In the Beginning, the Ancestor of the Golden Elixir Was Called to Break Off the Engagement?

It looks good and abandons the traditional model of having an invincible system. The protagonist of this novel is not invincible even if he has the system. He cannot repair the injury of the golden elixir at the beginning, and it cannot help much. He also asks the family disciple teacher in the Qi training period for help. It can be said that he has become stronger step by step even if he has the system.

So far, it's very interesting, but the only fear is that the author will run away, and there are also people who have made some unflattering comments, but what I want to say is They all said it was a family book about cultivating immortals! Stop asking why Opportunity requires supporting roles and not the main character. You have the main character, so you might as well go watch Fighting to Break the Sphere! What kind of family cultivating fairy tales are you reading? Support the author T^T

It's quite interesting. I feel like this protagonist is like a modern time travel protagonist, and he starts with golden elixirs, unlike those novels that start with Qi training. I don't know, the golden elixir will be revealed in a few hundred chapters. Who will see when the time comes? The family system will be awakened later. And the family has a protagonist. There is a shortage of books. It's interesting to watch. After all, the starting point is high. Looks interesting

It's very beautiful, everyone should come and see it. In the early stage, it was a hodgepodge, which was very average, but now that the protagonist Jin Dan is in the middle stage, it is obvious that the author wants to write something of his own, and the wording and description are obviously much better than before.

It's okay. I can read it. The main thing is that this setting can start. The ancestor of Jindan is not like those mortals. There is a B-block at the beginning. Although the ancestor is disabled, I hope the author can quickly restore the protagonist to his peak state. Overall, although there is poison, the book is still readable. Finally, I hope the author will work hard and update it. Don't stop updating the eunuch or it is unfinished. There are still too few and it is not enough to read.

The story of the Crooked Dragon King?

Very special look and feel, not enough key details, quite fresh

It'll be fine later

It's pretty good, but the rating is a bit low.

It's pretty good. Although it's a group portrait, I still wish the protagonist would appear more often.

Many people were dissuaded after reading the first ten chapters [laughs] In fact, it is a blend of various themes [laughs] The writing is not bad, at least it will be no problem if it is rated above 8 points.

Okay, give it a push.

Very good book

There is something, and the plot is not bad

Not bad, ok, me

Not bad, the plot is not bad.

I feel like the spell name could be a little nicer.

Personally, I feel pretty good. Please support me.

In fact, there is no need for the author to piece together the plot of Xiao Yan's book. It would be more interesting to make it into an independent family.

I like it very much, but can it be updated faster and the author speed up the update? Otherwise, I can only invite you to our Imperial Banner.

When did you show Mr. Huo the finger of the transformed god?

Well written and very attractive

It's great to watch. It's a great world of immortality. If you have a dream, come and see!

It's 5.4 When you click in, and it's 5.5 After reading it. In this case, I also gave it 5 stars [I learned it]

It's very interesting, but I wish the main character could be described more

Very good, no pitfalls

Very nice and very interesting

You can take a look, the logic is online

It's okay, you can take a look

Really impressed! All the areas have the aura of the protagonist!