After My Master Lost All His Cultivation, I Became a Rebel Disciple.

Five stars from an old fan, the latest masterpiece of Immortal Chu Ning [Sneaky Smile] is another perfect show of fighting against the master, this time it is even more filial. The author's writing skills are solid as always, and the male protagonist's filial piety has a good transitional description before and after it deteriorates (although the smoothness is not quite there). The female protagonist's changes in mood are also well written. Overall, it's not too poisonous, and you can rest assured about the sweetness. The description of the restoration of cultivation is quite awesome (the heroine is a carnivore [laughter]) and I look forward to the later training. It's so impressive. My favorite panic book [Shyness] on Tomato has been released by the author. It's bound to be as good as the fairy🉐Cultivation

Hahaha, the author is so good at writing, it feels like he is putting a knife to the neck of the reviewer [laughing], the latest two chapters are worth five stars. The other plots are not bad, but there are some holes that are not filled in. The four stars are to suppress the rating. I am afraid that after the high score, I will be noticed and blocked [laughing], in short, please go to the author [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

Once a master is a father, a woman is a mother. The male protagonist was brought up by his master from an early age and was raised like a mother and a sister. A woman who is a master, mother and sister, plus her helpless pity after losing her cultivation, and her playful and cute nature after gradually regaining her cultivation. No one can escape from becoming a master and a rebel disciple. It is so sweet and highly recommended.

The author's writing is very good. I have read more than 200 of them so far. The most important thing is that the descriptions are very detailed, unlike some harem stories and someone who was born in the women's toilet. The main thing is that the details are being reviewed. Ahem,

In the early stage, the male protagonist's personality change was a bit abrupt, and although there was an introduction, it was still a bit stiff. Furthermore, the two of them are somewhat of a universal enemy, coveting either the beauty of the heroine or her martial arts and magic weapons. Although the world of cultivating immortals has always been like this, and the plot also needs conflicts to advance, there is always a feeling of a female frequently abusing the protagonist, and I hope there is no knife. Apart from these two points, this book really satisfies my taste. Although it is about attacking the master, it is not a routine in which the master rescues the disciple and the two of them die happily. Although the master was tempted, he could not let go of the shackles of identity and worldliness. The two kept pulling and confirming that their hearts would become stronger together and break away from the shackles. The master's heartbeat, entanglement, shame, compromise, and strength are all described. Although the two are constantly pulling each other, the warming of their emotions and the confirmation of their hearts between the pulls are the most joyful. This is not to say that there is something wrong with a master and a disciple who are full of affection, but this kind of relationship that draws in emotions bit by bit is more suitable for my physique. Finally, I beg the author to stop using the knife. I have passed the age of looking for blades to eat. I can only read some sweet articles to nourish my stomach.

I think the emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists in this book is very real and subtle, especially after the male protagonist fights the geniuses in the Daoji Palace, the female protagonist's affectionate remarks to the male protagonist simply bring the soul of a caring and meticulous girlfriend to life. I think this is the book The biggest feature of the book is about the emotional warming and daily interactions between the male and female protagonists. This is the deep love of Tomato. If the previous writing style and quality can be maintained in the future, or even further breakthroughs can be made, I can only say that this book will also have a big place in Tomato.

To be honest, I have watched quite a lot of Masters and Disciples, but there are only a few that I can watch. This book is really well written. Personally, I feel that the behavioral logic of the male protagonist and the details of the female protagonist are well written. [Smile]

It's really good to read. The details explained in many places, the inner activities of the male and female protagonists, etc. Are all very well written. Don't think that it is exaggerated that the male protagonist can achieve one realm a day in the first place, but it will be explained in detail after reaching the next four realms. I have also read many books about masters and disciples. Basically, the female master is cold at first, but after about a hundred chapters I have been in the male protagonist's arms all day long, and I am quite speechless about those books when I read this. But this book is very good. Although I can be tired of it, the heroine's master is a very understanding person (I don't know how to describe it). Anyway, he is very clear about emotions. Overall, I feel that it is far better than some other books about masters and disciples.

The plot is sweet but not too harsh, the story is smooth and thoughtful, and the edges are just the right embellishment. It's a good book with plot, emotions and edges. It stands out among all the other side-notes of Tomato. It writes about the pure love of a graceful lady and a gentleman, and also writes about the natural smoothness of food and sex. Other books say one thing and do another, but the duplicity is laughable. The edgy content is as nonsense as a eunuch going to a brothel. Pure love frivolousness will not work. I really hope they go to the First Literary Moderator or something to learn more. This book is different, the author is like an outstanding graduate of the First Literature Moderator Network! He has begun to break away from vulgar and sidelined fun, and has begun to walk his own path, most seeking platonic love that is taught by the soul, and at the same time taking into account natural and basic intimacy.

It's pretty good. I personally like the current rhythm. This kind of relationship between master and disciple fits well with my imagination of a master and a disciple. [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] Speaking of which, the male protagonist is still Chu Ning. Why isn't the female protagonist's surname Ji?

Let me express my personal opinion: This is the first time for me to watch this type of film with a single female lead in a spiritual practice. ①The plot is relatively slow and pays more attention to the description of emotional details. ②The division of realms is also different from that of the public, and it feels quite novel. ③ Describe different characters from multiple perspectives, and each character can be regarded as a "protagonist". ④The updates are quite impressive. Points that I personally feel are bad: ① Some descriptions are too complicated and lengthy, mainly psychological descriptions. These are sometimes mentioned repeatedly (mentioned from this character's perspective, from that character's perspective), but they are all the same thing. ② Sometimes the names written are easy to be confused, mainly recently, but in fact it is not a big problem. ③ After roughly reading the author's other books, I found that many of the characters' names, realms, and other contents are the same, which I feel may not be very friendly to old book friends. Summary: Those who have never seen this type of movie think it is generally good, but you will get tired after watching it for a long time because the plot is slow and the description is complicated. I personally give it four stars.

Personally, I feel it is better than the previous books. The heroine's character design is stronger than before. The previous books were almost all obedient to the male protagonist. This is really annoying. It would be even more awesome to write a slow burn in the next book.

The latest chapter 55 feels okay, and I am not against this genre [laughing] I have read several books by the author, and the themes are all very good, but I didn't want to read them until the middle and late chapters, and I felt that the plot was not that attractive. . . I hope this one is stronger [laughing and crying]

Both the male and female protagonists have very good personalities. The female protagonist is a rare female protagonist in Tomato who is neither a cup, nor a vase, nor a tool. When she said that you should commit suicide, I felt that this book had [heartfelt]

"Wow! This novel is amazing! The plot is exciting and exciting, with twists and turns one after another. I stayed up all night to follow it! The author is so good at writing. The characters are written like living people, and each character has flesh and blood. The rhythm is very interesting and the roots are strong. I couldn't stop reading it! The writing was so graphic that it made my aunt laugh and punch hard throughout! There are so many Easter eggs hidden in it that I thought it was "enjoyable"! "[Laughing][Laughing][Laughing]

Author, you are so awesome. It's so cool to look at! And he would change the software just by looking at it [shy] The technique is very cool

It's good-looking. To be honest, this is one of the few novels I've read that I enjoyed reading. The author writes very well and has good language organization skills. It's not embarrassing. It's good-looking. I highly recommend [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

Very good-looking, Tomato's only book about a master-disciple mission that is more realistic. It writes about the tragedy of a master-disciple relationship that is not tolerated by the world. The writing is excellent and the true feelings are more realistic than other master-disciple relationships. [Laugh][laugh][shy][laugh][shy][shy][shy][shy][laugh]

Very good-looking, this is one of the best books on immortality I have ever seen. The relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is the best, and the dialogue is particularly interesting. I have read more than 300 chapters now, and I feel that the male protagonist and the female protagonist are a perfect couple. Deepen the relationship between the male and female protagonists through daily chores and battles Believe me, I read it carefully for 23 hours by myself

This is my first time writing a book review. The description of emotions in this book is quite delicate, vivid and relaxed. There is also a discussion on the teacher's love between childhood and adulthood, which is thought-provoking. It's not a very brainless and refreshing article, but it is still worth recalling if you read it calmly. I highly recommend reading it. It is considered a good product on the Tomato platform. I would like to encourage you by giving it a high score. [Like] At first, I really came here for the cool and sweet stories, but the discussion of the relationship between the male and female protagonists in the book gradually attracted me, which was eye-catching. Big cheers to the author. [Bookshelf plus one] Supplement: Chongshishuangwen? No no no. This is simply a guide to love for virgins. It accurately interprets a woman's mind and helps you quickly overcome communication barriers and reach deep into a girl's heart. [The masterpiece of bird food][The masterpiece of bird food]

It's great, it's so awesome, but the number of words is too few, I can't read it, not enough at all. I hope the author will never stop updating it (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The author has found his own rhythm in this book, which is significantly improved compared to the previous books. Come on, it will be popular if it doesn't collapse later.

The emotional description is very delicate, the ups and downs of the plot are fascinating, and the male and female protagonists are lifelike✪ω✪. Those who have not fallen into the trap can come in. It is very sweet and easy to keep sweet (o^з^o)💞

Overall, it is a qualified and enjoyable novel to relieve stress. The subtle changes in the master-student relationship and the plot of the protagonist's counterattack can accurately meet the readers' emotional catharsis needs and is suitable for audiences who prefer strong plots and fast-paced fantasy themes.

Just because it has a single female protagonist, it's a five-star review

It's really good to read. There's not much to say. The plot development is very reasonable and the protagonist is moderately improved. Unlike other books like Long Aotian, who has already become the strongest person in the world even after a few dozen chapters. His combat power directly collapsed. It's not worth reading. I still hope that the author can promote the [main plot] more. It's good to read.

Those of you who like fantasy single-female protagonists can write books without any fuss. The sugar level is absolutely full. In Tomato, there are not many single-female protagonists that can be considered high-quality, but Mingyue's books are basically good. But no one is perfect, and no book is perfect, let alone female writers writing male videos, so don't ask for too much. Let me tell you what I have to say, this book is full of sweetness, but not refreshing. The reason for the betrayal at the beginning was somewhat reluctant and could not be brought in easily. Seeing the Qianlong competition and exchanging injuries for kills caused Su to feel distressed and break the defense. He yelled at God to make a move, but it conflicted with the follow-up fight between the male and female protagonists who practiced fists and fists without mercy, and could not highlight the special skills of the male and female protagonists (a sword master and a physical master, fighting Bo with the body from the beginning to the end?). Of course, without paying special attention to details, these are just minor issues, so I am still willing to give it a five-star rating. (I am personally very picky and rarely finish reading and give five-star reviews.) Here are some humble opinions I gave. They may be a bit old-fashioned, but they are still effective if used well (it is recommended for reference but not for application, as it will affect your style): Emotional accumulation and release: Without affecting the sweetness, let the male and female protagonists wait for a period of time. Firstly, the male protagonists can have their own room for improvement. Secondly, the short separation can guide the readers' emotions with longing and look forward to a better return of the female protagonists. But we can't be separated for too long, otherwise it will affect the unique style and characteristics of @. (How many times have you mentioned in your article: eating too much delicious food will make it boring. When you wrote it, you just thought that it would be boring, right? In your book, you didn't mention it at all.) Men's competitiveness and self-esteem: In terms of spiritual practice, the female protagonist improves too quickly and cannot highlight the male protagonist's counterattack with golden fingers. If she cannot satisfy her competitive spirit, she will lack a sense of satisfaction. In terms of getting along with each other, although the male protagonist is the weaker party, there should be very few people who would lean into their girlfriend's arms and rest their heads on their shoulders, unless they really think they are elders in their hearts, and it is a behavior that only occurs when they are young and immature. Of course, once in a while, it can be regarded as comfort and support when tired, but doing this for a long time is a bit lacking in manliness and special self-esteem. (It's so pretentious. A man can't put down his dignity to do this. I also care about my image in your eyes.) Combat and pleasure: I want to report your matching mechanism. When the male and female protagonists are weak, the matched enemy is too strong and they can only escape and use a third party to contain them. When the male and female protagonists fight, the novices who match each other can only be crushed, which is no fun at all. The time for revenge is too late, and revenge with a crushing force does not have the pleasure that one should have after revenge. In short, there is not enough urgency when escaping (there are only twists and turns), not enough pressure when fighting (the enemies in the early stage are too weak, and there is no evenly matched battle), and there is no challenge when taking revenge (you only take revenge when you are invincible. There is no sense of satisfaction without challenge). The above is just my humble opinion: for reference only.

Dare to write, if you write a plot where the master wrongly blamed Chu Ning (it was a misunderstanding, and the truth will be known later), and then Chu Ning was injured, the master knew the truth and regretted it. What I said is a bit crude, but it feels like this kind of plot of regret and redemption, which makes the plot ups and downs and feels more interesting.

It's not bad. It's a good book if it arouses interest as you continue reading. But we can still see the difference in thinking between men and women. In the system (haha, the author forgot about the system) and in love, the male protagonist is obviously too entangled. There is no problem in caring about the other person's feelings. But the most problematic thing is that he is not strong enough and cares too much. That is very clownish because you can't do anything even if you care. Just like how men write about women, I hope that a neutral person can write a new routine book in the future, so that maybe the thinking of both men and women can be taken into account.

What can I say about this book? It's a romance novel with the skin of a cultivator [face covering] [face covering]. If you read it as a cultivating immortal novel, it will be very boring, but if you look at it from another angle, emmm, the master and the apprentice are here to fall in love. It's really good. A little chef who only understands theory but no practice, and an old cook who is scheming and has no practice, amused me to death. And this author definitely has experience with Liu Bei. Family love can be at the end of the world but not at the end of the world, which is a bit exciting.