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Maybe it's not a mindless black protagonist. I've read a lot of books that criticize Tang San. This book is very good. It treats Tang San as a normal person. It doesn't vilify Tang San but it doesn't beautify him either. It's very rational and objective. What makes me want to read the most is the protagonist, who is comparable to the correct values ​​​​of the three good young people in the 21st century.

It's much better-looking than that kind of fight against the sky. The main plot is clear. The characters are more like a combination of comics and novels. At least they are more anthropomorphic. What about other characters? It is based on the direction of the novel. It is not unreasonable. I just hope that Xiao Ao can come back. If nothing else, his ability is too strong. And I am more curious about whether Lao Bai can survive? Better to click.

It's very interesting. I don't know why so many people say lightning protection. It's not your fault that you like to read mindless articles, but when did it become a pitfall for you not to read mindless and cool articles? Can't Rotten Tomatoes have logic? And as a reader, you can give suggestions, but if you see that the plot does not suit your liking, it does not mean that others also think that the plot is not good. The growth of the protagonist in the novel comes from bit by bit of hard work. It is also fun to counterattack after not being favored. Keep up the good work, author, and don't change your big picture easily. Of course, you can listen to the outline and rhythm, if there are logical inconsistencies or problems with the setting, but don't change the main line arbitrarily because of one or two readers (because I feel that the last few chapters have been affected by the comment area, which has changed a lot from the previous feeling, or it may be because there have been a lot of changes recently)

Chapter 58 is finished for now. Not bad, really not bad, you can spend some time looking at it. The characters are vividly described and the inner drama is okay, but those who can't stand it may find it verbose. The description of the battle is concise and clear, at least I feel comfortable watching it. Women only affect the speed of drawing the sword, but not the magic sword Apophis. It really doesn't matter if there is a heroine or not. The memories of my childhood in elementary school are attacking me again. The weekly Zhiyinmanke comics and the time I went to the black Internet cafe with my classmates to form a team to play DNF. (Small beep: Ghost Swordsman's Dark Supreme Phantom rare costume has always been an unfulfilled childhood dream of mine). One star was deducted because the protagonist's combat power was cut too hard.

The writing is okay, I almost added it to the bookshelf. If I hadn't seen Tang San's Harem, the male protagonist Shan Tu, I would have continued reading it, but you can definitely check it out.

It's very interesting, even if you are following the protagonist, it is still different after all. After all, the protagonist is not Tang San, but the blooming of Devil May Cry's power in Douluo Continent is the key point. This is why I read fanfics, either "xx he knows nothing about xx" that optimizes the system and plot of the original work, or the impact, fusion and blooming of the alien system, which is very interesting! Just like when I searched for Net King fanfics before, the Death System and Tennis, the Pirate System and Tennis, and the Demon Slayer System and Tennis are all very interesting.

So far so good. I have a suggestion for the author. You can try to introduce more Arad soul wearers in the future, such as the old enemies White Hand and Red Eyes in Devil May Cry's duel. Later, in the Tiandou Royal Academy, you can add moonworms or dark emperors to join the protagonist in CP. The Sun and Moon Empire Soul Guidance Academy can add celestial beings, sharpshooters or spear swordsmen.

The genre is very novel, and the character descriptions are also very good. It is very good among Douluo novels. However, it feels a bit broken after the ghosts and gods come out. The plot deviates from the original text. If the characters in the novel are homophones, the plot will deviate. Is this still a Douluo novel? It is just a pity. I thought it was very interesting in the early stage, and I am still looking forward to the Soul Master Competition.

It's a pretty good fanfic. The martial spirit comes from DNF Ghost Swordsman, and Devil May Cry also stood up. [Cool smile] Not much to say, it's really well written, and it's fun to watch. Just read it, and you won't make a sound after reading it [Cool]

There are very few fan fictions that can be read in Tomato with a complete logical chain. Is this the right way? After enjoying the abilities brought by the Ghost Swordsman, why don't there be side effects of ghost hands and ghosts? It's really boring to read too many pure novels. It's this kind of growth that has gone through hardships that can move people's hearts.

The logic is reasonable, and it gives me the feeling that I have been eating redstone all of a sudden.

I didn't win. I felt frustrated after reading half of it. Then there are the advantages. I have never played DNF and I can see and understand it. The author's writing style is good and productive. In the end, it seems that 400,000 words will not be blocked.

I have read Chapter 61. I haven't seen a good Douluo book for a long time. This one is really good, but it seems that the heroine is Xiao Wu. I don't know if there are others. When will the protagonist's combat power increase? It feels a bit stressful [Thinking]

It's a good fanfic. I'd like to ask if it has multiple female protagonists. Personally, I like to read fanfics with multiple female protagonists. They are multi-female protagonists, not stallion-type ones. The female protagonists have a lot of female protagonists. Currently, there is only one Xiao Wu in chapter 108. Are there other female protagonists in the future? If you see the later one, kick me. Thank you🙏🙏

It's not even a bit better than other fan fictions. This is a normal novel. It's not like other novels where the system is always present. If the system exists, the time traveler has to do it.

Very nice, very objective, not embarrassing

It's so beautiful, isn't it? I like this kind of private outline that overthrows the original work. Some characters in the original work were not likable. It's great to change them, especially with the addition of other two-dimensional elements. The only pity is that the heroine is missing. The army of time-travelers must have supreme strength, supreme power, and the most beautiful women, otherwise why would you get the chance to time-travel. Like it. Like it.

This book is really good, but I don't know why so few people read it.

Not bad. . In fact, the introduction talks about the Four Cultivations. . It might as well be written from the perspective of Devil May Cry. . Previously, I watched the Demonic Swordsman from the perspective of Sword Soul. . This is the first time I've seen Devil May Cry's perspective. . Fine. . And it's not that the Tang family is gone. . Basically everything is gone. . In the end, the protagonist himself is gone. . You are very much like Crimson Eyes [face covering]

It's good-looking, just read it. I don't play DNF, so I don't know what the combat power system is like, so I just treat it as a Douluo novel without considering these things. It's good-looking.

So far, it's pretty good. I've read Chapter 26 now, and I'll have to read the rest. I hope there will be more changes in the later plots. If it's not too different from the original plot, it's better to read the original work. Therefore, the action author doesn't need to keep the plots later or even in the finale too close to the original work. Support It was okay at the beginning, but then I started to let myself go. I feel like the author couldn't resist it 😂

A word for book friends who have never read Douluo. Sanshao does not grant copyright to fans. Don't think that fans can write whatever they want. Fans need permission from the original author. Things like Naruto and Pirates are written casually just because they are foreign. Not to mention Sanshao, he would definitely report it if he found out. Finally, the author wrote really well (crossed out) very well. No bragging, no blackmail. Those stupid idiots don't need to read them.

The content is relatively rich. It combines the Ghost Swordsman profession in DNF. You can imagine how strong the male protagonist will be in the later period. There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people. Personal opinion

To encourage you, the characterization and plot foreshadowing are quite detailed and serious, which is really rare in Tomatoes, especially in fan fiction. It's more comfortable to watch. The disadvantage is that it updates too slowly, once a day. The protagonist does not directly sweep the whole scene invincibly, and it is easier to unfold the plot when traveling to Douluo without a prophet (most of the prophetic time travel stories write the protagonist group as too brainless and flat, which is very unpleasant). The growth of the protagonist is quite exciting

I have been reading books for more than ten years. I will briefly talk about my personal feelings about this book. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. This book is based on the character of the original work, with some reasonable changes to the protagonist's butterfly wings. I found that the change in the character of the original pig's foot was when he knew that the village was gone and went on a rampage. At that time, the character of the original pig's foot was changed, and he was no longer the original one who took care of his daughter. The God King whose soul was separated is a normal person (Don't be stubborn, normal people are like this. The Ice and Fire Eyes are like going to a remote mountain village, where there are antiques everywhere, but the locals only use the antiques as tools. Will you pick them up after seeing them?) This book gives me a very good feeling. I give it four stars. I'll give it a thumbs up and don't get reported.

It can only be said that it is difficult for Tomato to see such a normal Douluo fan with excellent writing and reasonable and smooth increase in strength.

Well, the ending is a bit unclear. I thought it was Shrek Sanmei and Carl who lived a life without shame, but I didn't expect that Carl became the ninth ghost and god and was dragged to the underworld [face covering] Overall, this is the best Douluo fanfic I have ever seen. Other Douluo fanfics can't be watched until halfway through.

A very good Douluo fanfic. The author's writing style is very vivid and smooth. The descriptions of other characters are in line with their original settings and are sublimated. At the same time, the author also added his own original creations. It can be said that if it is finished, then this book will definitely have a place among Douluo fans [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

I finished reading it in one afternoon and it was very good. The characters described by the author are very good, the events are progressing at a good pace, and the protagonist's progress is also gradual. Rather than listening to people's opinions in the comment area, I think it is better to see for yourself. After all, everyone has different opinions. Maybe my words will be different.

This is a different Tang San. The Tang San in this book is more like a person than in the original work. [Laughing evilly] The main character is also pretty good.