
What Should I Do If My Cultivation Fails and I Am Controlled?
养成失败被控制了怎么办
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 508k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban Everyday
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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Are There Any High-Quality Redemption Articles? Please
I have become obsessed with redemption stories recently, I love this genre so much. I recommend a redemption story that I just finished reading, the one with the sweet flirt, Xia Wanwan is really Jiang Ye's redemption!
Animation Fans Can Do Anything, They Have to Be Smart
Don't write nonsense
Yandere, Yandere, I Want a Yandere Article! ! !
I want to watch content similar to "Raising a Monster Girlfriend".
Please Recommend Harem Articles
Please recommend this harem story. I have read it before but forgot the title. I vaguely remember that the heroine's surname is Su and the male protagonist's surname is Zong. Please recommend me. 😍😍😍
It Takes Longer to Find a Book Than to Read It. Help Your Children, Just Make It Readable.
Shura Field + Multiple Heroines + High Scores
I want to see content similar to "What to do if you have more and more ex-girlfriends".
Japanese Light Novels Don't Want a Single Female Protagonist
Recently, I have been searching for books on Tomato for a long time. Most of them are very short in word count. I would like to recommend some longer ones, preferably over a million words. I will also share some. "I will add them to it from time to time."
I've Seen Too Many Male Yanderes. I Want to See Female Yanderes and Criticize Them Like Crazy. Please~
I want to read a book similar to "The Yandere Queen, She Turned Black and Exploded". Cruel and murderous~
Yandere Heroine, ➕Shura Field
Nurture, Villain, White and Black, Yandere
Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey
After the Strategy Failed, They Turned into Yanderes
I want to read a book like "Chasing Husbands and Crematoriums Fails, They Become Yanderes (Chasing Husbands and Yanderes)".
The Fantasy Heroine Is Super Possessive
I'm Looking for Some Good Yandere Articles, but I Don't Want Those That Are Broken.
At least double cleansing
I Want to Read a Collection of Yandere Short Stories, Please Recommend 😭
I want to read a book similar to "A Collection of Various Small Dark Rooms".
I Beg the Male Protagonist to Be a Sigma Man, Unmoved by the Girl's Crush on Him
I want to read a book similar to "Nisgaru: My Daily Life of Exorcizing Souls in Tokyo (Nisgaru: Source Story)". Either a harem or pure love is fine, but don't write a pseudo-harem in the name of pure love, or a pseudo-pure love in the name of a harem. You must be able to combine the girl's shyness and emotional changes.
The Heroine Picks the Hero Back Up
The heroine picks up the hero
Looking for Good Western Fantasy Novels
I really like Central European and Western fantasy novels, but I don't want them to be too realistic. I don't necessarily have to write about the dirty stuff, but I can write about coal diggers and chimney children. I want a novel with good writing skills that can perfectly portray the grandeur and splendor of the Western Middle Ages.
Everyone Here, Do You Have Any Yandere Articles?
How Many Good Sisters Do You Have?
I want to see content similar to "After I became a fake young master, my eight sisters were so excited". A few sisters or senior sisters
Me Traveling Through the World of High Martial Arts
I want to see content similar to "Gaowu: Ten injections of medicine a day, talent is not important".
Urban Daily Life, History.
I want to read a book similar to "Zhang Yu Guan". Want to read books with more than 1 million words @I am 40 years old this year



































































































This book should not be pure love, its content should probably be "The heartthrob male protagonist loves everyone and saves others but does not accept anyone's feelings. In the end, he is beaten to the ground by the unlovable female protagonist✨female and arrogant!" Let's talk about the character of the male protagonist in this book. It's very to my liking. It's not a typical Tomato novel. The male protagonist must have one of the following themes: "a good-for-nothing, no ability, someone who likes to show off, talks nonsense..." The emotional drama in this book is also very well described. Unlike other books, you fall in love out of nowhere, just like a walking hormone. There is no actual action, but the heroine is inexplicably attached to it. This book is very good, very detailed, but a bit slow To conclude, this book is very good and highly recommended! ! !
I have updated it now. I would like to say that the plot and writing style of this book are more enjoyable. The inference in the name seems less important. It focuses on the emotional line but does not have any unfavorable characters (a certain second young master barely counts). The protagonist's character is stable. It seems to be a harem, but currently only Yuqing's is considered a two-way arrow. The article reveals a freshness, without the stomachache of a sadistic article, without the embarrassment of a sweet article, everything is just right. It gives me a feeling of admiration, which is more similar to the protagonist's evaluation: "A shallow sadness runs through the whole article, but it still exudes a little starlight, as delicate as spring water."
Very good. I feel that the heroine is very suitable to be a loser [flying kiss]
It fits my imagination of the male protagonist very well. He seems to be indifferent to the world but still has an undiminished kindness. He is responsible for people, gentle, handsome, emotionally perceptive, very tolerant, knows a lot, and can give people a sense of security... And the author's writing is good
The writing is first-class, the details and emotions are clearly conveyed, and the character descriptions are also very profound. The only drawback is that there are too many hidden things, and some hidden lines are unevenly distributed, which may lead to traps in the future. Secondly, in the process of advancing the main plot, the interactions with other female protagonists are a bit too much. Frequently, the Shura field can be there, but it is a bit painful to create a sense of sight as to why she is the loser. After all, there is only one male protagonist. If the female protagonists are all high-quality, it is very inappropriate. In the end, the lack of this star is because the update is too slow and it is not enjoyable to watch at once.
It's a very good work, with a handsome male protagonist with a broken soul, a female protagonist with various fatal flaws, and other characters with good status and appearance but their own dirty thoughts, but it can be written into a heart-warming and daily redemption story. I look forward to the follow-up.
The writing is so delicate, and the daily style and style develop step by step. Oh my God, it's so comforting to watch. I finally got some fine grain!
It looks good and the writing is good, but there is one thing. The male protagonist is rarely the main perspective, and there is very little psychological activity. It makes me feel like I am watching a female video.
The writing is very good. The author covers food and accommodation. The heroine doesn't need much.
The characters are drawn very delicately and the text is used to the extreme. I feel that Lin Miao is a cold and dark person. Many people may like to pursue light and beauty and want to have them, but Lin Miao just wants to watch it. People who are already in the abyss will always have the sky above the abyss to make them look up, but he will not have the idea of leaving the abyss. He knows where he belongs and where he fits. Extreme indifference and madness, what is it that supports all his actions? How curious. It's just that the correlation between the title of your book and the content is quite low.
It's beautiful, the writing is real and plain, but it makes you want to put it down.
Tell me which big boss is reincarnated [laughing evilly] The writing is more than 7.4, The story line is smooth, and the emotional line is advanced just right. Especially the side description of emotions
It's good to watch, but I don't know that some people don't like to watch this type of movie. They just wanted to watch it. After watching it, they felt it didn't look good, and they scolded it. Moreover, they didn't watch it for a long time, and they didn't want to say anything [laughing][laughing][laughing]
Great author, your book has only one shortcoming: the title and the content are both different. The plot and everything are very good! The writing is also great! But the title makes people first think that this is a fast-paced novel! So it's best to change the name later.
Damn! What I want to see is this kind of distortion!! The author's writing style is good, the sentences are smooth and comfortable to read in the small part, and the characters in the large part are ready to come out. The author continues to work hard to maintain, the process is the most important.
It looks good, it looks good, I just like a relationship where both parties are more thoughtful than the other. The male protagonist's portrayal is super interesting. But later on, I feel that no one can win the heart of the male protagonist. Maybe it's Miss Mu who is more scheming than the male protagonist. I imagine that I want to see the river of blood flowing into the Shura Field. Hehehehehehehehehehehehehe But the author, I secretly asked if there will be a follow-up to Sister Xu Ya. I feel that she is so miserable. The person who the original owner likes sympathizes with her a little bit. We brought her in and we graduated together. It was supposed to be sweet, but in the end, we just changed the core. I haven't given up on the male lead in the past few years. Sooooooo.
The narrative style is really comfortable! ! Come on, author↖(^ω^)↗
It's good-looking, has many metaphors, has a bit of the flavor of Lu Qing's masterpiece, and the writing is smooth. I hope the author doesn't collapse. If it's more or less, I think if you can see the back, I hope it's more [Thinking]
What should I say? I have listened to 70 pieces of this novel so far. The emotional line of this novel is very good. The male protagonist is also very good and gives a reliable feeling. The shortcomings are that this person seems to be completing the process of redemption and does not seem to care about himself. As for the heroine, I personally prefer Mu Qianying, who is pretty good. Other characters are also pretty good.
It's very beautiful and the writing is very good. It doesn't look like a newbie. I should be here to fry fish.
I am very satisfied with the male protagonist, very satisfied. What I always hope is that the male protagonist himself is a good person, a good person worthy of being loved, and worthy of the love of all female protagonists. It's not that the heroine loves him because he is the male protagonist, but because he is a very good person, and he is the male protagonist because he is very good! ! !
A book that reads very plainly and delicately, just like the book about Lin Miao described by the author in the book, gave me a wonderful perception of the experiences of both parties after the conclusion of the story about the adopted son. Unfortunately, the book has been discontinued (it has died [crying]). I am still looking forward to the future of Su Yuqing, Lin Miao and the revenge of the original body.
It's a very good book. The writing is pretty good. It's one of the most relaxing redemption novels I've ever read.
It's great, the writing is good, the story line is smooth, and the emotional line is just right. I don't know why, but I always feel sad when I watch it
The overall pace is slow, soothing, and healing, allowing people to finish reading this book calmly. The ending is also a very satisfying one. The only flaw is that the ending chapter is a bit short. I wanted to see more of the eldest lady's scenes, but in the end, only my younger sister was the one stealing the show.
There are very few books of this type, especially those with multiple female protagonists. Generally speaking, these books should be single-female protagonists, so 5 stars are given for innovation. It was a bit slow at the end, and the pace was a bit slow. The heroine kept popping up. I should have focused on finishing a few of them first, but they kept popping up. I looked left and right and felt a little confused. I think a female protagonist is almost enough, but too many is not good.
It's so beautiful [crying] I'll give you a six-star rating [laughing] One missing one is because I was killed as a city star [smiling]
The writing is good and meticulous, which makes my reading interest go crazy.
I can only say that reading this book is very smooth and makes me feel at ease. I like the feeling of this book and it gives me a sense of comfort. I like this kind of daily life and the plot is not bad. It is true that many books have ups and downs after reading them. Some are too fast and some are too slow and some are too slow. But this book is just right. It has a calm, peaceful and comfortable feeling. Personally, it is a very good book.
It is a very comfortable novel to read, like a comb, slowly smoothing out my complicated thoughts; it is also a very soothing novel to read. The emotions of the male protagonist and female protagonist are described appropriately, without too many abrupt places, as if it comes naturally, with sufficient foreshadowing. At the same time, there is no irreversible tragedy or sudden black swan. Reading this book is like going to a spiritual spa. May the years be peaceful