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[Two male protagonists + mutual redemption + campus + sour and sweet abuse]
"He is the unquenched fire in the ashes, he is the incense hidden under the yoke."
——Two scarred teenagers, a passionate love that redeems each other.
Jiang Jin is a well-known "mad dog" in Wucheng No. 1 Middle School. He has a hard fist and a bad temper. He lives in a dilapidated alley. His father is an alcoholic and domestically violent, and his mother died young. He is like a scorching fire, burning everyone close to him and burning himself.
Shen Huaizhi is a perfect top student in everyone's eyes. He has a prominent family background, top grades, and is always polite. But no one knew that he lived in the shadow of his father's high-pressure control, and even cried silently.
An arrangement of "assisted learning" forced two completely opposite teenagers to intersect.
Jiang Jin discovered that the seemingly indifferent top student would take off his glasses tiredly when no one was around and secretly feed stray cats;
Shen Huaizhi saw the school bully who was feared by everyone, huddled alone in the corner of the alley after the fight, staring at the photo of his mother in a daze.
He blocked the fist for him, and resisted the shackles for him.
He hugged his scars on a rainy night, and held his wrist tightly in a sea of people.
When rumors, family pressure and past shadows came one after another, Jiang Jin grabbed Shen Huaizhi's collar and roared:
"You obviously have a bright future, why do you have to jump into this puddle of mud like me?!"
However, Shen Huaizhi just gently wiped the blood from the corner of his mouth and whispered:
"Because you gave me the smell of freedom from the ashes."
Reader comments
Of course my book should be given five stars🌚
It's quite good-looking, both sharp and sweet, the overall length is small, and the plot is quite good. A down-and-out young man and a controlled young master reflect the class gap, and also reflect the hard-won love between them. There are even some small foreshadowings. In fact, what surprised me the most was that Shou's mother turned out to be the doctor of Gong's mother. What surprised me even more was that Shou's father actually accepted Gong. I remember there was a plot in the middle that I liked very much. His father said: Although I don't support you being together, I don't use such despicable means. Although it is said that his father has caused a lot of pain, it is also very good to make up for it in the future. I wish their story will be immortal.
It's very interesting, the characters are full-bodied, and they create two strong and indomitable teenagers. The writing is also very good, and the story is rich and full of ups and downs.
It is worth watching, two completely opposite teenagers: one is a bad student in everyone's eyes, and one is a good student in everyone's eyes; one is from a poor family and his father is alcoholic and violent, and the other is from a prominent family and is controlled by his father.
But neither surrendered to fate and became each other's salvation. Even in the face of differences, misunderstandings, frame-ups, and family obstructions, we remain resilient and bravely pursue our hearts and be our true selves.
"You obviously have a bright future, why do you have to jump into this mud like me?"
"Because you gave me the smell of freedom from the ashes"
[He is the unquenched fire in the ashes, he is the incense hidden in the shackles]
Finally, I really like the author's article. It's very impressive and deeply touching.
It's good-looking, the characters in it are all very distinct, and there aren't any bad guys.
Two-way redemption, they are really good, they suffer in order to attack, resisting their father for the first time [almost crying][almost crying]
Okay, no spoilers, I highly recommend everyone to watch it! Don't miss it! 2025.5.17, Finished spreading flowers [sending hearts][sending hearts][sending hearts]
The plot of the story is very good, but it feels a bit confusing in some places, with too many repetitions. Both of them have forgotten the places they visited and the things they said. I don't know why. But overall it's very good, I like it very much
It's beautiful\(//∇//)\[Adoration] The author's descriptions are so delicate, it really poked me, and there are so many words in each chapter, I like it! [Blowing a kiss] Please update quickly [Sending heartfelt wishes]
It's so good-looking, my god, it's very suitable for a book-hungry person like me. It's just that there are too few, and I'm a bit unfinished.
It's sour and sour, so well written, I wish you both a 99
A perfect book
The emotional description is very delicate
The two-way redemption is nice, but the order seems weird.
The author writes very well. It is my favorite book recently.
The content is good, but some of the plots are repetitive and there are some minor changes, which look weird, but overall it's okay! Two teenagers who redeem each other [learned] [learned]
It's quite nice, but some parts are repeated or not described well, but overall it's still very good.
Don't skip a chapter, campus literature
The jumps in the back are a bit fast, the emotions are delicate, there are no too blatant confessions, and the previous chapters are a bit metaphorical. Although there are difficulties, I have never separated or given up.
The pace is fast and beautiful
The writing is quite beautiful.
Super super pretty [admiration]
Very nice, clear conditioning
Help! If you really want to pick it up, just swipe it twice.
It's not bad, but it's repetitive in some places. Overall, it's a very good book.
Simple and plain, just like thick ink melting into a pond and thinking about it for a while
Beautiful, delicious, pure love
This book is good-looking, the characters are full-bodied and well-drawn, but the plot is a bit off-kilter, not very connected, and has repetitive parts.
The writing is more realistic, there is no wealthy CEO, just bits and pieces of time! It's an ordinary love story that breaks through the world but has a great ending. Dear friends, you can read it...
Of course my book should be given five stars🌚
It's quite good-looking, both sharp and sweet, the overall length is small, and the plot is quite good. A down-and-out young man and a controlled young master reflect the class gap, and also reflect the hard-won love between them. There are even some small foreshadowings. In fact, what surprised me the most was that Shou's mother turned out to be the doctor of Gong's mother. What surprised me even more was that Shou's father actually accepted Gong. I remember there was a plot in the middle that I liked very much. His father said: Although I don't support you being together, I don't use such despicable means. Although it is said that his father has caused a lot of pain, it is also very good to make up for it in the future. I wish their story will be immortal.
It's very interesting, the characters are full-bodied, and they create two strong and indomitable teenagers. The writing is also very good, and the story is rich and full of ups and downs. It is worth watching, two completely opposite teenagers: one is a bad student in everyone's eyes, and one is a good student in everyone's eyes; one is from a poor family and his father is alcoholic and violent, and the other is from a prominent family and is controlled by his father. But neither surrendered to fate and became each other's salvation. Even in the face of differences, misunderstandings, frame-ups, and family obstructions, we remain resilient and bravely pursue our hearts and be our true selves. "You obviously have a bright future, why do you have to jump into this mud like me?" "Because you gave me the smell of freedom from the ashes" [He is the unquenched fire in the ashes, he is the incense hidden in the shackles] Finally, I really like the author's article. It's very impressive and deeply touching.
It's good-looking, the characters in it are all very distinct, and there aren't any bad guys. Two-way redemption, they are really good, they suffer in order to attack, resisting their father for the first time [almost crying][almost crying] Okay, no spoilers, I highly recommend everyone to watch it! Don't miss it! 2025.5.17, Finished spreading flowers [sending hearts][sending hearts][sending hearts]
The plot of the story is very good, but it feels a bit confusing in some places, with too many repetitions. Both of them have forgotten the places they visited and the things they said. I don't know why. But overall it's very good, I like it very much
It's beautiful\(//∇//)\[Adoration] The author's descriptions are so delicate, it really poked me, and there are so many words in each chapter, I like it! [Blowing a kiss] Please update quickly [Sending heartfelt wishes]
It's so good-looking, my god, it's very suitable for a book-hungry person like me. It's just that there are too few, and I'm a bit unfinished.
It's sour and sour, so well written, I wish you both a 99
A perfect book
The emotional description is very delicate
The two-way redemption is nice, but the order seems weird.
The author writes very well. It is my favorite book recently.
The content is good, but some of the plots are repetitive and there are some minor changes, which look weird, but overall it's okay! Two teenagers who redeem each other [learned] [learned]
It's quite nice, but some parts are repeated or not described well, but overall it's still very good.
Don't skip a chapter, campus literature The jumps in the back are a bit fast, the emotions are delicate, there are no too blatant confessions, and the previous chapters are a bit metaphorical. Although there are difficulties, I have never separated or given up.
The pace is fast and beautiful
The writing is quite beautiful.
Super super pretty [admiration]
Very nice, clear conditioning
Help! If you really want to pick it up, just swipe it twice.
It's not bad, but it's repetitive in some places. Overall, it's a very good book.
Simple and plain, just like thick ink melting into a pond and thinking about it for a while
Beautiful, delicious, pure love
This book is good-looking, the characters are full-bodied and well-drawn, but the plot is a bit off-kilter, not very connected, and has repetitive parts.
The writing is more realistic, there is no wealthy CEO, just bits and pieces of time! It's an ordinary love story that breaks through the world but has a great ending. Dear friends, you can read it...