Don't You Want to Criticize Like Crazy? I Like It I Want It!

The writing concept is very mature and has its own logical thinking. The overall feeling is very comfortable when reading it. I just want to make a small comment. If you want to conquer the yandere and black male protagonist, can you not make the original female protagonist so unbearable? Because yandere is really not a species that normal people can bear. As for the protagonist, well~ she is extraordinary...

My goodness, the writing is so good. This style of writing and the use of words are rare. The male and female protagonists have a strong relationship, the female protagonist is gentle, indulgent and understanding of the male protagonist, the male protagonist is paranoid and yandere but will never make the female protagonist feel wronged🥺🥺The yandere novels I read before were always "I will lock you up so that you can only see me", "I will build a golden cage for you and lock you with a chain" "You are not allowed to leave me, where are you? "You are not allowed to go" and "I want you to be my canary" are statements that treat the female protagonist as an object. The male protagonist of this book is even humble in front of the female protagonist, but the female protagonist's baby is so good and gentle and heals the male protagonist [shy][shy][shy] The possessiveness and madness of the male protagonist will always come second to the female protagonist's wishes. Also, I especially like the part where the male protagonist wants the female protagonist's hand with the ring to leave a mark on his body. It's exactly like a puppy wanting its owner to leave a mark.

What should I say? The author's writing is good, and the heroine's character has always been as light as a chrysanthemum. No matter what happens, it is indifferent. In every world, faced with the design of the original heroine to frame and insult her, the heroine never fights back and only faces it calmly. It's the narcissism and madness of the original heroine in every world, and when it comes to the heroine, people who watch it feel like scolding her. Apart from this point, it's actually quite good, because there aren't many chapters in each world, which I like. However, each world has too many descriptions of the madness of the original heroine, and the treatment is not straightforward enough. The original heroine must seek death for the heroine again and again. The heroine's system is also about lying corpses. Occasionally blowing up corpses seems to forget that the heroine is always inactive. I actually quite like it [smile]

Ah ah ah ah, I'm going crazy, tell me the advantages and disadvantages. Advantages: The heroine is super gentle. Although the hero is yandere, he will not hurt the heroine and is very sweet. I especially like the third small world. I like the character of the hero very much. The author is also very gentle. I will update it on time tomorrow. Disadvantages: The heroine is a bit Kurohara, and the writing is quite jealous. There isn't a lot of meat in it, and I don't like to read sweet stories, so I usually skip the end and watch the next small world, but it's better to read it by yourself.

After watching three planes, wait for the completion of four planes Beautiful and gentle heroine x various yandere, paranoid and crazy male protagonists The heroine Oleander has become a spirit, but she is not too vicious or cruel in her dealings with others, especially in her treatment of the original heroine. She often repays evil with kindness, which is not very satisfying, but she is not aggrieved either. Kurohara heroine, the original heroine who is always self-righteous after rebirth. From the perspective of the original heroine, the behavior of the male protagonist in the previous life even said that the male protagonist's eyes were full of love for her, so I always feel weird. It doesn't seem to be controlled by the world's consciousness in the previous life, maybe he really loved her. I feel like in several dimensions, from the memories of the original female protagonist, I can feel that the male protagonist in the previous life really loved her, but! ! I asked the author and he said it was a fixed cp, so I will watch it as two people in my previous life and this life.

Super pretty! ! I like to watch this kind of setting where I fall in love at first sight and dote on the heroine. I enjoyed watching the plot including the slap in the face of the original heroine. The hero's feelings for the heroine are also very firm and will not be instigated by a third party. The most important thing is that the heroine is worthy of the hero's love for her! ! ! When we first met, he would not speak harshly to the male protagonist because of worldly prejudices or rumors. Instead, he spoke to the male protagonist very gently and helped him regardless of his identity. The male protagonist is very good! The heroine is very good! The author is very good! Readers are great! The author can rest assured that your soldiers are behind you to protect you [strike][strike][strike][strike][strike][strike][strike]! !

One of my favorites in this series! The writing is online, the plot is novel, and the heroine is super gentle and not awkward at all! It's a super sweet love story, and the original heroine doesn't have much space.

The heroines in several stories are very kind. The original heroine was very vicious. There is a plot about bullying the new heroine. I actually don't understand why the heroine has to be so kind? He was even too tolerant of the original heroine. It's frustrating for people watching. But the writing is very good. The storyline is also pretty good. Worth a look. I couldn't stand it after reading the subsequent stories. The heroine in each story is like the White Lotus Virgin. The heroine can do nothing, just to fall in love with the hero. But the heroine in the original book deserves to be so vicious, so can she just let it go so easily? I don't really like this, I feel like my outlook on things is a bit wrong. The story about the Imperial Master and the Little Fox was too wrong. That woman hurt so many people, his mother. The Prime Minister and Auntie have hurt so many people and don't get what they deserve. Punishment makes people really angry. After returning to his hometown, he lived a prosperous life. Neither the grievances nor the wronged souls can be comforted. The mermaid story is even more speechless. The Holy Mother has come. . . . .

Good-looking, the heroine is a very gentle baby, very good-looking, the hero is also obedient in front of the heroine, getting along with her is super sweet, good-looking and good-looking It's not gentle, it's the Virgin [laughs]

Not my cup of tea, but the heroine has a perfect personality, gentle and beautiful I personally get angry easily. The original heroine is like sand tea and will definitely jump to the end of the story. No matter what the original heroine says, the heroine will not be angry. She even pours water for the original heroine. I can only admire this. As a bystander, I feel that if I sit next to them, I can't help but slap the original heroine. Then it was love at first sight. The female protagonist actually didn't do anything to conquer the male protagonist. She was a bit of a Mary Sue. I didn't see the same love in the female protagonist (because no matter what she did, her tone, expression, and behavior were relatively plain and gentle), but the male protagonist was indeed redeemed. If you like sweet stories, you can read them. If you want to read the original heroine's fun stories, it's not very good.

The further back you read, the more you can feel that the author is making rapid progress. The heroine is gentle but not a virgin, kind but not vain. The characters of the male and female protagonists in the first few planes are a bit single (but still very cool!), But later on, the heroine's character begins to be enriched from the Demon King plane. It is no longer just gentle. The witch and Gu plane enriches the male character's character (!!!! I love it so much!!!! Oh my god!! A man who can cry is a fairy!!) There is one thing, the ending of the previous plane is a bit sloppy. I hope the author can dedicate a chapter to the ending [almost crying] [almost crying]

The heroine is super invincible and gentle. She is really an invincible, gentle and beautiful woman. I really like the heroine's baby. She is so good that I feel that no one can match her [crying] This book can be said to be a favorite between women and men. The heroine dotes on the male protagonist very much. Every small world is sweet. The writing is as delicate and gentle as moonlight. It's a very good book. [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

It's good-looking, the female protagonist is very gentle, although the male protagonist is very paranoid, overbearing and unreasonable. In reality, he would call someone uncle JC, but in the author's writing, what is more prominent in front of the female protagonist is his love. My current favorite is the vampire interface. The male protagonist only looks at the superficial side and really looks like a gentleman. His cage is infinite love. This book is also the best forced love book I have found on Tomato so far. Excluding the aspect of forced love, it is also my favorite among all the books I have read on Tomato. I still like vampires the most. The ones after this one are a lot less interesting, with three and four stars hovering around...

I've finished reading it. Overall, it's a sweet little novel that doesn't require much thinking. I quite like the female protagonist and the male protagonist, but I feel that the original female protagonist is more homogeneous, always in the same routine, and the original female protagonist seems to be mentally ill. There are two worlds in the middle that are vague, and it feels like it ends without being explained clearly. The other worlds are okay, some feel that the two of them are very warm, and some feel that the two of them will be very happy in that world. Some people say that I think the female protagonist, The Virgin, is okay, but the male protagonist is quite wonderfully written. Each world is also very novel, overall it scores 80 points.

The author's writing is good, the male and female protagonists get along very sweetly, the female protagonist is happy and has a gentle and peaceful personality, and she is a true Holy Mother (no derogatory meaning). The original heroine was selfish, narcissistic, and a bad-tempered white-eyed wolf. She was full of malice towards the heroine. Not only did the heroine not fight back, but she also actively stepped in to help the original heroine, which made her jump until the end before she was offline, and the original heroine didn't appreciate it either. If the original heroine fell, and the heroine helped her up but was spat on and told that she was being fake, the heroine would wipe her face and say, "Be careful not to fall again (bushi)". If you watch too many of the same routine, you will really get irritated. After Plane of the Demon God, the character and plot proportions of the original heroine were changed, and after watching a few more episodes of the game, I felt a little better about the world.

I have already read the chapters about the National Master and the Little Fox. All the short stories are very interesting and I like the characters and plots. Except for (Wheelchair Boy and Little Sun Anchor), the plot of this chapter is very good, but I don't like it because I don't know how to play games, so I skipped many of the plots if I didn't understand them. I watched it [face covering] Even if the male protagonist is not alone in the plot, it does not affect the viewing experience [Admiration] I read the comments before and said that each story ends unexpectedly, but I personally feel that the ending point of each small world plot is just right [Like] [Like] I like the dark male protagonist in quick-dressing sweet dramas It's kind of morbid, but many of them are just sweet and no plot. The male protagonist relies on his own imagination or narration, but this one is different. Both the plot and the character of the sweet drama satisfied me. You, the author, [like][like][like] the real-life novels are also good, so I read every short story again. Then I listened to it again and watched it for four days before I came across the National Master. [Laughing and crying] I will basically watch 40% of this kind of fast time travel before commenting. Otherwise, many only have two or three good stories, and the later stories will be boring. This is really good to watch, and the rating should not start with 8! Could it be that the last 50% of the plot fell apart? [What] But in my heart, as long as 40% of the story is interesting, it deserves full marks [Adoration] [Blow kiss] From the beginning of the Escape Game chapter, there was a kind of male protagonist whose character was a little less interesting than at the beginning. This feeling is especially obvious now that I am watching the actor chapter. It has become like the past where many plots were less simple and sweet. The male protagonist's character is derived from the narration or the protagonist's mind. I was introduced to the male protagonist in his previous life, but I could feel that the male protagonist did not love her, but would love Sui Xing in the next life. But at the beginning of the escape game chapter, the original female protagonist and the male protagonist in the previous generation made me feel a little uncomfortable. I felt that the male protagonist loved the original female protagonist, and the original female protagonist escaped What he did was absolutely right. The main thing is that the male protagonist's design was not as interesting as the one at the beginning, so I was even more reluctant to respond. After all, I loved it before the Demon God chapter and I won't change it. Five stars are given to the previous chapters. If I started from the escape game chapter, I would only give two and a half stars.

It's very beautiful. The heroine is the type who moisturizes things silently. I like it very much. She is the strong point of the heroine. She likes this kind of gentle and healing heroine. But the end of each world is a bit unexpected. I look forward to the author's update [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

It's very interesting. The heroine has a super personality. She is a very gentle and patient good baby. The male protagonist can also be managed by the female patient very patiently. It is really well written. However, the original heroine is described as very vicious. I understand that I don't mind, but it is just a description of the original heroine. The final ending is a bit too simple. In the early stage, she was vicious and wanted to make people slap her into the screen, but the heroine is still not angry with her and is kind to the original heroine. I think it is very good in the end, but I feel a little aggrieved at this point. I want to give it 4.8 Points. I still feel that the slap in the face part is very unpleasant. Many gossipers will be wary of the female protagonist when the male protagonist wants to teach them a lesson. They can't even kill her and even teach them a lesson. Moreover, the original female protagonist is described as really vicious in some aspects. As a result, the female protagonist forgives the original female protagonist and refuses to accept it at all. Moreover, the lessons given by the male protagonist are not that satisfying, which is quite frustrating. . . . If it doesn't work, the author will focus on sweet articles. . . Stop being such a vicious female supporting character. . .

Don't look at the two worlds of the national master fox and the mermaid. It's heartbreaking to watch. The heroine either wants to leave the hero and run to the original heroine, or the heroine is a pure virgin. The original heroine killed her but the hero killed her, and he wants to save the original heroine. The other worlds are well written. The hero falls in love at first sight, and the heroine is also very tolerant of the hero. Although she is still a little bit virgin, the writing is getting better and better. I was wrong. I feel like the author changed people later. On this page about anorexia, no normal person can accept a girl who has confessed to love and embraces the heroine. She has a close relationship and even monitors the heroine. The heroine forces the hero to accept it. If you see the world of the National Master and the Fox, don't read it. There are really many plots that you can't accept later.

The idea is very good, and it also emphasizes the power of women. I really like this kind of fast-traveling article. It has its own characteristics and is not completely lost in romance.

It's good-looking, and I just like to see a "real" gentle heroine, unlike some "fake" gentle heroines who pretend to be gentle. The author is the one who published this book. Not enough to see [cover face][cover face]

It's okay, even if the heroine's character is like Da Ru, the original heroine would step on her face and she would only smile faintly :-D, I can't help it, the author's writing style is quite good, but the temperamental heroine made me not have a deep impression on the heroine. The character of the original heroine is very distinct hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Oh my god, the writing is so good. I really like this kind of gentle heroine! Write more, write more, read as much as you like. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Blowing kiss][Adoration][Flowing kiss][Admiration][Flowing kiss][Admiration][Flowing kiss][Adoration][Adoration][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flying kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Admiration][Flowing kiss] [Blowing kiss][Adoration][Flowing kiss][Adoration][Flowing kiss][Adoration][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Admiration][Sending heart][Sending heart][Admiration][Flowing kiss][Adoration][Sending heart][Admiration][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Admiration]

In fact, after reading the first two stories, I was busy evaluating them. They are good-looking and I recommend them with five stars. All the male protagonists were coaxed into embryos by the female protagonist, and I was almost coaxed into embryos when I saw their sweet love. The only shortcoming is that it is too short. I thought it was an old novel, but when I read it, it only had 69 chapters. I cried to death. It was simply not enough.

Not bad, let me know what you think after watching it. What I don't like personally is that the heroines in the previous worlds are very serious and the original heroines are written as if they are mentally ill. They have a strong female rivalry. In some worlds, the original heroines have too many plots and have acted in ways that hurt the heroines. But probably starting from the infinite flow boss world in Chapter 220, the two worlds are less about the dark heroine and more about the relationship between the male and female protagonists. I feel that my writing is getting better and better.

Gentle beauty, let me take a big bite! I really like the character of Sui Xing. She gently accepts all the possessiveness and control of the male protagonist, and can even show her control and possessiveness to the male protagonist. On the surface, the male protagonist has always occupied Sui Xing, but in fact, it is the male protagonist who cannot live without her. I almost died laughing. The male protagonist uses a mobile human-shaped air conditioner to cool down wherever he goes (it's still a big dog on a chain) The original heroine is really arrogant and stupid. She wants both and wants. I really have no choice. The writing of this article is okay, the pace is fast, the plot is completely explained, and it also takes into account the attributes of the heartthrob and Bai Yueguang (so gentle that everyone loves her, why is it not counted as Bai Yueguang?) Come and watch! Demining: 1. The original heroine has not changed throughout this article, and the character of the original heroine is really bad. 2. All worlds have almost the same routine. The original heroine's approach is basically the same. I can choose to leave, but you must still love me. Then the hero and heroine slap her in the face. It's cool, but it's easy to get tired after watching it for a long time. It's recommended to watch it in small amounts and multiple times.

It's very beautiful. The writing is to my liking. The plot is also [blowing kiss]. The character of the male protagonist is so touching. The female protagonist's baby is also very good [shy]

Okay, it's a simple sweet article, and it's quite enjoyable to read. I forgot about the previous one, it should be good. When I saw the ending of this one today, I watched the National Master and the Little Fox. It was so frustrating. After watching it, I felt that I might as well not watch it. I had an inexplicable feeling that this was not my type, so I canceled it.

So pretty! ! [Adoration] I really like the gentle, sickly female protagonist and the paranoid, crazy and possessive male protagonist! ! It's super sweet and I really love the fact that each time chapter is not very long! ! The author needs to write harder and take care of his health at the same time! [Blowing kiss]

This is the first time I have seen this kind of gentle type, and it is a gentle setting where the female protagonist takes the lead. I have seen some gentle settings where the female protagonist does not take the dominant position. If it is too gentle, it will make you feel that the human-machine is not three-dimensional enough. The female protagonist in this book is gentle and smart, and she can control the male protagonist. Apart from the male protagonist being afraid that the female protagonist will leave, he will be careful, everything goes well, and in the finale, he finds that the male protagonist is alone. , It's a slice again, because there are many descriptions of the original female protagonist and the male protagonist in the previous life, which makes people feel that the male protagonist is unclean. I originally thought that there was no fixed CP, but in the end I was not mentally prepared, which was quite uncomfortable. There was no explanation that the male protagonist followed the female protagonist in, which is quite unreasonable. Overall, it was okay. I became more and more tired of watching it later. Sisters, you can pick and choose what you are interested in. Come on!