With a Jade Jewel at the Beginning, Mortals Quietly Cultivate Themselves into Immortals

The work is very good. Book lovers must be patient and don't miss a good work [Like] The plot before the third level of Qi training is a little slow, but it also vividly depicts the hardships of cultivating immortality and the protagonist's character. The character of the protagonist is quite good, with a firm mind, self-discipline, prudence, and perseverance. There is no poison, no perverted troublemaker, and no overflowing Holy Mother heart. When the protagonist buys the third level of Qi training and is promoted to an outer disciple, the plot becomes very exciting, the setting is reasonable, smooth and attractive. Finally, I hope the author will create more and update more, and write about the world of cultivating immortality in his heart as soon as possible [Like][Like][Like]

This author is very perseverant. The performance of this book seems not to be good either. I can still keep writing. Just like the main character is imprisoned, the sect makes you suffer for your own good. Then the author should suffer a little more and keep writing, and he will definitely achieve results.

The writing technique of this book is an excessive accumulation of descriptive rhetoric, just like a sweet candy. It cannot be said that it is not a sweet delicacy, but as you chew it, you will inevitably have a disgusting emotion in your heart. As for how to stack rhetoric, you will understand after reading a few chapters. Emotions can surge like mountains and oceans at every turn, and abysses can be as oppressive as mountains and oceans at every turn. In addition, there are many clichés in the plot. As soon as the protagonist buys something, an NPC young master comes to show off and slap him in the face. After beating the younger one, the older one comes again. He uses it over and over again, and he is not a son of a man. Changing maps too frequently makes the elites of the sect become casual cultivators. There are many illogicalities. But overall, this book is still a novel above the pass line, and it is still readable. The author just makes the mistake of novices who like to pile up words. He is diligent in updating and the level is above average. Still giving five stars for encouragement.

The author loves to use extremely exaggerated sentences to express the protagonist's emotions [face covering], a hint of despair and a hint of unwillingness.

Can anyone explain this? I saw that Elder Jindan was leading the team to support the demonic invasion. Why were there no foundation-building disciples? Only the top geniuses of the sect could practice Qi to perfection. We can't just follow the protagonist's level in setting all the settings. It's okay to explain it at least.

The author updates too slowly, tempering the body, training the tendons, breaking bones, training the grain, training the heart, training the liver, training the spleen, training the lungs, training the kidneys, training the essence, opening the pulse, guiding the qi, gathering qi, condensing the qi, transforming the qi, training the qi, building the foundation, gathering elixirs, dispersing elixirs, condensing elixirs, transforming elixirs, becoming elixirs, golden elixirs, yuan elixirs, half infants, condensing infants, dispersing infants, transforming infants, Yuanying, Yuanshen, distracting gods, combining gods, transforming gods, condensing, dispersing , combine body, combine qi, combine base, combine elixir, combine baby, combine god, combine spirit, combine soul, small success, medium success, great success, transforming the void, refining the void, cave void, dispersing the void, returning to the void, blending the void, breaking the void, void dao, heavenly void, asking the void, breaking the void, asking for the tripod, Mingxuan, cavexuan, void extreme, empty silence, Mahayana, overcoming the calamity, peeking into the sky, becoming an immortal, ascending, false immortal, false immortal, becoming an immortal, transforming an immortal, earthly immortal. Adult Immortal, Immortal Infant, Half Immortal, Quasi Immortal, Virtual Immortal, Yaxian, Mortal Immortal, Zeng Immortal, Human Immortal, First Immortal, Heavenly Immortal, True Immortal, Xuan Immortal, Yuan Immortal, Taiyi True Immortal, Taiyi Xuanxian, Taiyi Yuanxian, Daluo True Immortal, Daluo Xuanxian, Daluo Luo Yuanxian, Jiutian Tianxian, Jiutian Xuanxian, Jiutian Yuanxian, Shangxian, Yuxian, Taixian, Jinxian, Taiyishangxian, Taiyiyuxian, Taiyi Taixian, Taiyijinxian, Daluo Shangxian, Daluo Yuxian, Daluo Taixian, Daluojin Immortal, Nine Heavens Supreme Immortal, Nine Heavens Jade Immortal, Nine Heavens Immortal, Immortal Lord, Immortal King, Immortal Star, Immortal Lord, Immortal Lord, Immortal Saint, Quasi-Emperor, Immortal Emperor, Immortal God, Nine Heavens Immortal King, Nine Heavens Immortal, Nine Heavens Immortal Lord, Nine Heavens Immortal Lord, Nine Heavens Immortal Saint, Nine Heavens Quasi-Emperor, Nine Heavens Immortal Emperor, Hunyuan Golden Immortal, Hunyuan Taiyi Golden Immortal, Hunyuan Daluo Golden Immortal, Chaos Immortal Lord, Chaos Immortal King, Chaos Immortal Lord, Chaos Immortal Emperor, Chaos Immortal Saint, Hongmeng Immortal Lord, Hongmeng Immortal King, Hongmeng Immortal Lord,

It's nice to watch, the descriptions are very detailed, and the world view and Golden Finger are very novel. I hope the protagonist can use Goldfinger to become more powerful.

When I open a new map, I suddenly can't stand it anymore.

The details are quite exciting and give people a refreshing feeling, unlike ordinary people's routine of playing games and upgrading. Come on! Take good care of you!

Step by step, there are little golden fingers. - The effort of taking one step at a time is much better than those books that copy a lot of spiritual stones at every turn and refine the best elixirs just by learning them.

Judging from the chapters updated to the latest, this book is really good. Come on, author, slowly settle down and write. Don't be anxious. A good book must be slow and meticulous. Explore step by step and describe step by step. Don't reach the sky in one step. It's too fast, but it will be bland and tasteless. Writing a book is like making soup. When the heat is up, it will be naturally rich and fresh. On the contrary, it will be a clear soup with little water, which is bland and tasteless. The Qi training part of this book is really good, really good. It was written very deeply during the struggle during the Qi training period.

The details are shown very concretely and visually. The depiction of transitions sometimes seems stiff and lacks some randomness and naturalness.

Overall, well written. It's not boring or repetitive, I watched it with gusto. [Eat melon] I hope there won't be any love or affection later on, which will irritate my eyes. You have to upgrade your treasure, change the map, and then become stronger and stronger. Give it five stars to show your support.

(I'm not procrastinating, I'm just sharing my feelings after reading it. Don't try to criticize me. I won't listen. I won't read the comments others may give me later. There is no best. I just share my feelings because I like this book very much.) Summary: I haven't seen the heroine yet, and the plot is not too obtrusive. It's very interesting to read, and the setting suits me very well. It seems to be as comfortable as Mortal Cultivation Legend, but it has its own characteristics. I can accept the settings. For example, the protagonist has four spiritual roots and can only choose a path that consolidates the foundation. He cannot fight at higher levels. There are also many detailed settings such as magic weapons, monster levels, item prices, etc. I can only say that I accept it. The plot of Qi Refining Period is plentiful but not complicated. It is very detailed and not boring to watch. The protagonist has no cheats, just Cheng Xinjue, a jade pendant-like thing, which is equivalent to a chance magic weapon. And his character is cautious and careful, similar to Han Li. The protagonist had a relatively miserable time in the early stage of Qi training, which I understand as a way to hone the protagonist. In the middle and later stages, he had to fight for resources on his own. He was doing okay. After building the foundation, he became a master of alchemy. He is currently very optimistic about the protagonist, giving guidance on practice and rewarding him with techniques. It's 200 chapters, and I haven't seen a female protagonist yet. I personally like to have a single female protagonist, but many authors can't write the emotional line well, which will reduce readers' interest. I don't know what this author is like, so keep reading. The current score is perfect, absolutely wonderful. It would be nice if there were more updates (please remind me online) I saw Chapter 298, which contains a description of the "Fu family". I understand who I offended. It's so hard to guess. It couldn't be a monk named Han, or a monk named Li [makes a face][makes a face]

It's okay, just write slowly to keep up with your level, and don't listen to other readers' nonsense and turn it into a cool article to cultivate immortality. The most popular novel in Tomato is Ji Yin Lao Mo. I wrote 1,600 chapters quickly, but I still need 800 chapters to become a god. The writing about the blind date is a bit ordinary, and the second senior sister is not a good person, so why are you afraid of offending her? Showing courtesy for nothing is either a traitor or a thief, and the second senior sister doesn't take the protagonist seriously, so it's not necessary to save Su Xue, so what if she offends her? The other person is not a reliable person. Don't be afraid of rejecting others, as this will make you even more despised and bullied in the eyes of such people. I jumped to see it, and later I actually joined the family as a guest, and gave up the book. Don't make excuses for yourself. You said you were being asked to collect things and you ended up being a nanny. As a guest, you belong to the subordinates and not to the superiors. Is it dangerous to collect in the market or to be a nanny? There are a lot of battles after becoming a guest. You rejected the City Lord's Mansion before, so you weren't afraid of offending them? In order to extend the narrative, you have to make nonsense

In the early stage, the talisman was not sold very much, otherwise the spiritual stone would have been rich early, and later on when the elixir was practiced, there was no talk of selling it. The talisman was in the mine in front of it, so it is understandable that it would not be sold, but what about before? What happens next? But it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist's combat power and realm. It can be seen that the foundation building is currently seen.

The writing is very detailed, and the content is more pure and ordinary. Golden Finger is not very advanced. I think it is quite good-looking. It is a real mortal flow that I prefer.

Yes, I have read it before, and this is the second time I have read it. I really like this kind of technical novel about cultivating immortals. If you can't finish it, it's just because the character and value orientation of the protagonist are not in line with your preferences. The book itself is really well written! I like, for now, the first part! ! ! !

I think it's okay after seeing this, but I don't know what happens next.

I gave 4 stars because it was too slow. It took more than 500 shots to form the golden elixir [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Very good, struggling, low-level people,

The logic is clear, unlike some people who make a breakthrough and introduce the Qi into the body in an understatement.

Good! The content is wonderful, the plot is rich, the description is detailed and very interesting. The author, please come on, ha, but don't get drunk.

I've seen Chapter 93 and it's very good so far, especially the fact that there is no female protagonist and no ambiguity. Except for being a little pretentious in the early stage, there is nothing wrong with it. I hope it can be consistent.

Has there been a change of character at the end? Two words and one comma. It makes me so uncomfortable when I listen to the book.

If such a sect does not leave in the later stage, it will breed inner demons.

I have been a bookworm for ten years, and I think it is very good to read. Most of the novels nowadays are about brainless upgrades and invincibility at the same level. This book can tell the story in a eloquent way. It tells the story of the author's gradual cultivation, hoping that he will not become brainless and invincible in the future.

Slow-heating type, small opportunities are good, logic is reasonable...

The writing is very good, and the warmth and warmth of the world, and the difficulties of being immortal are written very realistically. Only in this way can it give people positive energy and make it comfortable and real.

It's a good book that describes the difficulty of crawling with poor qualifications. The writing is close to reality and is not exaggerated. It is more beautiful than cool writing.