I Asked You to Catch Ghosts Live, and You Fall in Love with Her?

I hope the author will continue to cooperate with Erdanzi to complete this novel. Although the competition among sand sculpture animations is fierce, good works are more worthy of attention. I hope this novel and this sand sculpture animation will be completed. It's better presented, the plot is good, and the animations made by the blogger are also good.

It's good to watch. I think this rating is a bit low. It looks like it's a single female protagonist. I hope it will be a single female protagonist in the future. The female protagonist Bai Tan is quite unique and quite funny. However, the fighting part is a bit monotonous. I hope it can be improved. Opening a harem is speechless

This book is a harem novel, so don't read if you mind. I think it's well written. It's not that kind of witty writing, it's very brainless. Just kill, kill, cheat, kill, kill. The protagonist has never been deflated. Very immersive 🤤

The author has shown good thinking in conception and grasp of the theme, and can develop a narrative around the central idea, which is worthy of recognition. However, during the reading process, I found that there are some areas in the article that can be further optimized, especially in terms of the refinement of language expression. Specifically, the sentences in some paragraphs are lengthy and the content is repetitive, causing the overall rhythm to be slightly sluggish. For example, [specifically quote one or two lengthy sentences or paragraphs]. Although these descriptions are detailed, if they can be slightly deleted and the core information is extracted, the article will be more compact and powerful. Remember, good writing is about being "succinct and concise," using the fewest words to convey the most meaning. In addition, trying to add some specific details or vivid metaphors can help make the article more attractive and persuasive, while also effectively avoiding generalities. For example, when describing a scene, you can enhance the reader's sense of involvement by describing sensory elements such as color and sound. I encourage you to pay more attention to the simplicity of language and accuracy of expression in your future writing. Every time before you write, you might as well think about it: "Does this sentence have to be said? Can it be expressed in a more concise way?" Developing this habit will make your writing smoother and your work more attractive. Keep up the good work, I believe that through continuous practice and improvement, you will make greater progress on the road of writing!

I have read Chapter 25 so far. The first copy is well written and the characters are well created. Single women are the best. I hope there won't be a harem in the future! ! It's so good to write in the front, but I'm going to have a harem in the back, don't care, let's eat together

I'll give it four points. This male protagonist is so strong that I see him every second. There aren't that many love scenes in the later stages. Hey, I always feel that there are some shortcomings. But the general content of the book is still very distinctive. Recommended

The eldest heroine has a full plot. I hope there will be more similar plots for other heroines in the future without weakening the eldest heroine's presence. Then this book can be rated 9 or above for the plot [laughter]

Yes, I can read it. So far, it's a single girl. Although it's official, it's headed by the protagonist. I guess some people ran away before finishing the whole thing. As long as the author plays his role normally, the book won't be crooked. The ones that are poisonous at the beginning are those bastard stories written by AI and outlined by AI. If you read too many of them, people will get stressed [eating melon]

It's pretty cool. For people who play your Mijia games, you can jump in as you like. After all, you should already be familiar with things like first effect and later cause, and whether a knife is not a knife. If you want to put it bluntly, it may be that the protagonist's early performance is a bit super.

I haven't finished it yet, but from what I've seen, the plot is relatively new. Secondly, the progress is too fast and I can't get into that feeling. But overall it's still very good. From what I've seen, it's just about the follow-up plot. In fact, as long as it doesn't collapse, it's fine.

The pace is fast, not overwhelming, no nonsense, the narrative rhythm is also more comfortable, and it looks good.

It's so good. I've been surfing the Internet since I saw the author. I love reading it. There are too many memes, and Bai Tan is cute. You might as well make me the male protagonist, so that I can live happily with Bai Tan. Hehehehe...👍🎄◟(˶> ᎑ <˶)◞🎄

Very good-looking, but don't be a multi-heroine.

Although it is a bit difficult to understand the plot of falling in love suddenly, it is really burning and touching. From time to time, I miss the aunt's smile [sneaky laugh][sneaky laugh]

It looks good. Well, let's just say it has no connotations. Basically, it's just a short story. After all, the rating is not high. It's not bad, and it's comfortable to look at. But there really aren't any really valuable things. It's enough to pass the time. But it's free. Why worry about it so much?

Putting aside the battle prowess, this harem is a bit enjoyable to watch [face covering] [OK]

I can't stand it anymore. The writing is okay, but it is obviously the only light in despair, why should it be taken away by others [crying][crying][crying]

Wc, this book is great. I was so excited that I couldn't sleep now. It's 2:00 on June 7th. It's the college entrance examination. Fortunately, I'm a college student. It's okay. Come on, the college entrance examination. The juniors and girls who have passed the exam in the 24th class will be clear and stupid college students.

The composition of this book: 80% jokes + 20% novel content (Warm reminder: This book is a fun read, so please put your little unintelligent mind aside before reading it. The plot behind it is a bit repetitive, so if you like it, you can continue reading. In short, the emotional value of this book is quite good, even the action scenes are the same. The number of chapters to read is determined based on everyone's preferences)

The writing and plot content are very good.

The sense of substitution is very strong, the more you watch, the more addictive you become.

You must listen to Rose in No Man's Land before reading this book! Must! Real! Superb!

Super pretty, the heroine also has a slight yandere attribute, I love it

I came from the Tomato short drama. I was still unsatisfied after watching the short drama. I found out that there was an original novel, so I came to read it. It took me four days to read it. Overall, it is a good novel. When I read the short drama, I thought it was about a single heroine. I only found out after reading the reviews of the novel that it was about a harem. Anyway, there is no surprise. After all, I have read it all. It is a very good novel o(*≧▽≦)ツ┏━┓

This book is pretty good. The main character is pretty good.

The family is so beautiful. Don't take advantage of the author. He doesn't ask for much. Just update at a speed that catches up with my reading speed.

It's just a pure fighting experience, and I can't comment on anything else.

Very good-looking, a slap in the face, time travel to save the heroine, it's really cool

It's very real, the plot is exciting, and it has a strong sense of immersion.

It's very beautiful. Come on, the author, don't stop updating [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]