Collapse of Iron************

This is the real Bengtie Universe, a group of lunatics whose destiny is to lead. The real reality is more magical than the game. The characters of Black Tower and Ruan Mei in the author truly fit the destiny of "intellectual".

In fact, this is the real world of Iron Beng. [Thinking] The more a Destiny Walker walks on the Destiny Path, the more he will be assimilated by the Destiny Path.

The author is good at writing books, and it is very fluent. It makes people want to keep reading, looking forward to the plot behind it. There is no time to stop and write a review, and it is rare that there is no nonsense to make up the word count. It is written seriously. I hope the author will do more and more. If you like good books, come more. Anyway, come on, I hope more people will read it. I am panicking because I haven't rated 300,000 words yet.

A good book with great creativity. It is not constrained by the original plot and highlights a different possibility, which is great. The harem is also well written. So far, the emotional lines of the heroines are quite smooth. There is nothing inexplicable or giving away the daughter. The only thing that needs to be improved is that the protagonist often seems to feel good for a while and then continue to be deflated after his strength is improved, a bit like a sex-changed blowfish. Also, when the protagonist is in trouble, he can only ask people in the group for help. I think the protagonist should make himself more versatile.

Golden seal What's special about this book is that miracles come at a price. If the plot of Star Vault is that of an eight-year-old child who cannot see the difficult life, the plot of this book is equivalent to that of a boy who has worked in a mine for 4 years.

Very exciting! I remembered a video I watched before. It explained that when we chose our gender at the beginning, we started the journey, and the other became the end king, selecting the best ending for us. The sentence at the beginning "When you have the opportunity to make a choice, others will regret it themselves" also said this. One is in the present, and the other looks back from the end. Other books are adventures of various protagonists, and the plot of this book is that the protagonist plays the role of the end king, showing readers an if line.

Good reviews, there is a confrontation scene with Lan in more than 90 pictures, awesome, the plot is perfectly prepared, and the writing is more realistic and also very cruel. You are the cruelest, most real, and the best plot among the Bengtie fans I have ever seen (a little lower, some places are not too perfect in the foreshadowing). I can say that other things are flawless, you deserve five stars, at least I think you all have 8.9~9.0 Points

(Save version: good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking) Overall, I don't see any bad points. Let me talk about this harem first. Although the author wrote that there is a harem, he still wrote the protagonist with a sense of proportion. He is not like other harem novels like a stallion, or like a succubus who is liked at a glance. So far, the reason for liking the protagonist is that he saved them in despair, which is quite reasonable. So far, the only one who can be regarded as a real girlfriend is Bronya, and the rest can only be described as admiration. There are not many emotional scenes in the rest, and there is only a relationship line with Bronya. What follows is the plot, which is very good and perfectly depicts the dark version of Star Iron. Unlike some novels that involve weird invasions of Beng Tie, the dark version of Star Tie written by the author is completely a replica of the original Star Tie. The forgotten Fuli, the unity of order and class, the harmony of manipulation and assimilation, the hidden balance, the annihilation of human nature and absolute reason, are completely a perfect misinterpretation of the destiny of the star god of the main universe. Maybe it's some selfishness of being Aya's chef. After seeing Aya become a tyrant in Ompharos in this world and being cast aside by the people, I feel a little uncomfortable. I hope the author will not write Aya as a villain. Please author😭 The novel is still very interesting, the characters are well created, and the plot themes are also interesting and novel. It is much better than some stallion stories written under the banner of weird and if iron collapse. The author must update it! ! !

I've tried it for you, and it's okay. You can keep watching it, whether it's the plot or the characters. So when will the main universe come to help? Although I've finished thinking about it, I still want to read other people's stories. It's quite interesting. The part about the main universe [please update]

It's okay, but I don't know if the Star Gods from Beng Tie will come later. If so, it will be very fun. Looking forward to pleasure VS pain, is Dan Heng so strong? Or is it because that golden finger is copied, and as long as it is implemented to the end, the power will be strengthened, otherwise a distant blow will shatter a planet hundreds of light years away.

How shameless, several Chuzhi help each other, this is good for "ourselves in different time and space", rather than strangers with the same face who rob each other's power.

This is an abandoned world line, and this is also an inverted world. Everything is the opposite of what is seen in the mirror. O Savior, please save the future of this world. Pulling off the reins that stopped him from heading towards the cliff. Let it turn to another unknown future.

I saw a real Star Iron and a two-dimensional warhammer. Those things in the plot should have been beautified, otherwise what we saw would not be so relaxed and happy.

It's worth a look. According to the current development, there is still a lot of foreshadowing that has not been written. In terms of the general direction of the plot, there are no shortcomings except that the protagonist is a bit resistant to stress. The writing style is pretty good among existing fan fiction.

The setting is quite novel, but it feels a bit overwhelming. How come God's Favor was raised to level 5 later? . .

Different from other Bengtie novels, it is very novel and quite interesting. But the author may have set Xian Qin a little too strong.

The world seems to be collapsing without balanced control. Although balance sometimes brings a lot of disadvantages, it is really easy to collapse without balanced control. Without balanced control, everyone has a precarious life.

It uses the greatest malice to describe the survival laws of the universe, various conspiracies, all kinds of malice, all kinds of fighting, the capable ones will be promoted, the defeated ones will be demoted. It is a very good novel.

From my personal point of view, this is a good "Beng Tie" novel, but the shortcoming is that I did not have a deep sense of the protagonist's rebirth from a tool man to a star god step by step. And it can be clearly felt that the ending of Beng Tie was rushed. In the end, I felt that the Pokémon chapter was even better than Bentie, and it truly conveyed the feeling of breaking through the shackles.

In the real Dianlao universe, if there were no protagonist, I wouldn't know how miserable ordinary people in this universe are. In the original universe, there is a patrol who can deliver justice. In this universe, people are directly controlled.

Very nice, but a bit overwhelming

According to us, it can be regarded as Beng Tie without pure beauty and beautification. The world of clones is considered a cheat. They can be regarded as the protagonists of the prehistoric period. I feel that the main purpose is to share their destiny with other protagonists and then cheat Ben Tie.

This book is so well written that I love to listen to it every day!

It's very good-looking, at least better than some of the more homogeneous Xingtie articles. Please update soon! ! ! !

Seen 49 so far Yes, to put it simply, it is based on the background of the game and then establish a new main line. The author has done a very good job in describing the self-creation, and it is well integrated with the background of the game. It can be said that there are almost no obtrusive places. The emotions and character creation are also considered excellent in Tomatoes. The protagonist's character is not toxic at present, decisive and not procrastinating. You can see the worldview if you look a little further forward. The changes... Are they big? At least I can accept it, it's very innovative after all. Can the author give any spoilers? Will Hanabi enter the harem or be redeemed? You can't just get a lunch box like old Sambo, right? [What]

I am an author and prophet, Brother Zhou Tian almost became the ruling star god in 3.8

This is the most touching novel with the most plot I have ever heard. It's very, very good, very good. I give you thumbs up, thumbs up, thumbs up, thumbs up.

Can if-line cards be used later, such as Shady, Walter, and Order of Mirrors? To be honest, the protagonist's story in other universes might as well be replaced by the game universe's viewing of the protagonist's universe (memory bubble form)

It's very smooth to watch and the plot is very coherent.

Okay, you can give it a try The protagonist has been resisting pressure, where does the joy come from?