"Treasure, secret treasure, demonic realm, secret realm...
You can freely access the "unknown" that ordinary society cannot reach. "
Wu Long, an enthusiast of "Hunter", was lucky enough to travel to the world of hunters, where he became a werewolf instead of a hunter.
Reader comments
It's actually okay, but when I came to watch Hunter, I wanted to see the various telekinesis abilities.
I prefer writing full-time hunters. After all, Tomato writes less about it, but I think you still give the protagonist too little development time. You are too hasty. Nian ability does not have to be limited before it can be capable. You can increase the development time to reduce the restrictions.
I really like Hunter, and I hope it will be wonderfully written, but it's best not to be a nanny. There is already this trend. Once you have written your own world view, don't take the original protagonist too seriously.
The ability writing is still very good. 70% Of the binding oaths in the hunter literature are messed up. The rigor and complexity of your ability settings are at least 5% higher than the top.
This is a hunter fic that suits me very well. The descriptions of the battles are very detailed, which I couldn't notice when watching the anime. Is the pace going to be sped up later? Hisoka appears a little too much, and there is no sense of mystery anymore. Instead, it's a bit boring (a bit like the protagonist's dislike of Hisoka, although the starting point is different)
It's okay, but why haven't I used the ability to fight once? What rules and effects. Looking forward to one hand
Very pretty. However, the protagonist's ability needs to be strengthened. The ability restriction and oath design are a bit weak, and it basically depends on luck.
A very rigorous novel, but the development time is a bit short
At least for now it's pretty good, you can take a look
It's actually okay, but when I came to watch Hunter, I wanted to see the various telekinesis abilities.
I prefer writing full-time hunters. After all, Tomato writes less about it, but I think you still give the protagonist too little development time. You are too hasty. Nian ability does not have to be limited before it can be capable. You can increase the development time to reduce the restrictions.
I really like Hunter, and I hope it will be wonderfully written, but it's best not to be a nanny. There is already this trend. Once you have written your own world view, don't take the original protagonist too seriously. The ability writing is still very good. 70% Of the binding oaths in the hunter literature are messed up. The rigor and complexity of your ability settings are at least 5% higher than the top.
This is a hunter fic that suits me very well. The descriptions of the battles are very detailed, which I couldn't notice when watching the anime. Is the pace going to be sped up later? Hisoka appears a little too much, and there is no sense of mystery anymore. Instead, it's a bit boring (a bit like the protagonist's dislike of Hisoka, although the starting point is different)
It's okay, but why haven't I used the ability to fight once? What rules and effects. Looking forward to one hand
Very pretty. However, the protagonist's ability needs to be strengthened. The ability restriction and oath design are a bit weak, and it basically depends on luck.
A very rigorous novel, but the development time is a bit short
At least for now it's pretty good, you can take a look