Pony: Do You Want to Listen to Songs on the Moon? Really Want To

The rhythm feels very good, but I want to watch the life! ! ! [Laughing evilly][top post]

Good book, good book. The writing is comparable to the previous Mr. Human in Frankfurt. Believe me, it will definitely look good First: Don't go to school hungry! Second: When the weather is nice, you should sunbathe your quilt! Third: Pay attention to passing vehicles when crossing the road! Fourth: Don't rely on the strength of others! Fifth: Run barefoot on the sand!

To see such excellent Xiao Mawen, even death is worth the price of admission~

Shen Nong comes uninvited, the writing is fluent, the interactions are warm, the protagonist is very good, sunny and cheerful, not a Japanese-style dank man with heavy psychological defects, which is great. Start by rubbing Pinkie Pie's little head angrily There are some points that you can pay attention to (personal opinion) 1. The main line can be clearer to avoid the feeling of water. The sub-plots are scattered and have no connection between them. Animation is okay, but the novel recommends that the main and branch lines are connected. For example: Removing an entire subplot will have no impact on the main plot. If there are many such subplots, then you need to pay attention. 2. Generally speaking, after a plot is over, something should be gained, such as the advancement of emotional lines, abilities, foreshadowing, solving a certain problem, etc. The main thing is to grow, otherwise it will give people the feeling of having done something but not doing anything at all. ———— Of course, the above are all routines. If you are just writing for fun and reading for yourself, you don't need to worry about these, as long as you feel comfortable writing. The writing is relatively concise, without the complicated flavor that the old author has (referring to the number of words describing water, and being sloppy). The overall writing style is very fresh, which can be regarded as a characteristic.

Give it a five-star rating. The relationship between M6 and the protagonist is handled very well.

Hope to keep updating. Are there Celestia, Gray and Starlight among the author's heroines? Will the three sirens accept it? Will people accept it?

It's good-looking. It completed all my fantasies about ponies. The protagonist is relaxed and relaxed, and his attitude towards ponies remains close but not ambiguous. I read it from beginning to end, but the author has not updated it. Why why why why [Petrochemical] [Petrochemical] [Petrochemical]

The first positive review comes from me. This book was created by a newbie. Please forgive me for the poor writing style.

Good-looking (calm analysis. Jpg)

I don't know if the heroine is Twilight or Moon Okay, it actually has multiple female protagonists, and the description is quite good.

Hey hey hey hey hey

Not bad, right? There are two answers, one is pretty good and the other is pretty good.

The normal Xiao Mawen did not ruin the original work. Kids, this book is really slow-paced! It seems to be still in the first season. Then, I feel that the interaction follows the main line of the original work, and there is not much novelty. At most, the protagonist can solve some minor difficulties in the future in advance. You must have patience to read this book.

Worth a look, not bad

It's a good little novel

It's nice, I added a bookshelf [Chigua]

Interesting, very interesting

Excellent. It's beautiful, I'd love to read more.

Well written, very beautiful

It's good to watch. It's good to watch.

Okay, pretty good-looking

Very nice little text

The author's soul returns

Come on, author, I hope there won't be eunuchs

Uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh

Help the author not to play rematch every day (.`ω´)

The story between humans and ponies is not bad.

Very beautiful, recommended to those who love watching ponies

A very good short story with a lighthearted and interesting plot

I just like the author's character of writing too much accidentally. Of course, the content is also very interesting, and it has multiple female protagonists that I like.