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The writing is very good. I also like the subject matter. The resistance to the system can be said to be the highlight. As for the female protagonist, I hope that the male protagonist only likes one and does not have too many ambiguous links with other female protagonists. Of course, normal communication is necessary. Also, I hope that all female characters will not have "feelings between men and women" towards the male protagonist. It would be good to have some pure friendship. The above are purely personal opinions

Do a task and give it to yourself, although it feels a bit shameless to give yourself five stars. This is my first completed novel, and I had only one idea at the beginning. The male protagonist did not listen to the system's orders and let the female protagonist go, and the ending of the world changed as a result. Then I picked up my pen and started writing... Kavin got stuck many times, and he was thinking about how to make the plot more reasonable every day. The plot at the beginning was too rushed and the heroine was not well portrayed, so he tried his best to make up for it later. Overall, no matter what others think, this book has a special meaning to me.

It's very interesting. I've read more than 100 of your pictures in one go. What can I say? I'm looking forward to having a single female protagonist, okay? Don't be a single heroine. I was really shocked when I read what you wrote earlier about Fina liking something. It's okay, but it's not love. But next time, don't do it again. It's really pretty. Anyway, this novel has a good concept and theme. I don't have much objectionable things so far. In the beginning, the protagonist did not kill Navina, but was almost killed by the heroine. This time, I actually think this is normal, because I have killed him probably many times in the game, and it is normal that I don't want to kill him now. The subsequent plot development is quite interesting. If you don't hear it, I will write it slowly in the afternoon, don't be anxious. Even if it's just one picture a day, it'll be ok if you've thought about the details. Don't write so many pictures. You have to do well with the details in two pages a day. Even if you want to write more, your details must be well drawn. Don't blindly pursue writing a lot. Anyway, it is very beautiful. Come on, you are one of the most wonderful novels I have read. Alas, after reading it, you have written too little. It is not satisfying at all. There are only more than 130 pictures. So few

The early writing was very good, and it can be seen that the author probably wanted to write a level-by-level adventure, and then bring the heroine who originally had a bad ending back to a good ending, but it felt that the ending was too hasty. It may be that the author was bored or the writing was a bit broken, but overall it was okay. It suits my taste quite well

If it's a harem story, it can go on forever. If you go through the original game plot and save other heroines, this world view can be written for a long time. But if it is a single female protagonist, if many, many female supporting characters are saved, and the male protagonist chooses Neville in the end, it will actually not please either party. The pure love party is not satisfied with the entanglement between the male protagonist and the female supporting character. Naturally, there is no need to say more about the harem party. But I didn't expect it to end abruptly after only saving two people. I think it's better to go through the plot slowly and let the male protagonist find the truth slowly. I felt something was wrong at the beginning. I only had three lives, but I ended up using two in the second level. If there were more than a dozen levels later, it wouldn't be a big deal. It ends in such a short time. There are not enough emotional scenes and not enough plot scenes. Whether it is a geek or a yandere, it does not show much, but overall it can be justified. There is no obvious poisonous point, but the shortness is the biggest poisonous point. Considering this is the author's debut novel, it's still acceptable. This novel obviously doesn't have an outline, otherwise it wouldn't be so short. In the future, when writing novels, I'll first focus on the framework and then the details, first the whole and then the parts. I hope the next novel will be better.

I promise the author five stars, Oh Beibei, holy water, please purify my heart, so the author writes quickly, the child is hungry [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]. Cough, I went crazy. . . . . . I'll comment later!

Good stuff, a yandere novel that you can read, but the [Cthulhu] element in it only borrows from the monster image and part of the settings, and can only be regarded as a less important "flavoring".

Although the writing is still lacking in some small areas, overall The pacing is okay and the plot is interesting. The character traits are also very distinct. The setting is also very interesting, the system conspiracy theory. Overall, it's not very brainless, and it's still a bit subtle in hiding things. I hope I can keep writing, and I hope Carl can clear the level as soon as possible and return to reality (preferably with a bunch of beauties from another world and some plug-ins and stuff haha) Come on

I didn't like Yandere novels at first, but Navier came in with the intention of trying it out after seeing the cover picture. After reading it, I was surprised by how sweet it was. It's very good. The Yandere style is just right, and there is no annoying feeling. The system is the boss setting that makes people shine. It also allows the full text to perfectly avoid the common points of most novels in the bookstore. It also focuses on the plot development and the emotional line of the characters without rambling. Highly recommended! @Amano Kuriko The writing is very good, and the character portrayal is just right. (Already sent as a gift [plus one on the bookshelf] [top post] [bird food masterpiece] [send heart]

After reading the latest chapter, apart from some language errors, I think it is a good book. Keep up the good work. Now I can't see the error, it's okay😋

The rhythm is not that fast, but the lyricism is very strong Calmly telling a story, a dream, I listened quietly under the starry sky, listening to the passage of time and the flow of adventure in another world

It should be a single female protagonist, with a pure love story?

It's very good, but I felt empty after reading it. When it was finished, I just missed it [crying]. After finishing it, I still hope that Neville and Fina can go to earth and live with Karl. If possible, can the author make a cameo in the new book? It's the ending where the male and female protagonists come to Earth to make dumplings together [crying]

This is the second book I have read in full. I really like it, but I still think like most people, the ending is a bit sloppy (to put it bluntly, it's not enough to read) [crying][crying][crying]

As a newcomer, the author's debut novel is very exciting. It has many female protagonists, but it is actually a pure love story. Basically, the pitfalls can be filled, and there will be new works soon, so you can still read them. (See now in one breath, let me rest for a while) 3:52 midnight

The rhythm is well controlled, and the weirdness of Cthulhu is also very interesting. Come on, the author.

The writing is very good, no regrets, no bad ending. Except for being a little short, everything else can be given full marks.

@Amano Kuriko The protagonist lives forever, and the heroines go home (the home on earth) [smile][smile][smile]

Different Luo Wei [laughing][laughing]

In fact, as long as you get through the previous poisonous points, this book is quite good.

Keep it up, it's a bit to your liking, but I still don't know if it's hg, or not, forget it, the comment section saying hg is not pure love is really Jian Zhongqu's unique theory.

It looks pretty good, and I finally found a book that suits my taste.

Although I don't know why I chose the bottom, I definitely won't regret it after watching it. The subject matter is niche but absolutely exquisite [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

Do you know why the rating is low? Maybe the update is a little slow, but I watched it pretty well anyway.

Overall, it's good, but neither the male nor female protagonist has a sound mouth. They always think that they can solve the problem by themselves. They hide it from time to time and accept it. [Smile][smile][smile]

A very healthy book. After seeing Fina, I thought it would be a harem story, but luckily it turned out to be a single female protagonist. Later, I thought that there was a long multi-Sunday rescue plot. It was not until Liliana returned to Earth that the protagonist realized that it ended not long after. Finally, celebrate the ending and the JP realization of the extra!

You can say it's to my liking [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Not bad, I can watch it The article lacks the reflection of the social background, specific world view and other material world. At the same time, there is a lack of reactions and speech from others other than the main and secondary characters. Zeng Tiannuo's description of small details could be better

Okay, okay, I'm going to die again (laughed angrily)

Fortunately [laughing], I'll give it five stars if it looks good later.