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Come on, there are not many words yet and there is not much traffic. I hope the author can stick to it. It is indeed very interesting. The above is written to the author, and the following is a short review of 90,000 words: First of all, the title is a bit deceptive. What I have seen so far is the daily life of the protagonist in the village, and I have just started to release the first song. It's not that the content is not good, it's mainly that it doesn't fit the title of the book. Secondly, most of the content is enriched by the interaction between the heroine and the second heroine, but most of them are one-way. The heroine is not required to show "sameness" to the second heroine in the early stage, but she should not be too cold, at least she hopes to be more like a friend. Finally, there is the character design. Let's talk about it. The current character design is still very consistent with the direction I like. Let's talk about the heroine first. For example, the heroine's maturity in the reincarnation is sluggish in feelings, or the setting of the heroine as a girl with strange powers, which I think is good. Looking at the direction, the heroine will grow to 175 in the future. I hope that with this setting, the author will not make the protagonist too "fascinating", otherwise it will not fit the protagonist's character, such as emphasizing European style and "sexy" aspects. I can only say that these elements are indeed not in line with the heroine's current personality. Let's talk about the second female lead. This role is really lovable and I hope she can keep it. Whether it's her tolerance for the heroine's rather cold behavior or her own little possessiveness towards the heroine, these are all plus points in my opinion. In the end, this book is really good-looking, quite slow-paced, but I quite like these little daily moments. The popularity of this book is really high now. Watching this book go from being unknown to being read by tens of thousands of people gives me a kind of nurturing happiness.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a flavorful version of everyday fiction. Nowadays, the environment for Lily fiction is getting worse and worse. Most of the book readers are fan fiction. Pineapple is all kinds of useless cuteness, or it's routine Western fantasy and fairy tales (in fact, most of them rely on driving to attract readers). I didn't expect to find such a fairy tale in Tomato. It's true that it's plain and simple. It feels like when I watched Xiaomi's "Rebirth of the Female Schoolmaster" (it's a pity that Xiaomi returned to the newly opened daily novel and became a eunuch again) Regarding the plot of this book, I believe that most children who grew up in Sichuan towns can relate to it. It's kind, real, and plain, but certainly not boring. The scenes are natural, there are no exaggerated dramatic conflicts, and there is no need for any stereotyped villains.

It's really pretty. It's very different from other male-to-female ones. It's pretty good-looking, but the heroine is too cold to the second girl. I hope the heroine will get closer to the second girl. After all, the heroine is too cold to the second girl.

It's a very good daily love story. The protagonist's life is based on a lot of the author's own experiences, which makes it look very real. It also brought back a lot of my childhood memories. The setting is perfect and mistakes will be corrected. So directly 5 stars

This book is a slow-burning, urban rebirth story that unfolds slowly, and readers can read it slowly. In terms of time: the protagonist was reborn at the end of December 2007, and it was 2008 a few days later. [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] Can you give yourself a good review [shy][shy][shy]

The local customs and character creation are both excellent, but the entrepreneurial part is like a boxing match between Dachao, which is too point-deducting and boring, but there is still a lot of writing. Overall, it's pretty good. It feels a bit like reading a memoir when you're older.

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There are more than 400 chapters. Let me summarize this book (listening and reading makes reading very slow) It is very delicate, with the pace of life that daily novels should have, coupled with the rebirth of economic development, objectively speaking, it is already one of the top novels in Tomato. Although it does not have top-notch writing style, when I read novels, I don't read the writing, only the plot. Coupled with the author's personal experience, it is easy for people to get involved. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The first one is that there are too few people watching the story, which makes both people and scores unable to improve. The second is that the heroine's feelings for the hero are very obscure and there is no progress for a long time. However, most of the time there are career and daily life or other events interspersed in it, so it is not a big problem. In conclusion, a highly recommended book, the only slow-paced book in Tomato that changes daily routines. Is there any meal replacement? It's like a sense of age + rebirth as a child + gender change [cry] [cry] [cry]

This is a daily novel about urban rebirth with restrained sweetness and full of atmosphere. The protagonist is reborn with his past life experiences, and he and the arrogant and sensitive Qingmei accompany each other day and night as best friends, making the feeling of pull of "a friend above the level, but a lover yet" very real. The heroine is soft-spoken and possessive, and the lines from the book title she repeats are all filled with duplicitous thoughts. The male protagonist is gentle and sober, preferring to hide in the details. He guards the boundaries of best friends in the early stage, but slowly falls into love in the later stage, and the emotional transition is delicate and natural. There is no sadomasochism or vicious supporting characters in the book. It relies on daily life on campus, mutual companionship, and mutual support to promote relationships. It is plain but heartbreaking. The career line and the emotional line run parallel, and the rhythm is slow and healing. The disadvantage is that the daily life in the later part is a bit repetitive, and the supporting roles are thin. The overall text is sweet but not greasy, focusing on two-way travel and long-term companionship. It is suitable for readers who like delicate, ambiguous, and relaxing daily novels.

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It's very good. I've read too many fast-paced novels and all kinds of poisons. It's so satisfying to suddenly read such a slow-paced and refreshing novel. It was super exciting to watch the young fish develop and grow their business step by step through learning. This kind of development infrastructure builds up the technology tree step by step and builds a business empire. He and Susu's emotional development, from the promise made when they were young, to the sprouting of ignorant love, and Susu's counterattack after realizing her feelings [Shy] Every little bit of ordinary life, super delicious [laugh] Cold on the outside and hot on the inside, black, long, straight, mouthless lady The author must keep writing (˘ ³˘)❤ Keep writing and keep writing😋😋😋Come on! Write about Lily's big sister!

It's a pretty good book, specifically, it's not cliché, but it's said to be a lily novel, and it took more than 300 chapters for the book to fall in love with each other. The development speed is too slow, and it's easy to lose readers. To be honest, this book is the latest one I have read that confirmed my relationship.

Very beautiful The only drawback is that it's a bit bland. (Those who want to see pretentious fights, reversals, extraordinary, and business fights can leave) Trivia: Although your sister Shen is extremely powerful, she is good at business and has perfect scores in science, liberal arts, art, music, and sports. She taught herself advanced mathematics, computer architecture, finance, and integrated electronics in junior high school. Her brain is comparable to a quantum counting machine (1% concentration is equivalent to the level of a normal person's whole brain). It took her three years to create a small national "leading" company... But your sister Shen is just an "ordinary person." [Smile][smile][smile] Some speculations come to mind: 1. All of this is just a fantasy world generated by the protagonist in the "past life" uploading his consciousness to the virtual world. Its world background is based on the world in the protagonist's impression (therefore, the protagonist is the "Creator God" of this world, so those statues cannot withstand her worship) [Dream ending? 2. The protagonist is implanted with the memory of the protagonist in parallel time and space by a higher-dimensional creature (the author) [standard ending] [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

It's good-looking, and the Wenzhaogong aspect is a bit toxic to me, but if you want to accumulate capital in a rebirth novel, it will more or less have some elements of Wenzhaogong. The writing style is good, at least I feel comfortable with it. As for Becoming a Hundred Tags, this book doesn't seem to have any descriptions of female depravity, so it can actually be regarded as the protagonist is a man-machine who doesn't understand emotions (?, But I'm very curious that he has written so much now when he is still in junior high school, what should I write in college? I don't read the book very carefully, but I do think this is a good novel. The author must not be too arrogant! Happy every day meow

After reading it, I can only say that the author's writing is very good, and it can be regarded as one of the best among the transformation novels. The author has a good sense of controlling the atmosphere of the current article, and the relationship between the two heroines is also gradually developing. It has been a long time since I have seen such an urban novel that suits my appetite. I admire the author greatly [Like]

The pace is slow, the stages of emotional development are clear, the author's legendary update is Wang Liangeng's 200 days, the volume is large, and the subject matter is novel and currently the only one on Tomato. The descriptions of things from the past era are very chronological, and I think this is the biggest highlight of this book. [Love]

This is a story about the age of transformation. This is the first time I've seen it. It's very well written. It has a bit of a male flavor. The only drawback is that the junior high school period is too long. I almost exhausted myself from reading it. The author's writing style is good, and many things written have the flavor of the past, but the rhythm is not well controlled. I have read 400 chapters from the first to the third year of junior high school. In fact, the emotional line should be focused on writing in high school, as junior high school is still too ignorant. The author seems to have been troubled by the worldly world. Tomato-free meal replacement should be popularized. This is the first time I have read this type of book for more than ten years. Come on.

The writing style is excellent. Although it is a cute novel, it is very down-to-earth. It allows me, a foreigner, to feel like I am in the Sichuan countryside described by the author. The plot and characters may be a bit inconsistent, but as a literary and artistic creation like a light novel, it is not uncomfortable, but it is a unique sense of refreshment. The overall pace of this book is very slow. As of now, the timeline of Chapter 194 has only lasted for more than half a year. The career line has just officially started and the love line... Currently in junior high school is the first step in the deterioration of friendship -> high school can (dare?) Really talk about it. In short, it's a very promising future

Since so few people have read it, I will write a long review. First of all, the author's writing skills are still very good. I think the description of the scenes and the planning of the characters are very good. Everyone is alive and vivid. It is no longer like other Lily novels, except for the protagonist, everyone else has no sense of existence and lacks overall activity. But I have read about a hundred chapters of this book now, and I can say that it feels very smooth, the plot is well arranged, especially the various life scenes are described very delicately, and the plot moves smoothly. However, we can make subtle adjustments to the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine to deepen the progress of the relationship. However, considering the age issue at this stage, this is good. However, we can add a little ambiguity or charm to the daily life, in terms of the sensitivity of the protagonist... In this aspect I can give some detailed descriptions, but it's still too small at this stage. Hey, that's good too. The plot doesn't have to be drawn out too fast. It would be great to move things along slowly and orderly. If you keep writing like this, you won't make too many mistakes in terms of the protagonist's financial development and family management. Words is a white, heart-warming masterpiece. I think it can be appropriately adapted to family, society, or other reasonable arrangements. It may be more fun to create an emotional roller coaster. I am looking forward to the scene of the young fish being locked up in a small dark room. In the end, the rating of this book is really too low. Press According to my standards for reading novels, the score is 9.6. However, the author still needs to pay attention to the age and current development of the protagonist. He must arrange a reasonable reason that is not obtrusive. Not to mention that it must be realistic and at least have a certain degree of feasibility, otherwise there will be some poisonous points. Okay, I won't be too long-winded. This is a good article, worth reading. You can indeed learn something from it. It's very good. In addition, I am 22 years old and graduated from university. I am not illiterate. The evaluation is very fair. If you don't like it, please don't criticize it. Thank you!

I will be the most direct, the most truthful, the most thorough, the most naked, the harshest, the sharpest, the most profound, the most realistic, the least modified, the least roundabout, the least circuitous, the least circuitous, the most heart-breaking, the most hard-core, and the dryest Crisp, the neatest, the most refreshing, the most decisive, the least ink-stained, the least procrastinating, the least sloppy, the most painful, the most ruthless, the least humane, the least showy, the least concerned about dignity, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, the most straightforward Go straight to the point, most directly to the point, most directly to the core, most tearing apart the appearance, most tearing away the disguise, least foreshadowing, least polite, least polite, least flattering, least hypocritical, least sensational, least pretentious, least artificial, least internal friction, The least nonsense, the least verbosity, the least redundancy, the least empty, the least detours, the least detours, the least grinding, the least coy, the least coy, the least pretentious, the least artificial, the least pretentious, let me tell you: this book is quite good.

The writing is really good. The author has rich life experience and the article is full of life. It deeply describes the hardships of the people at the bottom of the countryside, but it is not dark. Each character has his own story. The urban part is also a cool article. The lily theme is also implemented in daily life. But Susu is too young now and has no feeling of love. The protagonist is also (I have read more than 200 chapters. I thought I was about to take the high school entrance examination [exploration]). I hope to spend more words on the business part in the future (after all, this combination is quite novel? [Thinking] I rarely read urban articles) Achieve the protagonist's business empire goals

The writing is great, but there is one big problem, which is about the learning and competition in it. Well, I can only say that the author may not be too exposed to these things, which makes it difficult for me to understand. The rest is great, and I give you a five-star review.

This is Return Tomato's first novel. Most of the plots in the article are reasonable and interesting, but the author doesn't seem to like writing plots that Tomato people like to read, so it feels bland. But it is undeniable that this is a good book, but the data of this book should not be very good. Summary, it is a good book, the plot is reasonable, the author's writing is very good, but the character of the protagonist is not likeable, the author's writing is too conservative, the characters have too many conflicts, many unnecessary characters appear too frequently, it took me a long time to remember their names, it is a very good novel, you can read it

It's quite good. The description of Shen Susu's child is very suitable for her age and character. You can feel the pure innocence and kindness in her. The actions of the young fish are also very logical, and the objective constraints such as the gambling father and the grandmother's uneasiness are also very reasonable. Watching the young fish overcome these difficulties little by little, I feel comfortable. The characterizations in it are not black and white, nor extremely evil and extremely good, but portray characters one after another from various perspectives of ordinary people, which is very consistent with real life. I feel that the author should be based on part of his personal experience. I hope the author will update it soon! The word count is still a bit short now, and it's all gone in no time.

It's a good read. I can't sleep at night. I've already read the high school chapter. I hope to add some plots in the back where the protagonist is attracted to the heroine but doesn't know it. For example, in some ordinary moments, sometimes looking at the heroine's side face in a daze, having physical contact with the heroine and bumping into each other, etc. Before the high school chapter, it's like the heroine likes the protagonist unilaterally, but the protagonist has no feelings for the heroine. , Now they have agreed to establish a relationship, but the heroine is still in unrequited love. If the protagonist does not have any feelings, it will look a bit awkward. It is better to have some descriptions of mutual attraction. The above minor shortcomings do not hide the flaws. This book is of very high quality on Tomato. If you like reading these types of themes, it will be a hit for you. It will be praised and praised.

The author's writing is very good, the writing style is delicate, and the character creation is very successful. Everyone has their own thoughts, but the pace of the main plot in the early stage is slow, and some of Susu's children's actions in the early stage give people a feeling of disrespect for the protagonist. , But after it becomes 1v1, the future of this character is uncertain. Maybe this sudden change is a bit difficult for me to accept. After all, between Su Su and Lin, I prefer Lin. There are thousands of people with different faces, and everyone has their own favorite character. I may have to save this book for a while. After all, this book is very interesting and I have been following it, but it is also very uncomfortable for my favorite character to suddenly drop. I wish the author better and better in the future.

I'm really excited to finish this book! The best friend setting of Shen Youyu and Shen Susu really struck a chord with me. There are no bloody misunderstandings, just the warmth and funny daily life of two people running in both directions. I can't help but laugh out loud every time I watch it. The author's writing style is particularly down-to-earth and full of details. Even the scene where the bus is crowded and even the engine cover is full of people is written vividly and has a strong sense of immersion. The character creation is also very vivid. Each character has his own little personality. It is not suspended or artificial, and the more you watch, the more you become obsessed with it. 9.0 Points are really well deserved. I have given it to all my friends. I strongly recommend everyone to watch it!

The interaction between the characters is very interesting, and the plot and story background are also very sufficient.

It's good to watch. The protagonist is focused on making money, but there will also be interactions (basically staying together, even if they make money, they will interact without affecting it). The other protagonist has always been thinking about getting closer to the relationship between the two parties, and at the same time, he is guarding against the people around him. The character description is also very suitable for children (in the early stage), but they will grow up later, but the personality will not change much. I don't have any regrets looking at it now. In fact, I also want to ask the author, are the squad leader and another friend the deputy CP? After all, Shen Susu is too contagious [laughter][laughter][laughter]

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M 4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good.