When Qin Yun ascended through the tribulation, he encountered a nine-day thunderstorm. His cultivation was completely destroyed and his Taoist foundation was damaged. He was treated as a useless person by the upper world and was captured as a "yellow scarf warrior". From then on, this former giant in the world of cultivation was reduced to carrying fairy mountains, clearing spiritual veins, and even responding to the summons of monks from the lower world, working like a cow and a horse.
It wasn't until he accidentally obtained a piece of mysterious source seed while digging the Guxian mineral vein that he finally repaired the damaged foundation. But with the contract between heaven and earth, he had to continue to wear the shackles of the Yellow Turban Warriors, but secretly practiced ancient secrets to accumulate strength. What is the Immortal Dynasty? I vow to overthrow it and establish my own order!
"Since the way of heaven wants me to be a strongman, then I will prove the way with my strength!"
Reader comments
The tension and plot are both good. Personally, it seems that there are actually a lot of poisonous points, and they can be avoided, such as the hidden greenness related to Liu Ningshuang, and the protagonist's mentality was not handled well. . . But because the book has bright spots, I still give it five points. The poison is tolerable. The word count is not bad, I hope to maintain the standard and continue to update.
In fact, the logic of this novel is very reasonable. If we really put this story into reality, it seems that it can be consistent. . . It's easy, good and cheap, so why can't it be the turn of someone who doesn't follow suit? Why can't my relatives and friends get involved? . . What does it mean to have high morals? It's just that people are strong and talk about being lofty. There is a law in this world that if you gain something, you must lose something. You must be sure that there are gains in some aspects that you don't know about. . .
The strength of this novel should be a 9. The foreshadowing and suspense are well laid out, the characters are not dull, and the plot is not cliche.
I used to read women's novels, but this time I read the male protagonist's plot. I feel that the story is quite attractive. The characters and some things that appear in the front will close the loop later. The man has narrowly escaped death several times when his life was hanging by a thread. I just don't know if the whole plot is written around Tiangong Mansion. If it is not a follow-up development, it would be better. After all, I saw that the male protagonist in 353 photos is still facing this alone. What was done over there is harmful to Tianhe. In fact, it can be announced so that more people can participate in destroying the stronghold instead of doing it alone.
The most important thing is that I hope to update a few more chapters every day. Please give the author a big boost.
It's really good, it's rare to find a novel that doesn't use backdoors. Of course the chances are indeed very high
4 Stars, the combat system in this fairy world is just average, and there is no gameplay like other fairy tales. Spirit transformation still uses spiritual power, and it seems to be the same as foundation building. Except for the increase in lifespan, spirit transformation is the same as foundation building monks. Void refining monks are also very ordinary and don't look very awesome. They feel the same as foundation building monks in the later stage.
This Qi training is for Qi training, Foundation building is for the middle stage of Qi training, Golden elixir is for the late Qi training period, Nascent Soul is for the perfection of Qi training, Transformation of spirit is for foundation building, and Void refining is for the late stage of Qi training. The current combination seems to be at the level of Jindan [smile][smile][smile]. Except for the fact that his lifespan has not been reduced, his combat effectiveness is basically as weak as heaven [smile][smile][smile]
I haven't read much of it so far, and I hope there won't be any stories about women in the future. Overall, it's just average, not outstanding but not terrible, so I'll encourage you with four stars.
Well written! Looks better than those with high scores!
It is a rare good book. It is solid and steady. There are basically no flaws in the logic and no poisonous points. I recommend you to read it. Good books should be supported more. I also hope that the author can continue to update. Book friends will also comment more to give the author more motivation.
Go wherever you are and be true to yourself, no matter in heaven or on earth, it is your right to speak. Do what you are capable of, work hard in a low-key manner, and wait for the flowers to bloom...
I feel very good, I am very optimistic about this book
The subject matter is very good, but it's too slow. I hope the cultivation level will be improved faster. After all, there are only so many updates every day. If the cultivation level is improved faster, it will look hot-blooded.
I think it is quite innovative and a very good book.
Suspense, thrilling, fantasy, good work, worth watching.
It's a pretty good novel, as long as it's a story, don't write about women and make up the characters. I won't listen to novels without a story.
It's okay, I just don't know why the score is low
I feel like I used to read novels, but they are so ordinary. I can only say that I can read more than 80% of the immortal novels that I like.
The author can refer to previous high-rated novels and still have a chance to earn five or six thousand a month.
Yes, the killing is decisive, the plot is reasonable, there is no redundancy, and the dialogue is mindless. It is interesting. I hope the author will update it faster. It is only a few hundred thousand words.
Very good, the plot is reasonable, the story is interlocking and not laggy. It is a good book. The current rating of 7.4 Is obviously low.
The writing is quite good. I was a little sleepy at the beginning, but later I felt that the male protagonist was quite interesting, and the IQ of the passerby was not bad. It didn't make the plot particularly retarded. I caught up on the update in one go. I hope it can continue. I don't know why not many people watched it. I would like to encourage you with five stars. (Emotional scenes must be written carefully... It can easily break down)
Good books recommended to everyone
Very interesting, with novel content.
The logic is smooth, but there are some modern Chinese, inevitable cubic, etc. I hope to replace it with a classical style.
It's pretty good so far, I hope there won't be a female protagonist
Very good-looking, with a compact plot and no unnecessary nonsense.
The story concept is pretty good, you can check it out
The plot is more traditional, but the writing is sophisticated. Five stars
It's very well written, and the fairy world is unlocked at the beginning, unlike others where it is unlocked step by step.
Detailed characterization, a rare fantasy novel
The angle is very good, there is humanity, warmth, and a touch of emotion. The only thing is that the update is too slow. Keep up the quality. Come on
It is no worse than those with high ratings, or even better. I hope the author will be more complete. Gold will always shine, come on!
The tension and plot are both good. Personally, it seems that there are actually a lot of poisonous points, and they can be avoided, such as the hidden greenness related to Liu Ningshuang, and the protagonist's mentality was not handled well. . . But because the book has bright spots, I still give it five points. The poison is tolerable. The word count is not bad, I hope to maintain the standard and continue to update.
In fact, the logic of this novel is very reasonable. If we really put this story into reality, it seems that it can be consistent. . . It's easy, good and cheap, so why can't it be the turn of someone who doesn't follow suit? Why can't my relatives and friends get involved? . . What does it mean to have high morals? It's just that people are strong and talk about being lofty. There is a law in this world that if you gain something, you must lose something. You must be sure that there are gains in some aspects that you don't know about. . .
The strength of this novel should be a 9. The foreshadowing and suspense are well laid out, the characters are not dull, and the plot is not cliche.
I used to read women's novels, but this time I read the male protagonist's plot. I feel that the story is quite attractive. The characters and some things that appear in the front will close the loop later. The man has narrowly escaped death several times when his life was hanging by a thread. I just don't know if the whole plot is written around Tiangong Mansion. If it is not a follow-up development, it would be better. After all, I saw that the male protagonist in 353 photos is still facing this alone. What was done over there is harmful to Tianhe. In fact, it can be announced so that more people can participate in destroying the stronghold instead of doing it alone. The most important thing is that I hope to update a few more chapters every day. Please give the author a big boost.
It's really good, it's rare to find a novel that doesn't use backdoors. Of course the chances are indeed very high
4 Stars, the combat system in this fairy world is just average, and there is no gameplay like other fairy tales. Spirit transformation still uses spiritual power, and it seems to be the same as foundation building. Except for the increase in lifespan, spirit transformation is the same as foundation building monks. Void refining monks are also very ordinary and don't look very awesome. They feel the same as foundation building monks in the later stage. This Qi training is for Qi training, Foundation building is for the middle stage of Qi training, Golden elixir is for the late Qi training period, Nascent Soul is for the perfection of Qi training, Transformation of spirit is for foundation building, and Void refining is for the late stage of Qi training. The current combination seems to be at the level of Jindan [smile][smile][smile]. Except for the fact that his lifespan has not been reduced, his combat effectiveness is basically as weak as heaven [smile][smile][smile]
I haven't read much of it so far, and I hope there won't be any stories about women in the future. Overall, it's just average, not outstanding but not terrible, so I'll encourage you with four stars.
Well written! Looks better than those with high scores!
It is a rare good book. It is solid and steady. There are basically no flaws in the logic and no poisonous points. I recommend you to read it. Good books should be supported more. I also hope that the author can continue to update. Book friends will also comment more to give the author more motivation.
Go wherever you are and be true to yourself, no matter in heaven or on earth, it is your right to speak. Do what you are capable of, work hard in a low-key manner, and wait for the flowers to bloom...
I feel very good, I am very optimistic about this book
The subject matter is very good, but it's too slow. I hope the cultivation level will be improved faster. After all, there are only so many updates every day. If the cultivation level is improved faster, it will look hot-blooded.
I think it is quite innovative and a very good book.
Suspense, thrilling, fantasy, good work, worth watching.
It's a pretty good novel, as long as it's a story, don't write about women and make up the characters. I won't listen to novels without a story.
It's okay, I just don't know why the score is low
I feel like I used to read novels, but they are so ordinary. I can only say that I can read more than 80% of the immortal novels that I like. The author can refer to previous high-rated novels and still have a chance to earn five or six thousand a month.
Yes, the killing is decisive, the plot is reasonable, there is no redundancy, and the dialogue is mindless. It is interesting. I hope the author will update it faster. It is only a few hundred thousand words.
Very good, the plot is reasonable, the story is interlocking and not laggy. It is a good book. The current rating of 7.4 Is obviously low.
The writing is quite good. I was a little sleepy at the beginning, but later I felt that the male protagonist was quite interesting, and the IQ of the passerby was not bad. It didn't make the plot particularly retarded. I caught up on the update in one go. I hope it can continue. I don't know why not many people watched it. I would like to encourage you with five stars. (Emotional scenes must be written carefully... It can easily break down)
Good books recommended to everyone
Very interesting, with novel content.
The logic is smooth, but there are some modern Chinese, inevitable cubic, etc. I hope to replace it with a classical style.
It's pretty good so far, I hope there won't be a female protagonist
Very good-looking, with a compact plot and no unnecessary nonsense.
The story concept is pretty good, you can check it out
The plot is more traditional, but the writing is sophisticated. Five stars
It's very well written, and the fairy world is unlocked at the beginning, unlike others where it is unlocked step by step.
Detailed characterization, a rare fantasy novel The angle is very good, there is humanity, warmth, and a touch of emotion. The only thing is that the update is too slow. Keep up the quality. Come on
It is no worse than those with high ratings, or even better. I hope the author will be more complete. Gold will always shine, come on!