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It looks good, it looks good. The protagonist is not completely good, but not evil enough. It feels like a cactus, with a thin layer of thorns standing on the outside. When you peel it off, you will find that it is sweet juice and soft. Overall, it is very beautiful, but the style looks a bit sadistic, maybe because it was not developed in the early stage. When the author writes slowly, it should look much better in the later period. I can't think of any words to describe this book. I really like this kind of book, although I have a strong ability to empathize. Every time I see the protagonist, I feel that he is so weak and miserable but he is so kind. Really, the protagonist, who has gone through a lot of things and is quite a twisted character, really needs a friend who can break into houses and an enlightening person.

I can't even imagine how much food [heartfelt] I would get now if there really was a character like Yi in the Seer animation; what she would look like in the second creation, a cute, beautiful and kind-hearted little pseudo-female-looking handsome (probably?) Elf with a curse on her back. If I had seen it back then, I would have saved myself 10 years of detours and passed the examination.

①The teacher's writing is so good that it makes me spin. The character creation of Ilos is very successful and three-dimensional. My personal understanding is that although he seems to not care about anything, and even deliberately keeps a distance, he is actually afraid that the curse on himself will affect others. He is a kind-hearted baby. ② I have liked Reno since I was a child, but there are very few fan works written about him. The Reno in the teacher's article particularly fits my image of him. I hope the teacher can also arrange more plots about him in the future. He is a very good brother. ③Finally, please give me more updates🌹🌹🌹

It's super nice. I like Luoluo's white cut and black. It's very sweet. I bought it with confidence. I just want to see Xiao En and Luoluo next door interact. I like it very much. I want to eat more food [Blow kiss]

Good looking I really like the way Dean and Iros get along, but I feel like the scenes between these two are a bit sparse. Please look for a meal replacement that has the same way of getting along. In my opinion, the relationship between this pair is: one person (unstable, has physical/mental problems, can make f, has little experience) I feel like they are a perfect match, it just so happens that one can't take care of himself and the other can take care of others. It's a pity that the relationship between these two in the text is more of a mutually beneficial relationship, and they are the type of people who won't look for each other when nothing happens. Other than that, I feel that the plot of this article is quite routine, and the protagonist's goal/main line is always clear. The emotional scenes are also pretty good, there are very few fighting scenes, and the plots are quite heartwarming. It's just that our Luo Luo is a bit miserable, I feel sad >ㅅ< What is particularly bad is this system. I feel that it is not very useful and is a hindrance. It is quite annoying. I hope Iros can get a better system in the future. The protagonist is not particularly strong, and the writing is not exciting. In terms of fighting, the protagonist is a bit like Yanqing next door. He is obviously very strong, but he always fights with people he cannot beat. (Poor Lolo was autistic for a while because of this incident, and good Dean still wanted to help regain his confidence) I feel like it's suitable to watch before going to bed because the plot doesn't have many ups and downs.

I think it's very good-looking. The characters of Dean, Sai Xiaoxi and others are not broken. I think it's very good-looking. But I think Dean should be given some rewards appropriately, such as finding a planet where there are no elves but plenty of energy, or who is that? I forgot, after all, I haven't watched the Seer number for five or six years. Ah Tie beat up the tiger's former owner Jie Jie Jie, or asked him for trouble Jie Jie Jie. After all, this is what I am like. You give me something to eat, and I will give you something to eat. You are good to me, and I am good to you. Jie Jie Jie.

Do you know how attractive this setting is to old readers? I'm really starving for books. Oh my god, this setting is really awesome! What a group favorite! It's still the kind of group favor that you get by relying on your own charm. The system is the same as Deep Seek (the one that was a bit cold in the early stage is the agent system)

It's very good. It feels like it's only a matter of time before it reaches 9 points. I'm still a strong writer and drawer. So far, I've only found three such excellent Seer fanfics that are to my liking. The two next door are the immersive parenting of a "boy mother" and the travels and growth of a "princess". Little Luoluo has a feeling of beauty, strength and misery. He gets to know everyone under the obsession of going home, and he is also growing in the process. All in all, it's excellent.

This is so cute, so perfect. I grabbed the sofa like a husky and grabbed some cotton. I shed 60% of my tears on the earth, and my tears turned the dry land into an oasis. Now I have become a good person. Everyone asked me how I did it. I burst into tears and said it was the food produced by Teacher Angel that saved me.

Great! The author's writing is okay, the plot design is also very good, and the character creation is also acceptable. There are a few ideas, but they are second to the protagonist. Woo hoo, our Lolo is really good [almost crying]. The relationship with other elves is also sweet and warm. There aren't too many chapters at the moment, so that's all. I look forward to the author's follow-up updates. The author probably doesn't have to put so much pressure on him. Don't underestimate the ability of our readers to withstand stress. [Laughs] We are often treated as Japanese. (Ahem, I really hope that the author doesn't have to put so much pressure on himself. The need to adjust is not an unforgivable thing. Compared with writing, The quality of the work has declined due to his own condition (it doesn't seem to be the case). We prefer that the author cook for us in a normal relaxed state. If the author is happy, we are also happy. We really don't need to put so much pressure on ourselves. (It seems a bit wordy...) In short, the author should be happy! If you are in a bad mood, just relax! (ง•̀_•́)ง (As an aside, (about the comments about poor quality) I actually think it's really good. After all, not many people know this circle, and most of them are children, so I'm very happy when someone washes their hands and cooks. But, the quality is not necessarily the same. Some of them are really good. I can't go on, so this book is already very good for me. It has a general logic, is not confusing, and has no mistakes in grammar. It is enough to read smoothly, and it also satisfies my little XP on this basis, so I think the five stars 🌟 is what the author deserves 🎉)

"What was he thinking when the arrow fell?" - The emotions contained in the words are like a fine net, and the struggle of the soul touches the strings of fate - everything is so cleverly designed. The children who once wanted to be heroes have now become the seeds of returning home, even though the roots of life have long been deeply rooted in the soil of a foreign land, they are stubborn and stubborn. "The world is meaningless, just because of your happiness" - mother's words turned into the wind of hometown, gently, gently soothing the restless heart of the wanderer. The language of this book is delicate and plain, and the plot is interlocking and touching. Although the writing style is a bit immature, it can be seen that it has been growing and improving. I hope the author's update frequency and quality can be more stable, and the content can be more compact. Let's move towards the future together [making faces]

It's really good-looking, but a little lacking. The setting of the protagonist is really exciting. The most important thing is that there are no special links, and the settings of other characters in it are not broken either. I hope the author never gives up

It's too short and not enough to read. Does the author still have 3 million manuscripts that have not been released? Can they be released at once? Scared me to death.

You don't have to think this way. Although your book is very good, to be honest, some people will wait for many books. Once your book is good, I will start updating it. If it takes a long time, I will read it from the beginning (only good-looking books). Good-looking books have attracted many readers (only personal thoughts) [laughing][laughing]

I feel that the character of the protagonist is quite good. Although he has his own interests and can distinguish right from wrong, he does not necessarily have to act according to his own sense of right and wrong. He will help those who are intentional and kind to him, and will not do anything that is unfavorable to him. Regardless of whether he is right or wrong, I am very curious. Looking at it this way, there are only two possible endings for the protagonist. Although it does not rule out that the author's imagination is open and there are other possibilities, the most likely ones are the following two First, the protagonist returns home successfully, but to other partners in this world, is the protagonist equivalent to disappearing or dying? Or have they forgotten about it? Second, the protagonist does not make it home successfully. That would be a pretty bad ending for the other partners and the protagonist. Of course, it is also possible that in the first ending, after the protagonist successfully returns home, he can open the door between this world and his home, so that his friends can visit his home. This is the best way, but as long as I think about the people on earth over there seeing the Purcell, I want to laugh 😂

The boss is mighty! The boss is awesome! The boss is unparalleled! ! ! The little girl who read the book of the boss took root and sprouted and turned into a young lady, and then let the young lady turn into a little girl with a knife in her hand. I will follow the boss for the rest of my life!

The protagonist in the author's writing is very novel. He has his own purpose and his own thinking. He is not only the protagonist in the author's writing, he is also himself. He is very contradictory, but it makes people want to read on. It is a very good article in Serge. I like it very much.

Now that I see it, I feel that the author's writing is superb I quite like it. I really like it. I should have discovered this book earlier, woo woo hoo The year I wanted to read fanfics the most, because I had basically read all the fanfics I wanted to read, so I started reading shitty fanfics, and then I came out with a constipated look on my face, oooooooooooo

Boss, I hope you will continue writing. This is the first time I have seen this kind of fanfic without cp and no position. And I really like all the characters you wrote, boss

The author's writing style is very good [like][like] Lolo is also very good

A sensible plot, except that the writing seems a bit immature at the beginning, it becomes more and more exciting as you read later. The author's plot and combat settings are very reasonable. I hope this book will get better and better. It's not easy to find a job in the cold circle. Come on, author!

It's very good, the subject matter is very unique, I like it

Good book, good treasure, very popular. Bai Yueguang Kuku gave me a good review, so handsome.

Wow, wow, it feels super good-looking. The main character is really in line with my xp, but it's too little. The author should update it more. I'll give it a try if I'm hungry.

It looks great. I would like to ask, does the protagonist have a CP?

Oh my gosh, if I don't read it for a day, I feel tingling all over my body. I want to read it and the author hopes you can update it soon. I want to read it and I really want to read it. It's so good that I can't get enough of it if I don't read it for a day.

It's really beautiful (♥∀♥)

It's too short and not enough to read. Can the author update 50 chapters in one day to scare me? I guarantee I will be scared [laughing]

Good-looking is good-looking, good-looking for no reason [smile]

Nice! I really like the setting of the protagonist😍