Hilda's Comeback

Very delicately written!!! The description of the environment and all aspects is outstanding, and there is a writing style that should not be serialized on Tomato (it is sparkling gold!). I look forward to the follow-up and whether she is really Ed's illegitimate daughter. ?

The writing is very good, the heroine is calm and calm, but in the world view of ice and fire, can you give the heroine more gold fingers? Now the illegitimate daughter starts the game, her status is not enough, and she has no strength. It feels too difficult. I really want to see the heroine become stronger soon.

Let me give myself a perfect score

I feel like the writing is quite realistic, but it also makes the protagonist too kind. Even if I fall to my death as the younger brother I had some contact with before, I have nothing to do with the protagonist. To the protagonist, I am just a stranger who is related by blood.

The writing is very good and the characters are not OOC. I have not read the books, only the dramas. My only worry now is that the later originals (dramas) will drag down the secondary creations. However, in the later stage, the changes should be relatively large, and it will not have much to do with the original work.

When I see the part where the heroine is preparing to leave for King's Landing, let me first talk about the advantages. The writing is very delicate and makes people feel very immersed. Secondly, I want to talk about the characterization, let's talk about the heroine. I have only seen the present of the heroine, and I have not seen the past and future of the heroine. To put it simply, we don't know what the heroine's past experience was. It seems a bit pale and thin. The heroine's character is a bit passive. I don't know how her personality has changed after going to King's Landing. I will evaluate it after seeing that.

It's like watching another version of the Game of Thrones TV series. The images, scenes, and sounds all come alive on the page. The character and actions of the heroine Hilda, as well as the descriptions of the original characters such as the Wolf family and the Lion family, are all very close to the style of Game of Thrones. There are many details foreshadowing, it feels like a rushing river under the ice, and a grand story will unfold later. I look forward to the follow-up.

It's beautiful, and the author's writing is very delicate, but the first part is too miserable and depressing. I'd better watch it after the heroine counterattacks 😫

Very delicate writing style. The author's writing skills surpass those of most Tomato authors. I hope I can persist in finishing the article (and I also hope that I must insist on no cp)

It's rare to see the text of Game of Thrones