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Two problems. The character of the protagonist is not described well. It is a bit extreme and the difference is a bit big. I personally think that the protagonist should be free-spirited, carefree, drunk, and self-centered. If someone needs help, the protagonist will help, but if it is too troublesome, he will not. For example, the first time a monster destroys a place, the protagonist will immediately stand up to help, because the monster destroys a lot and affects the protagonist's daily life. The second problem is that the protagonist's sister has the ability to cure her, but even if she cannot be cured, she has to wait for her to think about it. She will only think about it if she does not encounter a major crisis. The monster should be cured the first time it appears. The reasons can be said to be light. As for whether she wants to stand up or not, it is up to her to choose. You let her choose. She doesn't even know that she can stand up as long as she wants. What do you think? I suggest adding a setting. The protagonist informed her with light to let her sister know that she can be cured and stand up as long as she wants.

Started with Saka, and then was threatened by Jing to follow her orders and join the service department

... The manga's highlights are all blown away. He directly calls the nicknames in the anime and joins the service department without caring about his sister [face covering]

You must work hard, brother who writes brilliant chapters! [Cry][cry]

Howl look! But I have a small opinion. I personally like the protagonist in the Ultraman novels who have more "correct views". If he can't transform during his first transformation, why not change it to a dark Saka aura that absorbs despair and deliberately restricts the protagonist's transformation, and then absorbs enough and is rescued by a Saka aura that breaks through the restriction [like], or don't put so much emphasis on the protagonist deliberately watching the show, right? It's okay if you can't change your body if you don't absorb enough energy [Love]

Why go to school? You can take a break. It's useless if you go to school. Don't tell me. Once you have the strength, go work.

The protagonist is suspected of having his left brain attacking his right brain. He looks on indifferently at the front but shows mercy later.

It would be much better if I just wrote at the beginning that I only picked up the dark bracelet.

Apart from the forced entry into the service department, I don't think there are any big problems. From my point of view, Qing Lian should not be included. What do I say? It's not that joining the department is not good, but it is too common and poorly written. Putting this aside, the quality is still good. From what I have seen so far, although I don't know if it's your modified version, but I think it's pretty good now. Is the sister element a poisonous point? At least not in your book. Without the sister, I'm afraid I'll just let myself go. Nexus next door is quite good. The female protagonist's appearance is among the top batches of various dramas. Aesthetics Online Well, seeing as how you downplayed the incident of joining the army later, let's forget about it.

I just finished reading Chapter 15 and it was really interesting. Light and darkness are two sides of the same coin. This book is really good.

How should I put it? It gives me the feeling of Noah looking for Mitsuhiko Ishibori to be the suitable person. It doesn't suit me very well, but I still wish the author all the best.

It's okay. Given the relationship between brother and sister, the novel about the kiss will have to be blocked sooner or later.

I'll give it five stars if I wrote it myself [smiles]

This novel is very in line with my taste. Although there are some poisonous points, they are not major and the advantages are enough to outweigh them. Good luck, author. But I still hope that the protagonist will not be too cold and ruthless. Darkness and cruelty are for enemies, while light and kindness are for people with good intentions. This is Ultraman.

How to say it? Just like a newborn baby has great power, actually I would rather say that has great power or that

I quite like Saga

Don't stop cheering, cheering, cheering

Good writing and plot

This one should be more normal. I couldn't bear the other Nexus book [facepalm] and Saijo's book. I saw the blood pressure soaring and quit immediately [facepalm]

It's too little. Don't take a break. One chapter a day is not enough to fill the gap between your teeth. I want to read more than 40 chapters.

Very very very very very very very like it

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's okay, it's a little bit toxic at the beginning, but it's well written in the back.

It's pretty good on a daily basis. Are you serious about the 5.1 Rating? Maybe it's because I don't want him to enter the dark room.

A great book [crying][crying][crying][crying] Don't stop updating it [sending my heart] otherwise I will be [angry][angry][angry][angry]

Personally I think it's okay, you can take a look at it in your spare time. [Thinking][thinking]

Hope you can stick to it.

Not bad, at least it's not the Virgin.

Although many people are not optimistic about you, I think your writing is still very good, so I will give you a five-star encouragement and let others protect you [note]

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