Thanks for the Marriage, My System Is Activated

After reading more than 500 chapters from the first chapter, I originally thought it would be an ordinary flowing article, a sentimental work with blunt emotions, but I didn't expect it, I didn't expect it, I struck gold! I originally thought that it might be the crotch pulling at the back that caused the score to be less than 7 points, but when I saw this, I thought, author, are you being targeted? This is definitely on the 8-point level, and even a 9-point rating is reasonable. The emotional lines in this work are rich and delicate. Everyone has emotional lines, and it does not mean that they will not appear later. The author seems to be showing us a real experience in a natural narrative way. The emotional description is very natural, without ink, no procrastination, and no hypocrite and eunuch. The emotional descriptions make people sink into it, and sometimes it is as sweet as eating honey. Everyone's characteristics are maintained, and there is no drastic change like brainwashing after being together. It is very natural and almost real. The fighting aspect is very rich, and the various scenes are very rich. It seems that it may be the use of modern network tools. After all, it is not easy to imagine those scenes. The combination of various vocabulary is far beyond what ordinary people can do. Otherwise, the author's imagination is too powerful. Of course, it doesn't matter if you use tools. After all, tools help people, not restrict them. And the author can make the article look smooth and natural, which is his ability. Anyway, if I were asked to use AI to create an article on the level of this novel, I wouldn't be able to do it. After all, it's all about writing, and some people just write better than others. The plot is also very good. Although it may be a bit urgent, but combined with the article, it is very reasonable. After all, there is a world of personal power, whether it is brutal, brutal, upright, or duplicitous. There is no right or wrong, only winning and losing. Everything that happens is within reason and beyond imagination. Let me think of its shortcomings, and I can't think of any, because I think the work is great and I can't fault it. However, there are bound to be shortcomings. After all, everyone has different reading experiences and feelings. In the last sentence, there is definitely something wrong with this score. 6.9 Is too low, right? ! If this score is 6.9, Then what are the 7 and 8 graded journals I saw before? Is there something wrong with the scoring system?

There are many people who like to read novels, and everyone's preferences are different. The protagonist of this book is an ordinary immortal cultivator who is gradually growing up and will definitely become an extraordinary immortal cultivator. It feels very good and makes me want to keep watching it. The author of this book has worked very hard, there is a storyline, and there are no flaws in the logic. It's not a mindless upgrade stream. It's getting better and better from behind [Like][Like][Like]

Come on! Ten stars support! Don't arrange pig's feet for your children too early! After all, pig's feet can't stay in one place all the time, and golden fingers are also related to beauties. It would be great to be free and easy with beauties!

(To be honest, the main purpose of the plug-in is to find women, so don't be like the female channel. If you want to find a woman, just say it. You are so impressed by a straight woman. You are not a loser. The plug-in is also useful for women. This is a huge opportunity in the world of immortality. You have it. Isn't it hard to improve your favorability? After so many years of struggling in the world of immortality, why are you still as ignorant as when you first time traveled?) The above is my personal experience after reading briefly. I ignore some logical problems, but it is still readable. It is also a good mortal novel on Tomato.

I have read many novels about cultivating immortals, and I definitely recommend this book. There is no procrastination, the plot development follows logic, and it is not a mindless writing. If it keeps like this, this book will definitely become a hit.

So far (Chapter 103) the overall viewing experience is pretty good. Let me just talk about a few points that impressed me deeply. The system is more like a data panel of character attributes. Since the system is closely related to multiple female protagonists, there are more romance parts (which seems quite positive) I didn't see any serious surprises. However, there is a huge and currently unclear hidden danger, and that is Fang Lizhe. At present, I can't see the meaning of writing this and it is easy to explode. An additional point about the system, I personally don't like the system that gives you the heaven-defying physique and the heaven-defying exercises from the beginning. I don't know whether the system cultivates immortality or people cultivate immortality. Anyone who has played games knows that 80% of the fun of a game is in the development period. This is also the reason why I like this type of system with smaller functions. Finally, I started reading this book without reading the reviews. After reading it, I looked at the review section and realized, Oh my god, are we reading the same book? [Cover face]

I have cultivated and grown up with various types of female cultivators, including those of the tea type, the yandere, the aloof, the transformed demon, etc. [Smile]. At this level, the transformed god is basically the ancestor of the sect. The protagonist is currently at the peak of the mid-Nascent Soul stage of physical and mental cultivation, and many of the major sect leaders are at the Nascent Soul stage.

Keep writing more emotions and explicit details! Everyone loves to see these!

If you have a system, you still need to suppress your combat power. Mark it.

To be honest, the plot is good, the logic is smooth, the literary talent is also very good, the characters have distinct personalities, and they are not disposable. The characters created are indeed loved and hated, such as the eldest lady of the Li family and Bai Ling'er who I personally dislike, and the mirror spirit and the first wife who I like more. But there are still some surprises, such as the plot of the thief Cao and the mother and daughter serving together. There is also a love-stealing plot, and the key is to bring the sufferer back and whip him again, which is really a bit much. But preferences vary from person to person.

IQ is online, it is not as verbose as the Holy Mother, and I finally found a book among a bunch of AI or elementary school novels on Tomato that I can still read.

The author gives you an idea. It's better to add this set during weekends, but let the protagonist know in advance, let the protagonist find a golden elixir girl with good talent and good conduct, and directly write a single girl to build a family. Just give a proper reason in the early stage.

The protagonist and his Taoist companion suffered from lack of experience a few times before the middle stage of foundation building, but they grew up obviously later on. Whether they were fighting or running away to avoid being chased, they were both brave and resourceful, and even the villains were not fools. The Taoist Companion in the late stage is not a background, unlike other novels where the Taoist Companion is used purely for the plot and then no one is found. When the Mahayana Stage group is launched, a dozen Mahayana Stage members are directly produced and the aliens on the opposite side are shocked. Han Li, the leader of the system, asked you if you were afraid when he led Taoist companions to play in a group? It's a pity that the data of the later books is not good, and the author also said that he skipped some character development and finished it as soon as possible, which is a pity.

Yes, he is of flesh and blood, not the kind of person who will only cultivate for a lifetime and not want women and children.

It's worth reading when I'm in a book shortage. It's a harem story that I can read. The timeline is very long, so you can read it slowly. There may be some shortcomings in the early stage, but the middle and late parts can completely make up for it. The protagonist is very suitable for me. The rating may be slightly lower. The ending feels a bit hasty, but it can be regarded as an open ending. At least it is not unfinished. I feel a little unsatisfied after reading it. After thinking about it, I still get full marks. This book shouldn't be left behind.

The lewd and cunning protagonist is more realistic

Mark it, saying that he practiced the elixir on the first day of hiding, but then he turned around and sold elixirs and pretended to be an alchemist.

The language is simple and unpretentious, and the story has interesting twists and turns!

I think it's okay, the overall impression is pretty good, but the improvement in cultivation is slow. I think the author writes better about fighting than most novels on Tomato [Thinking] [Laughing]

The writing is quite good, and the writing style and description are also very smooth! Don't know why the rating is so low. In addition, the plot at the beginning seems to have echoes from several books I have read before. Could it be that the plot is grafted on, so it cannot be related [laughs][laughs]

Now that we know that the two-star Ningzhen Pill can heal the Dantian, why not use the 500 snacks to buy one?

A very realistic fantasy about cultivating immortals. It is fascinating and a bookworm of thirty years will give it a thumbs up. Much better than some five-star ones!

At present, I personally feel that it is not as bad as the one and two stars in the comment area. I would like to support it by giving it five stars. Chapter 79 is fun, but after chapter 200 it's really a little bit toxic.

The protagonist uses his golden finger to make people without spiritual roots grow spiritual roots, and can also improve the quality of spiritual roots! But if you always tell the people around you, you will definitely be arrested and used as a tool!

It looks good, but it's a bit bland. It needs a large amount to be full.

Very good, no starlings, the text is smoother.

The content of the story is somewhat interesting, the concept is novel, legendary, and fascinating. It deserves to continue to see more exciting sequels.

The food is good, and the female characters are all very distinctive.

If you don't be too picky, this book is still okay.

This book is really well written. I'm a bookworm of 20 years. There are not many books available now. What is AI now? A lot of crappy books with no logic. Take a look at this.