HP: Beyond the Rails

It's great to watch, and I personally feel that the pace is pretty good. The heroine is not particularly slow, and the relationship between the two Black brothers is not that bad. Barty Jr. Has entered Ravenclaw this time, and the relationship between Severus and the Marauders is not as bad as in the original work. It is worth mentioning that this time our great Mr. Double Agent clearly realizes the unreliability of Voldemort and his forces. There is no Blindly pursuing the power given to him by Voldemort, hoping that the ending will be good, there will be several times in the middle that he will travel to parallel worlds, which surprised me. I remember that the introduction did not seem to have written it [Thinking] In short, everything is heading towards a good ending, and also, the main character saw GGAD fanfics (containing large scale) and so on... Hehe [laughing] I almost couldn't hold my breath when I saw this. To sum up, it looks good. Please give me more updates. Cheers to the author.

This book really has a sense of cold humor. I couldn't stop reading it and almost burst out laughing. The author is very talented at making things humorous and funny. [Pause face] This is very interesting writing, please write more The characters are written very vividly and vividly on the page. I read it in one go and it was not enough. I've been looking everywhere, but I can't find anything similar. Why are there so few Ravenclaw heroines, especially in the parent generation, and the cp is Sirius's, even fewer [laughing] I finally found one, and it's serialized [crying]

I think it's very good-looking, the description of the characters is very good, and their relationship is absorbed. Even if the protagonist has improved a little, this is the kind of character I want to see. I have a character, which means, well, he may not believe me very much, but his death is also difficult for me to accept, and then, so when every character dies, I am very It's uncomfortable. I really like everyone's happy school days. Then some little fake adventures and so on are also very good. The relationship between Sirius and the heroine is not so urgent. It's more like the kind of person who has a crush. I don't dare to say it. Then the heroine is a little slow, but she reacts quickly. I really like the serialization of the book for the first time.

The author still needs to spread positive energy. After all, campus bullying can be big or small. Most people who read fan fiction are not very old. If teenagers feel that one of their classmates is being bullied on campus just because they are not familiar with each other and can be a bystander, then there is really something wrong with their thinking...[Smile][smile][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

A particularly good-looking double line interspersed with intersperses from the child era. The level and quality of this creation can undoubtedly be rated as excellent. The emotional drama between Kara and Sirius is smooth and smooth. Although the author said that he is not very good at writing emotional drama, I think it is particularly good. The daily true feelings are revealed with life-like fragments. I look forward to their subsequent stories. This one from the child era punished Peter Pettigrew. I enjoyed watching it. The heroine's magic is very powerful. It is not a loss to become a shareholder. I am looking forward to the family line. Will the sister who died in the car accident appear later?

In the vast ocean of books, the novels written by Qing Hesui are like a bright pearl, exuding a unique and charming light, making people immersed in it and unable to extricate themselves. Qing Hesui's words seem to have magical power. With just a stroke of his pen, he can outline vivid and vivid characters. The characters in the book seem to jump out of the pages, with distinctive personality traits and rich emotions, establishing an indescribable connection with readers. Whether it is the brave and resolute protagonist or the supporting character with complex personality, each one is portrayed with such profoundness that it makes people feel that they are living around us and have their own joys, sorrows and joys. Their stories are like portrayals of life, but more exciting than reality, arousing deep resonance among readers. The plot of the novel is full of ups and downs, like riding a roller coaster.

Give yourself a five-star [shy]

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It's great. The heroine is so strong that I feel at ease. Sirius's self-advocacy is a bit interesting [laughing] ps: I heard that the score of fan fiction is too high and it is easy to download. This book is full of stars in my heart [blowing kiss]

It's really beautiful. The characters are very vividly written.

It's very beautiful. I recommend it. The author writes it out of pure interest. If you don't think it's good, don't scold the author. I'm still holding the bowl. The heroine is a person with a relatively sense of justice. She has a super strong magic spell. There is no strong woman who is stronger than a man. She will not weaken the heroine because she wants to show the halo of the hero. There is no misunderstanding with the double arrow. But in the early stage, the heroine is dull, she is still young after all👀

It's very interesting. Sirius in the original world did not continue to escape, and the author's great foreshadowing is also very good. The only thing I am curious about now is whether the girl who looks like Carla in the original world is Carla's sister [Sending Hearts]

Nice! The author's writing style is really good. Please update more often and don't stop updating!

Very beautiful, very beautiful

Very heartwarming story

Very beautiful and worth seeing

Yeah, it looks good, I like it

It was very interesting. I didn't skip a chapter. I skipped every chapter I read before.

It's beautiful. I really like the relationship between Kara and Sirius. The author needs to work harder and make more updates [Love]

Very fragrant rice, cheers to the author [blowing kiss]

Very good-looking (๑• . •๑) Sirius is a bit narcissistic

Very nice author. I will always support you.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! Big cheers for the author! Very well written!

So pretty! It's so beautiful [Adore][Adore][Adore][Admiration] But please, the author, please don't abuse me [Cry][Cry][Cry]