The Master of Metaphysics Is Immoral in the Five Elements.

Nice! The plot unfolds very smoothly and naturally, and there is no delay between each small chapter. The brushstrokes are crisp and clean. The plot logic and cause and effect of Xie Yao's ghost hunting and investigation are reasonable, with some twists and turns interspersed with small surprises, and the rhythm seems to be very comfortable. And it can avoid the same problems, so it is worth pursuing~. It is easy to write about this subject in a heavy way, but Xie Yao's characteristics neutralize this part very well. If the group portraits in Chapter 2 could be moved back a little, the rhythm would feel more natural~ There is not much emphasis on the creation of the supporting characters, but the character traits are very distinct~~

I deleted the previous book review because I thought it would be better to wait until it was finished before posting this review. Previously, Baozi suggested to Wanzi that the emotional line between Jiang Tingxue and Xie Yao was not very clear. That was because... Xie Yao's cp at the beginning was not Jiang Tingxue. As for who it was, you should be able to guess... Ahem, I saved 200,000 words at the beginning of this book. Jiang Tingxue appeared as the mid-term boss, and then a terrible thing happened! Jiang Tingxue and I feel the same way! It was that wonderful feeling. After he appeared, I couldn't continue writing the original emotional line, so I had to delete the 200,000 words and rewrite it. However, I feel like I made the right decision because they really get along very well~hahahaha~ In addition, I am really grateful to so many friends who like Xie Yao, and I also like it! I love him so much! Among the novels I wrote, Shou Tu Xie Yao ranks first! Of course Jiang Tingxue also ranked first [please, old god, please don't come to my dream at night! You two have broken dimensions several times! Woo woo woo] Thank you again for your support! See you in the next book ~ pen refill ~

It looks good, but I hope there will be a dividing line in the next change of perspective, otherwise I won't be able to figure out what happened. The author's writing is very interesting. There must be foreshadowing between Xie Yao and Dao Zhang Jiang, but I don't know who is targeting whom. [Thinking] [Thinking] Just don't be too cruel [Crying] [Almost crying]

It's really good-looking. Whether it's the characters or the various love-hate entanglements, the writing is unexpected. This is one of the few good articles I can find. So after seeing my comment, can the author make a sequel?

This book is very nice

It's quite good-looking, but also ridiculous, and sometimes quite scary, a bit like a male video.

It's very interesting. I hope Xiao Xie and Lao Gong can live the life they want in another parallel time and space!