a relatively old-fashioned story about past lives and present lives, the protagonist is well portrayed. The content, emotions and main plot are different from just love and grudges. The heroine in this book has no love brain at the beginning and is very scheming. The content does not have too many complicated chapters. Many past lives are concise and clear, and they cannot be written in large chapters. The final ending is also very good. There is no absolute right or wrong for each character. Most of the characters are good people.

This setting is so delicious. The ambiguous relationship between the Third Prince and Bai Bai is so well written. They just love the delicious cookies and delicious rice! Bai Bai is smart and has tricks, which makes the third prince's brother lose his mind. The devil in the world will also put away his sharp edges for the sake of his sweetheart [smirking] the little couple's daily lovemaking is so delicious [shy] Nezha's The setting is also very good, with both the arrogance and self-confidence of young people and the indifferent mentality after going through thousands of sails. The road to becoming a god has never been smooth sailing, but fortunately, after going round and round, we became a couple of gods and immortals [Sending Hearts]

It looks good, I have to say it. Her logic is basically sound. However, the protagonist himself has a deep mind and quick thinking. Now that I see that there is a plan, I am relieved that it is not a simple sadomasochism. How should I put it? As long as he can come to terms with himself, his character will not collapse. Personally, I still think it's pretty good-looking. It's going very smoothly, Prince Lotus.

Overall it's pretty good, except for the fact that the author suddenly added the past and present life and tortured it a lot [laughing and crying] [covering face] I feel like it has an 8-point rating because some people are giving negative reviews because the female protagonist is the original protagonist, which is a bit extreme. Nowadays, there are quite a lot of settings where time travel is the original owner (many of them are superimposed with amnesia and forgetting that it was fetal transmigration). My favorite part is the scene where Nezha turns into a lazy sheep. It's quite cute, but it's a pity that I didn't write more about it. Then the heroine's mirror can travel to other small worlds, so I went to Nezha's world in the Demon Boy cartoon. Didn't I promise them to go back and watch it? I feel like I can write more extras. The little Nezha, the Demon Boy, is also very cute.

It's very beautiful. The setting of the heroine is also good. She was transformed from the essence and blood of Tathagata. It's not an exaggeration to say that she is the daughter of the Buddha. She is also very popular and gets along well with gods and monsters. Later, she became a Jiejiao. She is a kind of growth-type heroine. It is worth watching. It is linked to Nezha's Demon Boy. She is the best fanfic of Nezha that I have read so far.

It's a very good and serious article. My personal feeling is that except for the previous life part in the middle, which is really a bit bloody, the other parts are great, especially when Nezha and Bai Bai are having an ambiguous relationship, the corner of the mouth is raised, which is really fine! The backgrounds of the various gods and goddesses who appear are also quite clear, and the final proposal scene feels very solemn, which makes me, the protagonist, very happy. I feel like my daughter is being respected and my son-in-law is getting more and more satisfied, hahaha. Ps, the article has a tight pace, and the bloody pictures are not annoying, but it makes me a little dizzy at the moment. But in fact, after those few pictures, you will find that it's not a big deal, the main line is clear, and it's so sweet! Highly recommended to watch~

This is so pretty. The white rat demon is very ambitious and not very aggrieved. It's just that he likes to act anytime and anywhere~ The relationship between Bai Bai and Bai Jiayi is also very good🥰. I wonder if there will be a happy story between Bai Bai and Bai Jiayi in the future hahahaha Bai Bai and Li San are so close to each other, hahahahahahaha, I was wondering why the author's eyes in the middle of the description were weird, it turns out that's what they looked like.

It's quite interesting. The plot is very novel. It's the first time I've seen it written like this. It's very attractive to me. I was a little confused about the inner demon, so I went back and read it again. You need to be careful when reading this book, otherwise you might not understand it. Overall, it's pretty good. If the author's logic doesn't break down, I'll follow it until the end.

Everything else is pretty good, except for the part about the heroine's previous life that confused me a little bit, but I really, really, really, really, really, really liked the pull between the heroine and Nezha written by the author. I really laughed out loud when I watched it. It's super beautiful.

It's so good. I hope it's a sweet story. It's not too twisty. Why do you remember the last life? It's a tonic. Please keep it sweet.

The writing is good, but the writing style is sometimes slightly lacking. For example, when writing about Nezha's domineering past life, if the description here were changed, or in another way, it wouldn't have that bloody taste, but would have that kind of forced love.

Skipping the modern part actually doesn't affect the reading of the article. The point about the past life is really a highlight. If you don't mind, don't read it. Nezha abused the heroine in the past life, and the crematorium in this life is not very satisfactory to me. Hee hee, I'm a local dog, I just like to see men hit a big wall for the heroine (although it doesn't fit Nezha's character)

I was looking forward to it at first, but then I read it as if I was reading the novel in Journey to the West disguise.

Personally, I think it's pretty good. I like the character setting of the heroine. The chapters in Nezha's movie are a bit unnecessary and feel like lazy behavior.

In fact, this novel is well written, especially the past life connection. Don't worry about the bad reviews. I think you wrote it very well. I look forward to your second one. Come on! I support you, it's written in a fan fiction, it's good, I appreciate it🫶🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰🫰

The author's writing style is very good, his descriptions are also very delicate, and he writes with great care. But it's not even five stars in my mind, mainly because the setting of the heroine's previous life is a bit off-putting [face covering] because I prefer simple sweet stories, and the author initially created the heroine as a pure 21st century girl character, but then suddenly she created a background of the previous life. The heroine is a white-haired rat Ben Rat, and I didn't accept it well [laughing and crying]. Usually when I encounter this kind of situation, I will most likely abandon the article, but I can continue to read this article and finish it. The author must have something interesting hahaha [laughing] I recommend everyone to read it, it is quite good

This is my first time writing, just write a simple sentence. Overall, this book is worth reading and it is really well written. The content is like a detective decrypting a mystery, trying to uncover the truth step by step - it turns out that Bai Weishuang was originally from Journey to the West, and had a love affair with Nezha. As far as love is concerned, it can also be said to be a model love, never giving up. The author also cleverly integrated Nezha from the Devil Boy's Coming into the World, two Nezha, two mythological stories, and two endings. It's still very good [like][like][like]

It's pretty good, but it's a pity that the chapters are a bit short. It's pretty good, but the chapters are a bit short, and some of the content is confusing.

I think the author's writing style is very good, quite delicate and interesting. Except for the modern part, I like everything else very much🥰. The story of the golden-nosed white-haired rat spirit and Nezha in Journey to the West is very novel and interesting, and the author also wrote the details and emotions very, very well. I highly recommend this novel. If there are people like me who can't accept modern plots, you can skip it. The plot behind it is also very exciting. [Like][Like][Like]

Happy ending, very interesting. Except for the past and present life in the middle, which is a bit abrupt (but not shocking), everything else is a masterpiece. Five-star praise (*≧∪≦)👍🏻

No, why did you suddenly start to abuse?

Not bad, quite novel

The author is great, it's really good-looking

It's very interesting, and the emotional line is also very good. Great support for the author＾0＾~

It's really super pretty. The heroine is so good and I love her so much. This novel by the author was so exciting that I kept screaming inside. Author, how many words are you going to write to finish? Can you write more? I feel like this novel is my favorite on Tomato right now.

The writing is okay, but there is a part in the middle that inserts a past life story inexplicably, and the twist is very abrupt, but the author seems to have a good temper, and he can actually come back to his words, so I give it a good review

I've finished reading the novel, it's pretty good, and the heroine's setting is quite interesting.

Good-looking [Send Heart] The relationship between Nezha and Li Jing is in line with the plot in Journey to the West. The heroine is smart and scheming. The plot of the past and present life also foreshadows the heroine's transformation, allowing her to find the path in her life.

It looks good, the author should work hard to write the words [smile][smile][smile]

Well done, really nice to look at