Sequence: A Primordial True God Has Infiltrated the Believers

This is Ajiu! Five stars for encouragement. The theme sequence is quite novel, and the starting point and protagonist's character are also very good. The writing can only be said to be okay, the plot is good, but the pace is a bit slow and not that exciting and brain-burning. The beginning is a bit mediocre and the plot is not very compact. Some places are not explained in detail enough. Hope it can be improved in the future! There were a little less scenes for the protagonist, but I quite liked the part where I saw the gods talking, it was a little less serious and a little more funny. The protagonist's abilities are really great! Then this article gave me the feeling of a light-hearted article + a complaint??? It feels weird... "There is a fixed resource point outside Stan City, and there is an invitation from the gods inside the city. Moreover, the deputy city owner is missing, and the chief justice of the law enforcement court is dead." One person wears an emperor's crown and sits lazily on a gold dragon chair. The man supported his chin with one hand, lowered his head slightly and looked down. The mighty power of the gods impacted everything. Everything comes into being and a new era is about to begin... It's good to get through the first part, but the author's writing level has obviously improved in the later part, the plot is better, and the characters are more complete.

It's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, the author has a good idea, and it has an outline at first glance, and there are also some small foreshadowings. When will the protagonist be able to become a believer in another god? The plot of Golden Township is a bit heavy. Is the author planning to use up all the scenes in Golden Township at once?

On the whole, it's okay. Except for pretending to be a void, it's a bit unclear. It's not like a visionary who can turn fiction into reality. The protagonist himself has only a little knowledge of the gods. He can't get any benefits from pretending to be a void, but it's still worth recommending.

Why is the rating so low?

Okay, it's just that the Taichu Path is a bit more powerful... (Of course, not referring to the Taichu God) [sneaky laugh]

Come on, write it. It's very good, but it's not good enough.

The ideas are novel and unique, and the perspectives are divergent.

Ask the author not to run away

I think it's very good, so you... Author, please, please don't stop updating.

Don't stop, author, keep writing