Hello, this book is not a super invincible novel where you will be invincible after completing the process of more than ten chapters, then wake up to take over the world, and get drunk and fall in the lap of a beautiful woman.
There is only one argument in this book: what kind of changes chakra can bring to the world.
Personally, the application level of chakra in the original work is: a group of gorillas holding ak as a stick.
Too many plots and characters that are tragic for the sake of tragedy.
Note: Although the author has said so much, he still likes Naruto very much, but he likes it selectively.
Finally, regardless of whether you read this book or not, I wish you a happy life!
Praise the Emperor!
(You have been drafted!. Jpg)
Reader comments
The "search" is reflected in the title of the book.
Original text: Others describe the protagonist:
"You..." The corner of her mouth twitched, "Sure enough, you care more about principles than winning, right?"
Talk about exploring and optimizing existing cultivation methods, such as medicinal baths.
Exploring Self, original text: "My control over emotions is 'suppression', not 'control'."
The protagonist's advantage is probably that he knows the plot and his way of thinking.
There is currently too little space, and many plots have not been developed. I look forward to the follow-up.
Latest chapter at time of comment: Chapter 41.
Author, I'm very optimistic about you, don't mess around.
Infighting before the war and testing the 5 or 6 year old Uchiha was a bit abstract.
When the other villages took a look, they found that the Uchiha genius and Orochimaru's disciple was being ostracized by the Uchiha, and the Third Generation and Orochimaru did not come forward to help him. Good opportunity. Konoha doesn't value talents, so turn over quickly.
You don't even need to turn around, you just need to say a few words and make a promise that when you rebel against the village in the future, you will give priority to coming to their village.
It's okay if you can't do it, just say a few words. Konoha, Uchiha would not trust this genius. I have gone so far. He really has no grudge at all. I don't believe it.
Forget about the internal fighting, the emotions were already very intense. Killing a few people randomly in other villages intensified the conflict. You said you weren't the one who killed them? I don't believe it.
Unless the author wrote some kind of acting to expose the spy, it shows that Uchiha is not really stupid, knowing that he will not win or lose by rebelling at this time.
To do so, only slight changes to the plot are required.
If the author is willing to rewrite, it would be best if the conflict does not break out so early, not to mention completely referring to the timeline.
But in the original work, the changes in the Nine-Tails - suspicion of Uchiha controlling the Nine-Tails - Uchiha's migration to the fringe - intensification of conflicts - rebellion.
By analogy, you should have something similar to the Nine-Tails Incident, where the Uchiha as a whole were treated unfairly. Many people are dissatisfied, and dissatisfied people gather. Konoha does not understand dissatisfaction, and conflicts intensify.
If you were willing to remove Emiko from being bullied, this scene would be great.
Written this way, the 5 or 6-year-old protagonist will not be involved in the political whirlpool.
Later, when the war broke out, the conflict shifted. Uchiha accumulated military exploits and delayed time until Namikaze Minato came to power. The protagonist helps Minato avoid the Nine-Tails Rebellion.
There is also the atmosphere of preparation for war created earlier. It is not appropriate to write a warm scene in Chapter 53 because the atmosphere does not fit.
There is room for interpretation in Chapter 52. It can be explained that the apparent harmonious coexistence is actually concealing the conflict of interests and achieving the illusion of harmonious coexistence.
Chapter 55, followed by 56 chapters, is warm on the surface but quickly exposed.
Not bad, come on, write according to your own ideas
Emiko is still gentle!
It can be seen that the author wants to write something in-depth, but it will take many, many chapters, and it is still in its infancy [face covering]
I've read dozens of chapters and it feels pretty good
The "search" is reflected in the title of the book. Original text: Others describe the protagonist: "You..." The corner of her mouth twitched, "Sure enough, you care more about principles than winning, right?" Talk about exploring and optimizing existing cultivation methods, such as medicinal baths. Exploring Self, original text: "My control over emotions is 'suppression', not 'control'." The protagonist's advantage is probably that he knows the plot and his way of thinking. There is currently too little space, and many plots have not been developed. I look forward to the follow-up. Latest chapter at time of comment: Chapter 41. Author, I'm very optimistic about you, don't mess around. Infighting before the war and testing the 5 or 6 year old Uchiha was a bit abstract. When the other villages took a look, they found that the Uchiha genius and Orochimaru's disciple was being ostracized by the Uchiha, and the Third Generation and Orochimaru did not come forward to help him. Good opportunity. Konoha doesn't value talents, so turn over quickly. You don't even need to turn around, you just need to say a few words and make a promise that when you rebel against the village in the future, you will give priority to coming to their village. It's okay if you can't do it, just say a few words. Konoha, Uchiha would not trust this genius. I have gone so far. He really has no grudge at all. I don't believe it. Forget about the internal fighting, the emotions were already very intense. Killing a few people randomly in other villages intensified the conflict. You said you weren't the one who killed them? I don't believe it. Unless the author wrote some kind of acting to expose the spy, it shows that Uchiha is not really stupid, knowing that he will not win or lose by rebelling at this time. To do so, only slight changes to the plot are required. If the author is willing to rewrite, it would be best if the conflict does not break out so early, not to mention completely referring to the timeline. But in the original work, the changes in the Nine-Tails - suspicion of Uchiha controlling the Nine-Tails - Uchiha's migration to the fringe - intensification of conflicts - rebellion. By analogy, you should have something similar to the Nine-Tails Incident, where the Uchiha as a whole were treated unfairly. Many people are dissatisfied, and dissatisfied people gather. Konoha does not understand dissatisfaction, and conflicts intensify. If you were willing to remove Emiko from being bullied, this scene would be great. Written this way, the 5 or 6-year-old protagonist will not be involved in the political whirlpool. Later, when the war broke out, the conflict shifted. Uchiha accumulated military exploits and delayed time until Namikaze Minato came to power. The protagonist helps Minato avoid the Nine-Tails Rebellion. There is also the atmosphere of preparation for war created earlier. It is not appropriate to write a warm scene in Chapter 53 because the atmosphere does not fit. There is room for interpretation in Chapter 52. It can be explained that the apparent harmonious coexistence is actually concealing the conflict of interests and achieving the illusion of harmonious coexistence. Chapter 55, followed by 56 chapters, is warm on the surface but quickly exposed.
Not bad, come on, write according to your own ideas
Emiko is still gentle!
It can be seen that the author wants to write something in-depth, but it will take many, many chapters, and it is still in its infancy [face covering]
I've read dozens of chapters and it feels pretty good