Quick Transmission: the Darkened Male Protagonist Insists on Haunting Me

The big letters are really good (//∇//) I like these two worlds very much. It would be better if Brother Qin could be the only one beautiful. I really don't want Brother Qin to fall in love with the male protagonist of the small world [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The writing is very good, I really like the character of the protagonist, and I also like the plot. Many people seem to be unable to accept the memoryless quick time travel. I personally like it very much. Qin Qin's rational and calm look looks weird and sexy. The writing is about a real straight man. It's not like the articles I read before that said he was a straight man but just looked like a closet. . I blush at every turn and my heart beats fast.

I can't do it anymore... I've seen three small worlds, all be, one dead, one crazy and one dead for love. . . But it is very suitable for a straight man. He tricked the little girl into killing them all. In the future, the little girl must read the introduction when reading the two-male protagonist story... The protagonist and supporting roles are written in quite detail. If it can be sweetened, the little girl will be satisfied. 0K, that's about it. It's a little sad, the extra is sweet, it's good to watch and has good reviews and support.

I like this book very much, because I always like to read cool guys and cool guys (but there are very few tomatoes 🥲), and the author's writing style is also very good, I hope he will keep reading [Blow kiss]

It's so pretty, I don't know how to describe it, but just leave it to me. It's been a long time since I've watched a sadistic one, maybe it's sour. Fortunately, there are only a few quick-traveling small worlds. I really can't stand it and want to watch the sweet ones quickly. Fortunately, it's quick-traveling, and the following ones are sweet, but it's just not long enough. Every time I experience a world, my memory will be blocked, so Qin maintains his original straightforwardness. Man, the memory in the back is lifted, the heart cannot be made of iron, there will be emotions in it, the back is sweet, very straightforward, and the progress is normal. After all, Qin is not an awkward person, he just says what he wants, more sweetness, after so much abuse in the front, there must be more sweetness, right? Finished spreading flowers, looking forward to the next work [send heart]

The book is very fast-paced and comfortable to read, and the plot is relatively complete. However, the character of the protagonist feels a bit like it is shaped to fit the plot, but it does not prevent it from being enjoyable. The first world attack is about a man who has lived in a wealthy family with intrigues since he was a child. Although he is only a junior high school student, it still feels a bit strange to have a love affair just because of a rescue and concern. This feeling will no longer exist in the following worlds! It's obvious that we are making great progress I feel that the author can continue to improve his characterization and description, because the protagonist Shou's personality tends to be relatively indifferent to emotions, and I feel that the author's description of Gong's emotional changes is not very detailed. Seeing Shou return to the original worlds and suddenly fighting against each other made me feel more like guilt than love. Maybe it's because the chapters are not long enough. There are only more than a hundred chapters and four worlds. Looking forward to the author's subsequent new books! I particularly like the characters of the two protagonists! ! ! The young couple must be happy tut

I really like this kind of male protagonist. He has this feeling of indifference and warmth. It's so cool. The key is that the plot logic and character settings are also very reasonable! ! ! The length of each small world is not particularly long, which is really suitable for an impatient person like me, but the male protagonist's emotional changes are smooth and steady, and it looks really comfortable [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

This is really nice to read. I have always been a very picky person. I definitely think that this dual strength novel is one of the best in my mind. I am very satisfied that the characters are not portrayed in a feminine way. The content is also very comfortable and not stiff.

Overall, it's pretty good. Qin Beiyu, a straight man, refused decisively if he didn't love her at first. He really has a positive outlook on things and likes love very much. It feels like both parties are slowly learning to love. Although it hurt a bit at the beginning, there are some things that can only be corrected through the most painful and unforgettable experience. One small drawback is that there are too few! I feel that the subsequent story is not as carefully laid out as the first one, and is more fast-paced. The ending of the subsequent return also feels a little rushed. I hope your writing style will get better and better, and your articles will be a hit.

Advantages: The character design is novel, the characterization is very successful, and both male protagonists have not forgotten their roots. Disadvantages: Because this is the author's first book, the plot transitions are rather sloppy, and there is still a lot of room for improvement in the writing style. Overall, this character really appealed to me. This book was okay, but the writing style needs to be improved. [Sending my heart to you]

It's good to read, but it feels a bit abusive to the main actor💦💦💦Why does Beiyu's baby take the initiative a little bit? I feel that every time he loves, he is very humble🥀But, overall it's not bad, the writing is very delicate, and it doesn't have the sense of fragmentation that most fast-traveling novels have. It's a good book

Comments after reading it, overall it's pretty good, it's a Qingshui novel, and the pace is pretty fast, but I actually didn't see much of Shou's emotional changes. For me, Shou's emotional portrayal wasn't delicate enough, at least I couldn't tell where the turning point was. Of course, it could be that I'm a bit nervous.

It's really super pretty! Because the book was already finished when I read it, so who, like me, would finish a world and go straight to the next, then return to this world, and then move on to the next world. It's really nice to watch like this. I'll be hooked immediately after I finish it. My little heart won't be able to stand it if I keep watching be. I really recommend watching it like this.

Can you all come and watch? The author's writing is really good and the pace is great! There are so few people watching it that I'm afraid the author won't update anymore_Everyone is watching it.

Wow wow wow, the author is great, it's so cruel, every small world is Be, but the protagonist's personality is very distinct, he will do the tasks he is told to do. I feel that he will not be restrained. This is your noble son, so delicious

After reading it in one day, I still have some say. Overall, there are small flaws, but the impact is not big. It is better than the general quick travel on the market. The second time travel is not particularly detailed, but it is enough. I feel at ease in the end. It is sweet and I feel at ease. Of course, there is also Xiaoshou Yiqing [Chigua] [Chigua]

The characters and general plot are okay, but the writing logic and writing style are a bit poor, but it's pretty good in Tomato. It's not that you can't accept erasing memories and being in a small world. Shou is already emotionally indifferent but still has clear memories. Logically speaking, it's difficult for emotions to stack up, let alone develop, which makes it difficult to push the emotional line. In the end, he will be very inexplicable. The final effect is that the protagonist of the story is sad, and the readers are also sad to watch it. However, these are easy to revise if you think about them carefully. The author's basic skills are solid. These are all issues that the author can improve on in his writing. It will not be difficult to pay more attention to them. Breaking through these will bring the article to a higher level.

This book is really beautiful. Who knows the sense of redemption after reading such a good book after a book shortage? I think the description of this book is particularly delicate, and the personality of each character is very independent and clear. I really like Yu's character. He seems cold but is actually very gentle. His mind is always very clear. I don't want to make others suffer, so I don't show my feelings to anyone. Even when I'm a little tempted, the straight-male love stories I used to read always felt wrong and not straight enough. But now I feel right. I really like this book. Everything is good. I just can't write more. . . ●ｖ●

It's good-looking. The first part is all "be", but the second part where the male protagonist goes back to he [shy] is still good-looking. I just read the first part of "be" and quickly went to the back to read the chapter where the male protagonist goes back to this world again to prevent myself from being abused [shy]

Real! Of! Too! Good! Look! Got it! Qin Beiyu is strong, calm and gentle. This kind of character is really delicious. . The process of Gong slowly falling in love with him in the small world was also gradual and not particularly abrupt. The most satisfying thing was that Beiyu didn't like Gong at the beginning and explicitly rejected him, and then Gong went crazy. . What you eat is for straight men! ! It's just too short and not enough to watch www[cry][cry]

I've finished reading all the updated ones. I think it's really good. I like it so much. But there are only four worlds, which is not enough to see. Ooooh, by the way, I'll update the update soon in the afternoon.

It's very nice and the setting is very good. The three worlds are not together anymore, and each world is attacked and there is no memory. I don't know when they were together. It's quite uncomfortable to watch. Maybe the fourth world is together? I can't stand it anymore. If you see the fourth world together, can you tell me?

Overall, it's very good, and it's finished now. If you can't accept the be, I can suggest that you watch the be line of a world and jump directly to the he line of that world. Personally, I think it will be easier to accept.

Oh my god, no exaggeration to promote it, let alone the plot, it is naturally excellent. I feel so happy just because of Yu Yu, it is completely in line with my xp. The happiest thing for a novel girl is that the author of the novel has the same xp as herself. ❤️❤️❤️

It's very good-looking, I really like the character of the male protagonist [almost crying] [almost crying] After watching it, I don't know why but I felt stuffy, sour, and indescribable [almost crying] [almost crying] It turns out that seeing them finally happy makes me choke to the point where my throat hurts and I can't speak.

I'll go, it's so beautiful. I didn't have high hopes when I read this book because I was in a book shortage. Really, I'll go. If you read this book carefully, you can actually finish it in less than a day. The characterization is really delicate. Author I'm really going to fall in love with you, okay? It's so good, you must read it.

The emotions are very delicate and the writing style is also very good. I like it better. Although I always feel that the ending of he that clears the blackening value is a bit separated from the previous Qin Beiyu, and I feel a bit anxious to finish it. In the front, he was cold and indifferent, and he couldn't accept it. He chose to run away when his important points were full, but later he accepted it calmly, and even took the initiative. But as a he's ideal ending, it's still pretty good. It would be better if a few more worlds were added in the middle to allow Qin Beiyu to have a gradual and gradual transition to his feelings, which would be more delicate and have a long-lasting feeling.

Love it, love it, the protagonists are very good ~ the writing is also very good, super good, very touching... Zong Yuan and A Qin love it, Zong Li also 🉑, plainness is the real thing, and it is not dull, hehe It's Jing... I remember it wrong

Fried Chicken is very good-looking. I walked through it step by step and watched it end. I was very reluctant to leave it (first in Wukong, then in Tomato, and Tomato did not comment immediately after watching it👉👈). It was very good-looking. Although the ending of each small world was not good at the beginning, I went back to it in the end. The ending of the small world is also perfect, very good-looking, everyone should watch it! ! [Sending Hearts]

I love to watch the type of shou that is handsome, cool and cold. Some of the settings are quite fresh, but the plot is average and even a bit cliché. But fortunately, there is enough sexual tension between the characters, and the character design of Shou poked me too much. The first world has the most detailed early stage preparation, I like it. It feels a bit samey at the end, and I like it too quickly, so I don't like it.