The Underworld Files

It's not bad. Although the novels of this genre are all about the same, the writing style is not bad. At first glance, there are no flaws. A few typos are harmless and the flaws are not hidden. Based on this quality, I should have a score of 9.4 Or above.

After Lijiacun, in this reality, if you just go to this point without preparing anything, it will poison a lot of people. I would like to make a small suggestion. Change it from not preparing anything to preparing 1 point. However, I underestimated its intensity. I think it will be better.

The author's writing style is okay, and the story has no flaws that make it unbearable. However, I feel that the pace of the story is still too fast. Basically, the seven or eight chapters are just a short story. I feel that many places can be expanded. There are relatively few people reading this book now. I hope the author can continue to read more.

I originally wanted to give it three stars, but more of an encouragement. Let me talk about the shortcomings. The first is the second "dungeon", Lijia Village. The protagonist said that he would look for evil spirits at noon. However, from the morning when he was chased by those children to escape from the house, he did nothing until night. He knew that it would be more dangerous at night, but he had to wait until night and waited until the controlled villagers surrounded him before he came out to resist. Secondly, it's Lijia Village. Li Hu is a real tiger. He jumped into the well while shouting "My father will give me his life in exchange for mine" (I give this operation an eight-point five, because I was a little speechless😅). Finally, he whispered, I have never seen anyone go into the well to touch snails, and this was even when everyone in the village thought the well was unclean.

It looks good so far, no complaints.