Mortals Are Cultivating Immortality, I Have a System Panel

1: The manuscript of this book is currently available and can be consumed with confidence. Two: I won't write emotional dramas for the time being. Fight scenes are my comfort zone. Three: This book sets a grand worldview. It belongs to the traditional cultivation of immortality, but it takes different paths and leads to the same destination. Four: I wrote the previous Mortal Realm two years ago. If you don't like it, you can skip it and read the Immortal Realm directly. Five: If fellow Taoists have opinions and suggestions, I can listen to them, but I may not be able to write them down. This post is a merit post! Not an all-male, all-female story! Non-women respect men! It's neither a man nor a woman! Respect strength! There are few female characters in the first 50 chapters, and the plot requires them not to appear! Growth article! Growth article! Feilongao Tianwen! It will be fun later! Free text, show mercy!

It's okay, but it feels too classic. It's the style from a few years ago. I can tell where it's going after just one glance. It's a bit boring for me. If I try more in the future, it's still pretty good.

The traditional stream of cultivating immortals. But at the beginning, most of the characters are men, so this is acceptable. The villains are basically female villains, and they are all the kind of villains with no structure, very vicious women with facial makeup. The author's plot is really good and enjoyable. I hope the villain can be described with more intelligence and uniqueness. From what I've seen so far, she's a bully who takes advantage of her power, a conceited daughter of a noble family, a poisonous woman who was disfigured and hates a beautiful woman... Just so damn familiar to you NPCs. As for swear words, I have no objection to swearing at people, bitches, and other things that are obviously meant to curse girls. The heroine is a woman, so this is okay, but! Does the heroine have no teammates? I really watched the whole process. The heroine was scolded, the heroine's female friends were scolded, and the male cultivator who was with us was not scolded. It was as if he was invisible. Well done to the author. Although you are writing about a female protagonist, I don't ask you to make any production decisions and give all the highlights to women. At least, can the treatment of men and women be more balanced? The author's three views are actually normal, and the characters' three views in the article are also pretty good. But sometimes the writing has a sense of beauty that has been tainted by the domineering prose of ancient times. Generally speaking, the heroine has a good personality, the world view looks quite big, there are some innovations that can make people shine, and the villains basically disappear as soon as they appear. This is a very good article on cultivating immortals. However, the current characters are all flat and familiar NPCs are clustered together. After reading through the book, the only ones that impressed me deeply were the female protagonist and the male protagonist Qin Heng (the purest and most benevolent guide?). This is chapter 145. Some minor flaws can be skipped and the book can be read. I'll check it out later and comment later.

Very cool! ! The author is great! ! This article on cultivating immortals is worth watching 1: The world view is very large, so the content is very rich, there are continents to experience, and there are many large sects. It is not unique, there is competition, and there are opponents to read (@author The heroine is a little bit stronger, adjust it down a bit, let the geniuses compete with each other, it will be more interesting , now there is a sense of competition among geniuses, but the heroine is a bit too much, and it is not appropriate to build the foundation and kill the Nascent Soul.) The most important thing is that the world view is very large. When I read the book, I felt that the world of immortality was prosperous, the large, medium and small realms are interconnected, and there are mysterious foreign enemies. I feel that the author can write a long novel, which is very novel. 2: Small details such as inserting questions about the realm of cultivating immortality are different from other female-channeled immortality articles. It is very novel and makes people want to watch it. There are not only different realms of sword cultivation, but also different realms of bow cultivation, ax cultivation, whip cultivation, sword cultivation, and physical cultivation. The article also covers painting cultivation, alchemy cultivation, formation cultivation, medical cultivation, poison cultivation, demon cultivation, and soul cultivation, all described in detail, with battle scenes, and the grand road where a hundred flowers bloom and a hundred schools of thought contend. It didn't give me the feeling that only those who practice swordsmanship are brilliant. 3: There are no female cultivators because men find trouble with the heroine, and trouble is definitely related to the path. The competition is for treasures, not messy love. The heroines in the supporting roles are also very charming, and they all shine on their own path to immortality. It is great. It is very comfortable to watch, not cliche, and the author is great. 4: The heroine's master is really good. He has always been a protector. It is great to accompany the heroine to experience for 4 years. When the heroine disappeared, he went to Jiuyou to find her. I hope that the heroine will find good things to give to the master during her experience. The master has always found connections to treat her illnesses, send things to find people to refine weapons for her, find people to show the heroine the bloodline of spiritual beasts, go into secret realms to find people to give treasures to help the heroine, find the missing heroine, and find the master to ask for talismans from other sects for benefits. Ling Ling has never seen the heroine repay anything. It feels reassuring to have such a master, so I hope the author can arrange it. Come on, author, write a long novel. After all, the world view is huge. I support you! ! @ I hope the author won't stop updating and keep writing more than 2,000 chapters. I believe the author can do it [sending my heart]

I have read more than a hundred chapters so far, and there are basically no surprises. In the early stage, I felt that there were too many male characters around the heroine. In the later stage, there were basically many high-profile female characters. The description of the heroine's growth and the writing style of the entire book are quite good. You can feel the tenacity of the heroine. It is really good to read. Recommend [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss][Flow Kiss]

It looks good, it looks good, the heroine has a really good character, and I have never encountered a plot that can't accept a slap in the face. It's quite reasonable. The heroine is really good, and she is really progressing in practice step by step. (Guess: I feel that the spiritual source of the Yunluo Continent where the heroine was at the beginning was maliciously taken away. The heroine's system may be a clone of Tiandao, which is self-rescue)

I just like to watch this kind of genius upgrade flow, step by step, every detail is in place, good product, there are too few articles like Tomato, I can find all the ones I like in serialization, oh, the life of chasing updates is hard, can the author organize holiday activities, and have ten more chapters for Dragon Boat Festival and Children's Day () [Send heartfelt message] [Sneaky laugh]

Super Invincible is very good-looking. The author's writing is very strong and the plot is also good-looking. The assessment is finally no longer a cookie-cutter secret realm and competition. The world view setting is also very grand and exciting [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

Five stars to encourage the author. The writing is very good, the setting is also very good, there is no inexplicable plot, but there are occasional sentences that don't make sense, but the flaws are not concealed. The only request is that the teacher must finish this novel [I'm about to cry]

This book is really great to read. Shi Zhen has a good nature, is smart, has a lot of talent and hard work, and is accompanied by good teachers and friends. It is really great! ! ! The author's writing style is also very good. It is difficult to find such a good writing style. It is not a noob at all. Big cheers for the author! Support ♡(*´∀｀*) people(*´∀｀*)♡

The writing is good, and it seems to be a relatively orthodox fairy tale at present. I have been looking for the kind of person who is the proud one from the big world to hang out in the small world of my subordinates for a long time. Unfortunately, I feel that the writing style I found is not very good. I look forward to my sister going to hang out in the small world of my subordinates in the future. It will be more interesting if she is more sophisticated. I will keep it up.

This is a book that is nothing special when you first read it, but the more you read, the more you become attracted to it. You are immersed in the experience of the heroine. Seeing the world from the perspective of the heroine, the world is surprisingly gorgeous, which is really interesting. It's a pity that it ended too hastily, and only then did I write about the heroine's golden elixir, what is the subsequent development of the Cangwu Realm, and where is the karma between the heroine and the Mother Realm. The heroine has not yet avenged the Saint of Laoshizi. The Saint is so abominable. The author of the book that shed blood has written the second part. I believe that the author can write more fascinating things. @ How about writing the second part? I'm really looking forward to the journey of the heroine and her friends across the world. There are still a lot of pitfalls to be filled, and the person I promised to save has not been saved yet🥺

It's super good-looking. I don't have any flashpoints so far, and the plot is very smooth. Please write it better. Don't have any emotional scenes. Write with your own ideas firmly in mind. Also, don't stop updating. I've stopped updating several books I'm following [crying]

Ahhhh, this book is the one I have been following for a long time. It is my favorite book about cultivating immortals. It ended so suddenly. I haven't read enough yet😭😭. The heroine in this book is brave and resourceful, and has a strong talent and understanding. In the early stage, the heroine has three spiritual roots, but in the later stage, she has become a heavenly spiritual root. This book has a great layout, the sect is very good, the master is also very good, the heroine also has several friends, the author's writing style is also very good, and the world of cultivating immortals is well described. This is a text that can be followed repeatedly

The orthodox heroine studies fairy literature, the heroine is a genius, and has a calm and determined character, but the heroine's mentality also grows and changes. The writing style is like that of Qidian, the fighting scenes are well written, and some of the plots are quite enjoyable. The world view is grand, the cultivation system and understanding of "Tao" are written in detail, and the description of the techniques is also solid. At present, it is tied. There are more than 200 chapters of the heroine building her foundation. I hope the author can finish it. It has been a long time since I have seen such a fairy-building article that suits my heart.

The overall worldview is grand and diverse. I feel it is suitable for a long novel. The heroine's growth path is also winding and uplifting. It is refreshing enough [Admiration]. I really like the fairy tales about traveling to various worlds and realizing Taoism. Competing with heaven, earth and people. Isn't the path just like this? I am most satisfied with the author's description of various cultivation systems and the heroine's journey of enlightenment. It is a rare article on enlightenment and cultivation.

Full score full score The author writes very well. The whole concept is really good. It shows us a magnificent, huge and shocking picture of the world of cultivation. The heroine is also great. She grows up very quickly. She is very stable and solid. The master, the sect and the friends are all very good. People just want to say that this is a big sect. I feel like this book could have written three to four million words. Why did the author finish it so early? Please release a second part, please

The book is good-looking. I have been adding it to my bookshelf for a long time. It has finally gained weight. The plot is novel and the characters are very good. However, the writing is too detailed in the early stage. The flaw lies in the adjectives. Three themes and three adjectives in one sentence will feel redundant and affect the interest of reading. However, it is very good in the later stage. They are all reasonable adjectives and it is complete. It ended too quickly, and I felt like there were a lot of holes left unfilled. There were foreshadowings about why the heroine's mother realm had lost its spirit, but the rest was not filled in. The person who promised the true master to go to Jiuyou to look for someone was not filled in, and the saint who plotted against her was not found either. There were quite a lot of foreshadowings, but none of the holes were filled in. The more I read, the more addictive I became, and then, snap, it's gone! The end! The heroine has just cultivated the golden elixir. I hope the author can continue writing a second book.

The book is very interesting, with clear logic and fluent language. However, the ending is too sudden and some foreshadowing left before is ended without explanation. I suggest a second part to write about the subsequent story. It is very suitable.

Good-looking, good-looking, highly recommended [Like][Like] Shi Zhen was born with little talent, understanding, luck, character, perseverance, wisdom, potential, Taoist fate, and Taoist heart. They are all very good. She also grows step by step and turns the tide in a desperate situation. He doesn't pretend to be a pig to eat the tiger, but he also knows how to hide when appropriate; he doesn't like to be in the limelight, but he also shows his strength when necessary and kills enemies across borders. Swords, bows, spells, formations, alchemy, if you have talent and are willing to work hard, you will have a chance. I also have friends around me, I have a good master, I am not lonely, I am not ambiguous with others, I am dedicated to the Tao. It is one of my favorite novels, and I think it is one of the best novels about cultivating immortals. Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [Like] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] The world view is really grand, with small, medium and large worlds, and the system of cultivating immortals is also very complete and detailed. A hundred flowers bloom, a hundred schools of thought contend, sword cultivators and bow cultivators all have their own realm systems, and their combat power has not collapsed. People are excited to see Shi Zhen kill enemies across large realms. It's so powerful! It's so pretty!

At present, the five points are very good and in line with the traditional immortal novels in my mind, but why are the ratings so low? Other novels with illogical logic and chaotic immortal cultivation leading to female competition are all 9.0. Why? Come on, the author, support it! ! !

It's good to read. It can definitely defeat many books on cultivating immortals. The author must never give up. Please update more [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

It's been a long time since I've seen such an orthodox article about cultivating immortals. The writing style is better than those articles that scored 9 points or above. Especially when describing the fighting method and enlightenment, it is very well-reasoned and well-founded, and there is no bloody plot. This is the Feng Aotian I want! Come on, don't be discouraged, I will always follow you, and I will not allow anyone to disobey you!

The general logic is okay, but there are quite a few flaws. It's very good. It just talks about the cultivation aspect in detail. It's just not that suitable for someone like me who loves to read cool novels. I'm the kind of person who likes watching martial arts, right? There are battle scenes I feel that the author has a lot of ideas in writing this article about cultivating immortals. He talks about cultivation very clearly. It is different from other articles. He really talks seriously about how the heroine should cultivate.

Beautiful! The world view is huge! It's exactly what I like to read. I've been short of books for a long time and found a book that I like. But the author left a lot of pitfalls and ended it. The assignment also said that the outline is expected to be 5 million words, so that's how much it is. Support the author in writing a sequel! Open the second part! ! ! Please, it's really beautiful. Raise your hands if you want to see the author finish the second part🙋‍♀️🙋

This book definitely scored more than 7.6. I didn't understand why the score was so low. I didn't read it when I saw the low score at first. I saw recommendations several times and the name and the score didn't interest me. I didn't expect that it exceeded my expectations after I came in. I have been looking for the kind of ancient traditional fairy tales for a long time, but it is difficult to find particularly good ones. This book is very good. There is no one-year foundation and three-year golden elixir. It is a step-by-step step-by-step. There are some slight cheats, but not too outrageous. The writing style is also good. It is more literary and elegant than most of the articles here. I haven't read the others yet. Although there are some places where the narrative connection is too jumpy, the flaws are not concealed. It is better than some 9-point articles. I hope it will be the same in the future.

Good looking\(//∇//)\ The heroine is smart, capable and hard-working, and the plot has ups and downs and is attractive. It is a very traditional fairy tale. I hope the author can continue to persevere, come on [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss] It's really beautiful. Come and watch it together [Flying Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

In the traditional immortal cultivation style, the heroine will get opportunities, but she has to practice step by step. The gold ring has little effect, and she mainly relies on her own efforts to practice. It is not a cool article, but it is not an article that abuses the heroine. The rating is too low. I hope the author can persist in doing more. It is not easy to find such a high-quality article! Finished watching it again.

It's been a long time since I've seen a good-looking traditional immortal cultivator. So far, the currency and combat power systems haven't collapsed. It's just that it's too thin and not good enough to look at. I'll keep it up first and hope it won't be a trap.

The writing style is okay and the content is written very smoothly. I can easily read it without being embarrassed. It's not like some novels with high ratings, but I just can't read it and I can't persuade myself [laughing and crying]