Sect: Start from a Taoist Temple

It is different from other Gouyouliu or other immortal cultivation novels of Long Aotian style. It is also a cultivation novel, but it is different from other themes. The storyline is coherent and the characterization is not bad. Let's start with this.

Yes, but it would be better if more realistic Taoism and related content are integrated, such as transmission, ordination, and talismans, to form the own characteristics of this world. I would like to give you a suggestion. When you visit the Li family, you can say that you are a branch of a large sect. You have to go to the sect every few years to report on your work. If you don't go, you will find out the reason. In this way, you can arouse the fear of the Li family.

The plot is pretty good, the character setting is okay, but the details need to be improved. For example, the protagonist gets opportunities too easily, especially when killing the Liu family monks; in addition, the characters' emotions are too intense, giving people the feeling of using too much force; the protagonist is constantly being targeted, and the way he spends his time is very stiff and too deliberate. But overall, the novel is quite readable. I hope these issues can be taken into consideration and improved in the future [Like][Like][Like]

It looks good so far, the characters have distinct personalities, and there are shadows of traditional fantasy novels. The sect is developing, and everyone is contributing. It is still the little Karami in the Qi refining period, but there are too few. More updates.

A great book that cannot be buried. But I also want to give a little bit of my own opinions: 1. In addition to the necessary plot advancement to reduce the internal fighting among the human race, we can develop outward. After all, there is still a vast world waiting for the protagonist to explore. 2. Concisely describe the emotional aspects of the protagonist (it seems that this book is mainly about career, there are too many descriptions, it is a bit out of the ordinary, you can become a Taoist companion) 3. The development of Dharma lineage can be regarded as the main development after returning from the coast and becoming the golden elixir (gathering food widely and slowly becoming king). I am very happy to see the development of many Taoist temples in the subjective world. 4. Reduce the description of the protagonist as a dog. In fact, I know that I believe that more people know it, but the description can be simplified. In the early stage, it was indeed a bit frustrating. Best, I hope the author has good results with this book, and I will add more and more The weather is turbulent, but my sun is prosperous I wish all my Taoist friends peace and success, and everything goes well

The writing style of this book is very fluent. It does not rely on settings and imagination, but it is really comfortable and smooth to read. I suspect that the author has a vest, so I will give it five stars for the time being (I think this book is no less than Tomato's other fairy tale, Xuan Jing Gao Hang)

Liangcao is well written. The only problem is the plot. The protagonist is constantly being targeted, which is a bit deliberate. The protagonist is tired, the reader is tired from reading, and there is little leisure time.

Update quickly to see those upgrades are too fast and too many, and then suddenly turn around and look at this kind of fighting life and death because of a small level, it is quite good

The author's writing style is really good, and the writing is flesh-and-blood!

It's really good-looking, I recommend it to everyone, but the quantity is small. Still have to fatten up. People passing by came to cheer. Don't ask for such a good work, it's too bad.

Author, please don't stop updating, I beg you, I still want to see the protagonist and his junior sister together [blowing kiss]

The writing style is good, the language style is more ancient, and the diction is appropriate. It can be seen that the author is not an ordinary person, but may be a Taoist priest with an orderly inheritance. The writing is smooth and the description is detailed, making it a rare masterpiece. It's been a long time since I've seen a work with this style of writing. The last time it was a work like Shushan Xia Xia Zhuan.

The writing is very good. The daily communication and conversation are very interesting. I have no resistance to these daily things. The writing is very natural and not embarrassing. The line of recruiting disciples to revitalize the sect is also very interesting. The main thing is that there is no big golden finger. It is really beautiful. Come on, the author is great.

Nothing bad so far, interesting to watch

As the introduction says, it's really beautiful.

The writing is quite comfortable, and the plot is relatively smooth. If this is the first book, then the author has great potential. Xiongqi

The only pity is that I didn't learn any of the pig's feet in cultivating immortality. You don't need to learn other things, but formations must be learned. They have already established sects, and formations are the foundation for a life.

Somewhat similar to Zhu Xian's potential, the text is solid, the concept is light, and the logic is rigorous. The content has a more secular flavor and is suitable for ordinary people to read. It is more humane and full of positive energy!

It seems pretty good so far, but the fact that the pig's feet are time travelers is a bit redundant and has no special significance.

Good book. It's what I want.

You have the style of a leader, come on

Leave a mark as you pass by

This looks like a normal person cultivating immortality

Come on! Keep it up, don't turn on plug-ins anymore, it's enough, it's not small anymore!

Good book, not bad, but the initial rating is a bit low

Well written, I think it is a book as good as a masterpiece

It's exciting and good-looking, and the protagonist holds back for future development.

A very good classical fairy tale, with nuanced characterization and an unconventional plot.

An excellent work, the characters are well depicted and the plot is advanced. Some Taoist details are very rigorous. It is not a novice and is worth following up.

It should be rated above 9 points, the fighting power is not broken, one step at a time is suitable for slow people to read, if you want to read a refreshing article, it is not recommended to come in and read it.