You Said That You Are a Loli Devil in Your Dreams Every Day?

It's okay, the plot is quite interesting, but if I ask a few questions, I will be a little preconceived. First, the paragraphs are too long. If the paragraphs are too long, readers will lose interest in reading, and it would be better to write some parts separately, such as emoticons. Secondly, although the writing is good, it seems a little frivolous and fragmented from the second chapter. (Maybe it is suitable for writing a campus article?) The plug-in has almost no foreshadowing, and the supplements are also a bit pale, like a fan, a little care for those who have not watched the Little Devil King (no one has watched it anyway, so there is still time to polish it) Third, the protagonist is too kind, which is not a bad thing. Unlike most mainstream characters who are ordinary, a little indifferent, smart or even slightly evil, there is less inner and action struggle, and it is easy to break the character and get scolded. Fourth, the character portrayal is pretty good. I am looking forward to the next chapter and hope to add more. However, although the writing is good, it seems like a junior high school student using general words to make up for the number of words, and it also seems a bit like showing off the vocabulary? (My writing style is relatively concise) Finally, let me ask, what is the world view like? How different is it from the style and worldview of the female imp devil? You are not him, it is best to write your own style. Also, which part of the template should you use specifically? The last one is very well written, keep up the good work @ICECREAM (I really write novels, and I can't find my big number. Fortunately, my writer account is still logged in on my old phone)