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Nice! I finally met a mortal fan, and I wrote my own thing about the protagonist. Looking forward to the follow-up! Please author give me more serious updates

I have read dozens of chapters, and the writing is quite good. Now that I have traveled through time and become Han Xianzun, I must make up for my past regrets and avoid mistakes. This kind of writing is quite attractive. I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on!

Not bad, you can take a look It's well written, it doesn't lower your intelligence, and your IQ is online. Don't worry about what other people say. Many fanfics used by mortals are actually almost the same as the original works. The opportunity to overpower Han Li. The one you wrote ranks among the top three in IQ among mortal fanfics. Come on! ! ! The recent writing has been a mess. The Yan family stole Wang Chan's storage bag. You might as well have snatched it when he was chasing him later. Mortals mentioned smells and marks more than once (extremely yin). Wang Chan also had two knotted pills beside him. It was simply a death wish. Speechless😑. There is also the trading of Foundation Establishment Pills, which is completely a one-shot deal. Several families suddenly have Foundation Establishment monks, which is very likely to attract the attention of some big families (especially the Chen family, the eldest brother of the Chen family, and Wu Feng). Guess they will ask those families whether they will be tipped off for the second transaction and arrest you directly in the family that has not traded.

It's not bad, it has a bit of the original flavor, but also adds my own touches. The key is that the addition is reasonable. The other supporting characters were not changed beyond recognition.

Encourage the author

Very good, very good

Nice fanfic Don't take chances!

Support: The author is a patient with logical obsessive-compulsive disorder. Writing books must be logical and self-consistent.

Quantity is not important, quality is important. I will give you five stars to help you achieve an even score.

This book is very well written. The author pays great attention to many small details.

The writing is quite good, there are no brainless plug-ins, and there are no embarrassing magic modifications. It's a pity that the author said it is not a harem, but the writing is still very interesting.

It's ok. Come on, author. I just want you to break it into paragraphs. It's too long. I suggest you separate periods into paragraphs.

If you hadn't kept Mo Caihuan alive, how could Zi Ling come out? There's really no need to give her a role. It's not as useful as accepting Xin Ruyin.

It's quite good. The author is very attentive. You can try reading a few chapters first to see if you like it [Blow kiss]

Like to see, like to see.

You can also send hair, hair, hair

Not too bad, you can give it a listen

It's not about opening the palace indiscriminately

Not a bad fanfic!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Is there a large harem? Who to book?

Support, support, author, come on!

It was taken off the shelves, what a pity,

Yes, keep working hard and see what path the new and old demons can take.

It's still in the slow-burning stage, we'll see how the author finds his own way later, keep up the good work [Sending Hearts]

The writing is really good. The author must not stop updating, because the number of updated words is too small. Many books are not popular in the early stage, but the traffic will increase as they go on. This book will definitely be a hit

Very novel and highly recommended for those who are interested in ordinary people.

A very good novel. Worth recommending.

There's nothing good to say about it, just watch it [Like]

Good book, it can be said that Han Li is the strongest in the early stage, and it would be perfect with another cover