Tokyo: My Youth Has No Fixed Formula

(Watch it with your head in mind) This brother's book has a sense of indifference, which is very fresh and refined. At least among all the novels I have read, the style of this book is great (the male protagonist is super handsome). Let's talk about other things. Compared with those who directly write the "simulation system" on the surface, the setting of "Sword Spirit" in this novel is great. Although the ending can't be guessed, I feel that the protagonist's attitude is very supportive of "will a ten-year relationship really brew into love?" Therefore, the protagonist with this concept is not affected by emotion, but chooses to let time dilute everything. Although it is a bit heartless, it is the best choice (in my opinion). The look and feel is great, I hope the author will continue to persevere! [Blow kiss]

Chapter 52: The male protagonist - a classic love-sluggish harem male protagonist, whose advantage is that his strength is MAX. The heroines - each possesses unique skills (.) The plot - is the daily and systemic events in which the male and female protagonists interact. Disadvantage (personal feeling): The first one is that after clearly completing a system mission through Kill Penetration, there was no news after that (it seems that the person who was clearly mentioned was the senior sister from the Kyudo Club) and then it was forced to be written as one who didn't know and the other who didn't remember. [What are you writing if you don't guide the strategy (laughs)] (Of course, it may be that I take it for granted, but there is actually another girl who has been ten years old); the second one is the incident of a genius who turns into a cat. In a setting where fantasy events are obviously not common, a female protagonist with such a strong receptive ability appears, and then the male protagonist can discuss changing into a cat in private next time even after meeting her a few times? Nerves. (I think it's a lot more reasonable if you write that the protagonist turns into a cat after being taken in by his classmates. The first point may be that I am nitpicking, but the transformation into a cat is really weird. I still give you five stars, after all, it looks pretty good in daily life.

The author's writing is good, and it's good for everyday writing. The flavor of the light novel is quite positive, but the problem is that it is a bit too positive, especially the male protagonist "turtle man". There is no cuckold plot, but the protagonist is very soft, and his fighting power is very soft; he is also very soft towards the female characters, and he can bear it no matter how others make fun of him. He would only be tough with the senior who treated him the best. This book can be said to be a typical proof of why light novels are not popular on the Chinese Internet. This kind of literature is still suitable for awkward Japanese people, but it is not enjoyable enough for repressed Chinese people. I originally wanted to give it two stars, but I think the author is still very good. Although it is far from five stars, four stars are definitely there.

It's good to watch, that's why 31 chapters of a journey to another world are inserted into the plot. Isn't this the daily life of youth? What does it mean? I almost forgot about the previous daily life and skipped it directly [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Personally, I think it's okay, as long as the author doesn't write anything poisonous Alas, the fireworks display is disappointing [face covering] If it weren't for my senior sister, I really wouldn't be able to watch it.

It's a very good novel. I checked it out once before but didn't read it. At that time, the rating was a bit too low. I was worried that it was a running book. I checked it again today to check the ratings. I finished it in one sitting. The novel has a strong flavor and the writing style is acceptable. It didn't feel boring. Each heroine has a distinct personality and the daily writing is also good. However, the male protagonist's oral habits in the early stage are very strange. I saw that the author mentioned it specifically and thought it was foreshadowing, but I haven't seen it so far. Except for some problems with my mouth habit and the details of two incidents, everything else is pretty good.

Full marks for the first ninety chapters. The writing style is very unique. It is interesting and also deeply depicts the character of the male protagonist. This character is also interesting. The character image is very three-dimensional. He is not the conventional tool-man protagonist. However, when I read more than ninety chapters, there was a plot that I didn't like very much. It depicts the male protagonist partying with two good brothers. Among them, one of the male protagonist's good brothers took in a girl - a girl who was homeless due to family problems and ended up staying in his house. There is not much description of this girl in the previous article. It only mentioned that her original grades were very good, but it was hinted that due to family changes, her grades declined, so she formed a two-person study group with the male protagonist's good friend. I don't always like to see too much emphasis on the emotional drama of supporting characters in harem novels. When I think about it carefully, they are all daily novels-if it is fantasy, I don't worry about this so much. In daily writing, there is a lack of twists and turns. I lack a sense of involvement and interest in the supporting characters. Many authors deal with it, and the emotional drama of the supporting characters will not promote the plot. If it can be used to promote the plot, the tolerance may be higher, but not much. What I want to see is only the scenes between the male protagonist and the female protagonist - if a female character has a lot of scenes, I will think of her as one of the female protagonists. If she is not the female protagonist, then she does not deserve to have so many scenes and usurps the scenes that originally belong to the female protagonist. In fact, I can bear it after seeing this, but I don't know if it will get out of hand later. Then, all the male protagonist's good gay friends will be assigned a girlfriend, and their emotional development will be described in great detail. In the chapter comments, some people also mentioned the problem of gathering CP, but they were besieged. Some people asked, "This is youth and love" and "Since you don't want to see it, how did you see it here?" Le, would anyone read a novel just for the love story of a supporting character? Maybe, but I'm not When I see a single heroine, I block it. When I see a group portrait, I block it. When I see a harem article that devotes a lot of space to the emotional scenes of the supporting characters, I run away.

Classic neon harem comic with a dull male protagonist, but it's not a complete escape at least.

I feel that Hinata and her sister can be optimized, the cat plot and the different world dungeon can be optimized, and the Japanese players can add the senior sister, her mother and teacher. There are no problems with the other writing and character portrayal. It is a good work, except for the introduction of the system. The new author deserves encouragement, come on [Like]

I should have a registered permanent residence in Shanghai, go to a private high school in Shanghai, and my parents work overseas for a long time. In the morning, my sister crawls beside the bed and wakes me up to eat the breakfast she made by myself. When I go out, my cute childhood sweetheart and classmate are waiting for me to go to school. The new eldest transfer student in the class was my deskmate. She would pass small notes to me in class. The arrogant Juru Discipline Committee member would adjust my tie with a blushing face. The beautiful teacher from the health department would ask me about my relationship status with a smirk on her face. After school, there would be cute juniors waiting for me in the department where there were only ghost club members. They called me senpai with a happy face. The expressionless student council president approached me and smiled at the corner of my mouth in the name of checking the department. After school, the hot girls from the girls' school next door enthusiastically waited for me at the school gate to sing karaoke, and then they became jealous of the childhood sweethearts and classmates next to me. I took a shower at night and bumped into my younger sister who was getting dressed in the bathroom. My sister, who was drunk all night and was a socialite, came to the bed and hugged me and said that she couldn't get married and wanted to spend the rest of her life with me..."

How to put it, a person's fantasy world. Fantasy is really good, unlike reality, the word reality seems so cruel. For example, there are several settings. The body is extremely important, as is beauty, IQ, and morality, just like upgrading and fighting monsters. Sex is extremely avoided and people are isolated. But it is exactly in line with the impact of group consciousness on individuals and the individual's unconscious resistance to avoid the outside world to gain a sense of security. After all, in reality, consciousness cannot take the lead. Genes and various hormone changes in the brain must survive, reproduce, and survive by any means necessary. When I was weak, I took the initiative to act cute and pitiful in order to survive. Taking the initiative to show weakness is to gain the mercy of the strong, to gain help from the strong, and to be taught and fished by the strong, in order to survive. After it is over, the brain takes the initiative to erase the memory of this period and end the debt, in order to survive. In order to survive, in order to desire a sense of security, to alleviate the fear of death, in order to fight against the meaninglessness of life, in order to alleviate the doubts about the existence of our own lives, we endow emotions with special meanings, unique to our individual abilities. For example, a clear goal that can be touched by hand, and immediate feedback after reaching it. This seems to be called flow, constantly giving back, constantly summarizing, looking for problems, solving problems, looking for needs and solving pain points. Continuously, since the end of education cannot give us goals, then we set our own goals, just like doing tasks, such as appearance, figure, health, skin, career, aura. The process of chasing goals can relieve anxiety, alleviate the meaninglessness of life, and alleviate the fear of death. After all, in reality, everyone is an isolated island, and everyone avoids looking for attractants of personal fantasies on the Internet. When you are under the pressure of survival, you don't have the opportunity to think, but your mind will be more relaxed. There is really nothing to do, so start again

I came from the last book, but it was a pity that chapters 17 to 34 were blocked [I almost cried]. It was the first plot extraction event. It was really written very well, especially the role of the wife was amazing [send heart][send heart][send heart] I read hundreds of chapters later, and I really can't forget the lady in chapter 34, "crouching under the cherry blossom tree, trembling fingers to enter the password to unlock. In a picture with a star, a woman holds the air, smiling so much that the falling cherry blossoms eclipse." She really gives me a better feeling than my senior sister (at least in the first 70 chapters), it's really like "You are the one who gave birth to me before you were born, and I gave birth to you before you were born" So, please forgive the humble yearning of a reader who is completely captured by the Madam's charm [I'm about to cry] If... Just if... In a certain plot in the future, there is a slight possibility (such as a "patch" that reveals that the Madam and the heroine are not related by blood), for this once so sincere and touching emotion, a love that is as weak as dust can begin. Love is even better [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] It's not just the senior who has missed 10 years, she is also the same. The senior can be said to be obsessed, she has really liked the male protagonist for 10 years [almost crying] I really don't want her to have to bless them as a mother-in-law when the male protagonist and senior kiss under the gorgeous cherry blossom tree in the future, it is too cruel to her [crying] (personal opinion)

How to say it? Reading this book always gives me a strong sense of déjà vu. Miss Kujo, Kiyonokami, Toru Watanabe. But Crow's writing is so good. Still can't compare. But it still looks good

It's okay. On a platform like Tomato, it can be considered to be above average. It's estimated to be around 9 points after the push.

I feel like it's well written, and the most important thing is that the combat is fun [laughing]

Le, this book definitely has a potential of 9.5. The author's character creation is extremely careful. Each character is very distinct and the characteristics of different people are perfectly highlighted. You can even identify who he is through a sentence in daily chat. The writing style is like a light novel. The rhythm is very comfortable. The weight of daily love and event battles is clearly divided. Although the writing is not gorgeous, it is enough to fully express the emotion and depth. I like you, the author [laughs]

It's very delicate, and the sweetness in the ordinary text is so comfortable, but the extraordinary setting is a mess. I don't know what I'm thinking, but I have been writing about my happy life with Kyoko recently. Is this the right thing? More emotional scenes, the writing is much better than fighting, and Higaru is still more about daily emotions. Lord, it's like Crow's book, the extraordinary content is only to serve the emotional life, where will it start to save the world? I hope the author will work hard. The rating is a little lower now, but the update speed and quality are completely worthy of 5 stars [Love][Love][Love][Love]

It is said that the part about turning into a cat is poisonous. Maybe it is because of the different perspective. Some people have high combat power for the protagonist and have arrogant expectations for the protagonist. I don't feel much about it. The casual writing style is quite comfortable for me. The impression given to me by the protagonist's combat power is not that I have combat power and am invincible, but that I have combat power but I want to experience the beauty of youth. When something destroys this beauty, I will have the best combat power to solve the problem and make the perpetrator regret it, no matter who it is. I haven't watched the fireworks display yet, so let's see if it's poisonous or not. I really like writing like this.

This rating is for the first 70 chapters, which are very well written. This rating is for after chapter 70, it's a little bit broken

It's well written, beautiful, love to read, read more, and beg for quick updates. The writing is delicate, and the characters are distinct and each has its own characteristics. Especially the control of the story is not delayed at all. After one event, it continues to the next without any violation. There are clues in the middle to connect [Send my heart][Send my heart]

The setting and plot are great, and the butterfly effect brought about by the first simulation makes people want to keep reading. The description is close to a line drawing, and the heroine is full of stereotypes and lacks vitality. For example, Gono has the mentality of a child, while Kusaka is calm and a little sinister. The writing style, to use the words in the article, is indifferent, and it feels a bit like "Quartet of Green Plums in the Snow Country".

The new author has written very well to this level, retaining the characteristics of Japanese light novels to a large extent. As for some readers' comments about the protagonist, I personally feel that the author did not control it well or did not realize how to write a daily novel plus a harem novel? [Thinking] [Thinking] A harem novel should have the look of a harem novel. It doesn't matter if you have more delicate emotions, but a harem novel should have the look of a harem novel. The relationship between the heroine and the protagonist should have a breakthrough, and don't describe it in detail in hundreds of chapters. The progress between the two is too slow and the rhythm is too procrastinating. Up to now, there have been more than 600 protagonists. In fact, there is only one Maki-senpai and Gono whose relationship is confirmed. The others are always pulling. Therefore, the author's character creation is very good, and some emotional descriptions are particularly delicate and real. However, the overall rhythm is not well controlled and needs more practice. (It's over. I was influenced by Yu and started to comment. [Cover face][cover face][cover face]) I hope the author can go further, keep up the good work!

It's good-looking, the protagonist is very strong, the character is indifferent, the writing style is more like Japanese light novels, but the plot is about the harem, but I only collected one chapter out of more than 200 chapters. There is basically no Shura field, or it may be because of the indifference of the protagonist, so the heroine guide is very slow. The first heroine is still backwards. The interaction between the sword spirit and the protagonist is very interesting. I occasionally learn about some Japanese attractions. At present, there is an outline. I hope it won't be unfinished. After all, it is a common problem in light novels. Five stars encourage me.

I really like the author's delicate writing style. The self-narrative plot also highlights the "daily" setting. Fantasy is well integrated into life, plain and interesting. What may have caused dissatisfaction among readers is the excessive use of the modal particle "ma" in the first half, which made readers who watched carefully unbearable. However, the use of this word was reduced later, and it did not affect reading after acceptance. All in all, it is an excellent novel with excellent writing style and is very suitable for readers with a peaceful mind.

Lianyou has a very good taste, and it can even be said to be much better than Lianyou in the early stage (the plot of 100,000 yen educates the crow, both front and back). But the subsequent plot is not catchy. The interactive session is completely different from the early stage. The plot is also based on what I dreamed of. But in Tomato it is already a masterpiece, encourage me

The original one, I personally feel that this one is better than the previous one.

Overall it's pretty good, but it's too day-to-day. I don't see any other people with special abilities at the moment. There's also a kyudo-senpai that's filling the gap. I want to watch Shura Field.

To be honest, from a personal perspective, this book should not only have a score of 9 or above. Although there are some areas where it may slightly offend me, the shortcomings cannot be concealed. I have read a lot of Japanese light novels, at least it is not worse than some Japanese light novels with a score of 9 or above. The most important thing is that I really like the rhythm of the narrative of this book.

This is a slow-burning harem light novel that is highly recommended in Tomato. The emotional pull between the characters really makes me see the feeling of Nissei. It is slow-burning and makes people look forward to the battle part. All in all, it is very good.

I rarely give low scores, but this book is really not very comfortable. The protagonist treats others like NPCs and gets along with others just to gain points. It's like a person only possesses divinity and loses humanity. (Fireworks Festival) I think this is detrimental to the development of the emotional line. It is also possible that the author Sang will come around after a while, so I am actually only going to give it 3 points. In terms of character creation, I think except for the male protagonist, the others are pretty good, and it has the flavor of a Japanese light novel. From a practical point of view, the plot of this book is actually good. The early plot, especially the part about the wife, is excellent. It looks like a knife but not a sword. There is only a sigh of relief at the time and a slight sadness. In fact, the subject of fireworks is also good, but just because of the male protagonist's character problem mentioned above, I don't think the writing is particularly good, so I gave it a four-point rating. Overall, my opinion is that it's worth a try. After all, everyone has different tastes, and the author's literary talent is acceptable.