Yaoshou************

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates. Are you raising and fostering? …

Changing single, the writing is excellent, the description of women's clothing and female bodies is good, and the description of female abduction is almost non-existent. The story about cultivating immortals and transforming into immortals, the battle scenes are well described, the plot is okay, the characters are well developed, and the descriptions of the master and the master are full of details. It's a pity that the poisonous point is the description of how embarrassing it is to become a woman at the beginning. Come on, the world of immortality! They have souls and can seize bodies. What is the difference between men and women? Also, you are a cultivator, but you still get nosebleeds when you see your master taking a bath. Women have different physiological structures and it is difficult for women to have nosebleeds, and they are not so energetic. In addition, the subjectivity of cultivating immortality is to have inner understanding, and the state of mind is also very important. The obsession with men and women is really inconsistent, so if you can accept these poisonous points, just read on. The writing is really good and worth collecting.

It looks good, I hope the protagonist can live a life without shame as soon as possible

Ask the author if he changed his marriage [what]

It's okay. The plot is tight and there are a lot of holes. It depends on how to fill them later. I've only read a few chapters so far, but I think it's okay so far.

Although the protagonist is not a time traveler and lacks a sense of immersion, the predicament created for the protagonist at the beginning is very interesting. I look forward to the subsequent development of the protagonist. The setting of reopening the account is very interesting. It is the beginning of the boss opening a trumpet and returning to the Novice Village to play pig and eat the tiger, but it is not a smooth sailing and brainless experience. The expansion of the world view is not friendly to readers who are new to the subject of cultivating immortals, but it does not affect the reading. After checking Doubao, I understand the basic situation and it does not affect the reading. There are so few reviews for this book, so give it 5 stars first to support it, and then follow up with reviews It's still a bit smooth sailing, and the tag "Invincible" accounts for a relatively large proportion.

Not bad, the author will keep up the good work

The plot is very exciting, the setting is good, but it's a bit unsatisfying, and the emotional line is a bit intermittent, but it doesn't affect the viewing experience. No, why is it written down in a single form? I came in to see the story about getting married. It was a scam. I asked why the relationship line was so intermittent. It turned out that I didn't plan to write it anymore. It wasn't because I got married and left.

Very nice! ! ! I hope the author will continue to finish writing [smile][smile][smile]

It's okay, but the update always stops for a few days for no reason [face covering] They keep saying that the label has changed [face covering] At least during the book test days, it definitely didn't have the label of being married. If it really changed, I wouldn't read it.

How is this realm divided?

Okay, the author writes well

Needless to say [cool] very good looking

It looks good and the writing is okay

Nice looking and quite funny

A book that can be used frequently

Nice looking, quite interesting

Watch [Blowing Kiss], the plot is compact and the characters are vivid. I look forward to the follow-up plot.

It's so beautiful, why are there so few people watching it?

Good looking and worth recommending

Good, good, good, good

When will we go to Xuanbing Holy Land, and when will we return to Daoyi? [What]

Not bad, come on, author

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