I Played a Supporting Role in "Quick Time Travel" and the Plot Fell Apart Again

It looks great, and the writing is really good, but could it be a little less about women wearing men's clothes? When a woman wears a man and falls in love with a man, the feeling is no different from BL. I'm reading the copy right now, and I really like this heart-throb novel. Can you remove the romance tag? Change to no cp tag

The plot is the main thing, and the writing is secondary! No matter how good the writing is, no one can A coherent and compact plot is also impossible. The plot setting is very novel and the emotional description is also special It's delicate, and the author's writing style is quite elegant, but it's too elegant. It just feels a bit heavy on the "packing of rhetoric". I was watching it with great interest. The plot just attracted me, and then there was a very advanced description. Me, wow! So elegant! But then I was confused: "Wait! Where did we just talk? Who is doing what with whom? Read it?" I had to turn it back and read it again. The psychological description is delicate, but there are a little too many points. The author also likes to use advanced gadgets instead of description, stream of consciousness? It's really easy to get distracted after reading too much, boring, and inexplicably a little tiring. The good plot and emotions were overwhelmed, I hope some of them can be cut off Unnecessarily gorgeous descriptions make the story smoother and more compact. Complete After all, I came here to see the plot. More desserts and more torture would be better

It's super good. This is the best article since Cheng Ran's book was removed from the shelves. It looks very much like my White Moonlight.

What is the difference between a woman wearing a man's clothes and a romantic romance? Avoid thunder. [Cover face] But the writing is good, the heroine has a full image, I have a feeling she will be popular [laughter] No way😨A woman wearing a man again? The only one I co-authored is romance. I don't dare to give a low score for fear of being criticized. The author's introduction says, let me check it out again... I feel a little different from the outside... [Face covering] [awkward laughter]

Amway This work requires a little patience when reading: the pictures are wonderful, the characters are three-dimensional and full of personality, and the ending of each story written by the author makes me feel good. The heavy and melancholy is lingering and powerless like the rain on a cloudy day. The wonderful story is well conceived and the writing style is freehand, allowing people to clearly feel the emotional background of the character towards the protagonist. The protagonist is like a stubborn stone, a very attractive personality. I hope that it can be maintained in future stories. She can see more people's emotions towards her in the future journey, but I hope that at the end of the story, she will be like a stubborn stone. (Of course, these are just personal opinions and feelings. Everything is based on the author's own creation. I hope the author can stick to his own ideas and not be coerced by some thoughts. I look forward to and pay attention to the protagonist's future stories) I hope the author can be healthy, safe and happy (=^･^=)

- ✅ Readers who like anti-routine and quick wear. - ✅ Audiences who can accept stream-of-consciousness descriptions and slow-paced foreshadowing. - ❌ Readers who pursue a traditional refreshing rhythm or a clear emotional line should proceed with caution.

I picked up the third one. I like it. The writing is delicate. Quick wear. Wear men's clothes and women's wear. Both men and women are popular. [Full] Tenderness is a common feature, the writing style is good and delicate, and the characters are well depicted in three dimensions. There are so few people. There are quite a few chapters. Although it looks good, the plot description in the first ten chapters feels lacking. Although I like the inner monologue and appearance description, there is little plot. Reading it word for word makes me very tired. I've only read about twenty chapters so far, and I'm tired. Author Da Da, I like you so much🥰[][][][][]. Although it's not good to say this, your writing style is really similar to that of Da Da, the first person I paid attention to! (Please forgive me for saying this. I don't mean to compare. I just prefer this kind of writing style.) I like you so much [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] (I saw the inner monologue of Plane Two falling in love with Jiang Miao and found it particularly delicate and touching)

Well, what should I say? The chapters in this book are very attractive, and they are written in large numbers. [Shy][Shy][Shy] I really like Jiang Miao's character, and judging from his writing style, he may have several chapters for each world, for example, more than 60 or 70 chapters, which you can enjoy reading in one go. It's super good-looking! ! I fell in love immediately! It's a very novel plot, it's the first time I've seen it written like this! I'm super looking forward to a big update. I just don't have a rating now, but it will definitely reach a high score of 9.3 In the future. I hope it will get more updates. I urge you all to take a look. Anyway, you won't suffer any loss. M, who am I doing all the comments for? It's not all for you to see beautiful works! ! ! [Smile][smile][smile] (a little bit bumpy)

It's very nice to read, and the whole text has a very comfortable and delicate feeling. How can I put it this way? This book is actually quite good, but the first world is a bit too common. It gave me the impression that it was the kind of writing written in 2022 or 23, because I read a lot of such writing at that time. If you want to read this book, I suggest you skip the first world first. The subsequent worlds are quite good, but the progress is generally slow (the above is just my personal opinion) [Love] [Love]

I like it. It's a very interesting plot. It opened my eyes the first time. The abo setting was changed to the whistle direction. You are the author👍🏻. It's just too painful to wait for serialization

Delicious meal hehe [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] The author's writing style is very good, the first story is quite interesting, it is really delicious. The original protagonist's single arrow, the younger sister also makes me feel distressed and funny [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

It can be said that it is very good, but it has a very sad feeling, because the ending is always regrettable, which makes me a little unbearable. I can't watch it anymore, so I have to skip watching because my empathy ability is relatively strong, and I feel like my heart tightens at the end.

Highly recommended, the protagonist is a bit charming, all the members have online IQs, the author's writing style is very high, and the transitions in both the plot and the emotional line are very natural, the protagonist is a bit like the cold white moonlight, elusive and elusive [Blow kiss]

It's really super pretty ^ω^ I really like the heroine's character. The heroine is so good. It's normal for these people to fall in love with her. It's not the kind of love at first sight. The second world is really super fun ٩(♡㉨♡ )۶ The young man who was as bright as the breeze and the bright moon, falling in love with him was as easy as drinking water: "Gu Minglou, you can be casual, I can handle it." At that time, the young man was covered in scars, but by chance, he gave him a sprig of spring beauty condensed by the wind and snow.

Good, good. I feel like the author can change the no cp to one that favors the group. Now I think this novel feels a bit like a group favorite and has a heartthrob. The author's writing is very good and beautiful. He also writes the heroine as a strong woman. How can I say that the heroine's feelings are light? The three views are still very positive and I highly recommend watching it. Later, the author also wrote a silly male supporting character, but not emotionally. In addition, it was the male supporting character who came to the door first and was criticized. However, the male supporting character in the article is a bit smart, because he should be a normal person, right? You all know that you are here through connections, so if you still cause trouble, that's a little bit stupid.

The author's writing style is indeed very good, but I think some descriptions of appearance can be removed and more plot added.

I think it looks good dressed as a man, at least I like it [Adoration] And who is giving such a low score? If you don't like it, just turn left and don't lower the rating (ﾉД`) In addition, the author would like to ask you to update the kowtow man jpg. Very beautiful😁

I really like books written by great authors. I like fast-travel novels very much, not to mention the ones that are heart-throbs. Good writing is really hard to find. The author's writing style is very fresh and the protagonist is very charming. My favorite part is the part about women wearing men's clothes. It feels relatively niche. It's hard to find one like this. It's very beautiful and reminds me of an old friend. I hope my comments can greatly help the author, and I hope the author can continue to persevere. I give you five stars. [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]

The writing style is also great and beautiful! ! ! It's so beautiful, the writing is so beautiful, I really like the big script, it's so delicious, this book will definitely become a hit! ! !

The writing is very good, the characters are created very delicately, and the plot ideas are also good. It's just that each chapter is too long, a bit procrastinating, and does not meet the characteristics of quick travel. It is recommended that each world chapter be shortened to about 40 chapters. It's very beautiful and the writing is really good. Although the record is a bit long, it's acceptable.

I hope there will be an ending like he, or that every person in the world who likes the heroine can be a slice of the same person, so that at least we can meet each other in the next world even if this world is ruined, otherwise we will never meet again.

How! Looks like an old friend It's nice, you can take a look

It looks good, but can you write more about supporting female characters dressed as men? I can't stand it at all [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

Okay, looks good, looks good Maybe there will be some stream of consciousness in the first copy, but in the second and third copies, you can see that the author's writing is getting better and better, and everyone has flesh and blood. Maybe even though they are all BE, as the audience, we know that Jiang Miao is still alive in this world, which is the best ending. There is no deliberate cruelty, everything falls into place when we know the ending. From the moment of falling in love at first sight to falling in love with Jiang Miao's charisma, I couldn't tell the difference between the inside and outside of the play. Although every story is complete, the extras have also explained the remaining blank spaces. But is there a parallel world? ꒦ິ^꒦ິ!

The author is so good-looking. Although you didn't label Bai Yueguang, I still like the feeling of Bai Yueguang on Jiang Jiang, but I think some plots can be more delicate. The author writes well, the world of Evil King is so beautiful

It's really super beautiful. This is the highest quality version I've ever seen. I have many Clipper books. This is the one with the best writing in my bookshelf. The emotions are described very delicately. I like it so much. I don't like it at all. The heroine is also in line with my personality. It's beautiful and beautiful. I hope the author can update it quickly.

Did my Bai Yueguang come back? I feel like an old friend! It's super good-looking. I want to see the author write ancient style novels.

Fragrant! Update soon, ma'am. (Actually, I was attracted by the second part and the introduction at the end. I really want to see the plot at the end.

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful. [Send my heart] [Send my heart] I like it very much. The descriptions of the emotions become more and more delicate as I go to the end. It sinks in a bit, but there are so few more. It's so big [crying] [crying]

Very nice₍₍◝( ﾟ∀ ﾟ )◟ ⁾⁾I hope the author can recover soon╮(＾▽＾)╭ The writing style of Dada reminds me of Cheng Ran in the Korean drama "Quick Travel: The Host Is Every Day". The description is somewhat similar, and there is no malice. It just reminds me of my White Moonlight inadvertently. The writing style of Dada and Dada is very good╮(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)╭ Note: No malicious intent (ಥಥ)