This is a long, slow-burning novel with a slow pace in the early stages, so please don't read if you mind.
"Notice, it has been detected that the character will die within twenty-four hours. The timer starts now, beep, beep, beep..."
As the timer sounded, Dongnanxi stared silently at the corpse in front of him.
Traveling to the southeast and west of the late Northern Song Dynasty, there is a corpse in front of me, and the countdown to death is ringing in my head.
At this moment, his system told him that his mission was to ascend the throne...
Reader comments
Hello everyone, this is Caiyi Miao, a fledgling online writer.
I really wanted to tell you a story about love and redemption, so I came up with this work.
The pace of the first dozen chapters is a bit slow. This is my mistake. I didn't plan it well when I first organized the chapters. Therefore, each of the first dozen chapters has more than 3,000 words, which is a bit bloated. But the pace will speed up in the future, and it will be more in line with current regular online reading habits. After all, I not only want to tell you a story, I also want you to enjoy listening to it.
It is my first time to post a long article on Tomato, so I am a little nervous, but please rest assured that I have enough manuscripts, will never be updated, and will never be unfinished.
Thank you for liking my story.
Now that I have read the newly updated chapter, I feel like I have found a treasure. It is really scary for newcomers.
The writing style is delicate and vivid, and the emotions are rich and full. It is really a breath of fresh air in this era when male videos are mostly in vernacular. The plot is not sloppy, it can be seen that it is telling a story seriously, which is great. The male protagonist's character is unexpectedly like a normal person, which is rare and valuable. Without those hard-to-understand and transcendent characters, it is easier to accept.
The rhythm at the end of each chapter is very accurate. It is best for the author to keep updating what he says. I am looking forward to seeing the author saying that the pace will be faster later on.
That's it for now, come on!
It's so beautiful, I can't get enough of it [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
Overall, it is a good book. The writing style is fresh and smooth, and the expressions are very clear, giving people a sense of immersion. The content of the chapters is also very story-telling. Compared with ordinary time-travel articles that come with powerful cheats, this article creates time-travel from the perspective of an ordinary person and his mobile phone. The entry point is very novel, and it is also very interesting. In short, it looks very interesting, especially the section where the protagonist complains in his head. However, if the article can add some special foreshadowing writing techniques, the article may be more exciting. For example (the following example contains spoilers, please read with caution.) The part about Xiao Yu's assassination may allow the male protagonist or his cronies to meet the unnatural Xiao Yu in advance. Then the male protagonist can identify the culprit in a brainstorm and wait to catch him. In short, despite its flaws, this book is indeed a rare book.
I was originally searching for ghost stories in the system, so I clicked on it. It was my first time reading a time-travel theme on Tomato. I didn't expect it to be so addictive that I couldn't stop.
Writing style: 5 stars. The wording is rigorous and the sentences are solid. It can be seen that the author has good basic skills.
Character: 5 stars. The character of the male protagonist is very close to a normal person. He is not the Riddler but also pretends to be arrogant. It is really rare.
Rhythm: 4.5 Stars. Personally, I feel that the early tempo is a bit slow. It would be better if it could be more compact.
Plot: 5 stars. The twists in the latest chapters are very exciting and not brainless.
I don't know if it's just me, but when I read it, I always felt that the male protagonist has a strong sense of Fan Xian's vision. He is not a great person, but he has his own principles in doing things, and his personality is also very lovable. He is a rare down-to-earth male protagonist in male videos, but I always feel that he will become darker in the future.
Although I don't know how it will develop in the future, I hope that I can maintain the current level, don't follow Long Aotian's old routine of traditional time travel novels, and maintain my own unique style.
Finally, I will always like Concubine Wei [salute][salute][salute]
What a great treasure. I guarantee five stars with my reading of more than 600 books. [Crying] This book is so damn good-looking. The pace is moderate and the writing is humorous. Sometimes people can't help but laugh, and sometimes they feel scared. The characters of the current protagonists, Wei Guifei, Huizong, and Shen Erqian are all very three-dimensional. There is good and evil, and the protagonist walks on thin ice step by step from being wary to trusting.
Originally, I didn't like reading these new books that were just released, but now I finally understand why the new books have such five-star reviews. I was scared to death when I saw only 4 people urged me to update them. Don't stop reading them. I highly recommend reading them!
Come and read this book, you can enjoy reading novels and learn history at the same time. Moreover, there is not a single wrong sentence or typo in the updated chapter. I feel that the author's basic writing skills must be very solid! There is no golden finger for ordinary people to travel through time. They all rely on human connections and sophistication. This is the spiritual awakening that we ordinary people should watch! Treasure article, I rushed to the sisters first!
Five stars actually feel like it should be four stars, but considering the new author, I can't be too picky. The writing style is also okay. It seems that it is an older reader. It is better to have a system to pave the way and use modernization. If it can be more ancient, it will be more popular, but modernization can naturally lead to the change of Wei Guifei. Anyway, it is really good, come on, come on, few people who read it hope not to stop updating [crying] [crying] [crying]
The story is interesting, good, and worth following!
Hello everyone, this is Caiyi Miao, a fledgling online writer. I really wanted to tell you a story about love and redemption, so I came up with this work. The pace of the first dozen chapters is a bit slow. This is my mistake. I didn't plan it well when I first organized the chapters. Therefore, each of the first dozen chapters has more than 3,000 words, which is a bit bloated. But the pace will speed up in the future, and it will be more in line with current regular online reading habits. After all, I not only want to tell you a story, I also want you to enjoy listening to it. It is my first time to post a long article on Tomato, so I am a little nervous, but please rest assured that I have enough manuscripts, will never be updated, and will never be unfinished. Thank you for liking my story.
Now that I have read the newly updated chapter, I feel like I have found a treasure. It is really scary for newcomers. The writing style is delicate and vivid, and the emotions are rich and full. It is really a breath of fresh air in this era when male videos are mostly in vernacular. The plot is not sloppy, it can be seen that it is telling a story seriously, which is great. The male protagonist's character is unexpectedly like a normal person, which is rare and valuable. Without those hard-to-understand and transcendent characters, it is easier to accept. The rhythm at the end of each chapter is very accurate. It is best for the author to keep updating what he says. I am looking forward to seeing the author saying that the pace will be faster later on. That's it for now, come on! It's so beautiful, I can't get enough of it [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
Overall, it is a good book. The writing style is fresh and smooth, and the expressions are very clear, giving people a sense of immersion. The content of the chapters is also very story-telling. Compared with ordinary time-travel articles that come with powerful cheats, this article creates time-travel from the perspective of an ordinary person and his mobile phone. The entry point is very novel, and it is also very interesting. In short, it looks very interesting, especially the section where the protagonist complains in his head. However, if the article can add some special foreshadowing writing techniques, the article may be more exciting. For example (the following example contains spoilers, please read with caution.) The part about Xiao Yu's assassination may allow the male protagonist or his cronies to meet the unnatural Xiao Yu in advance. Then the male protagonist can identify the culprit in a brainstorm and wait to catch him. In short, despite its flaws, this book is indeed a rare book.
I was originally searching for ghost stories in the system, so I clicked on it. It was my first time reading a time-travel theme on Tomato. I didn't expect it to be so addictive that I couldn't stop. Writing style: 5 stars. The wording is rigorous and the sentences are solid. It can be seen that the author has good basic skills. Character: 5 stars. The character of the male protagonist is very close to a normal person. He is not the Riddler but also pretends to be arrogant. It is really rare. Rhythm: 4.5 Stars. Personally, I feel that the early tempo is a bit slow. It would be better if it could be more compact. Plot: 5 stars. The twists in the latest chapters are very exciting and not brainless. I don't know if it's just me, but when I read it, I always felt that the male protagonist has a strong sense of Fan Xian's vision. He is not a great person, but he has his own principles in doing things, and his personality is also very lovable. He is a rare down-to-earth male protagonist in male videos, but I always feel that he will become darker in the future. Although I don't know how it will develop in the future, I hope that I can maintain the current level, don't follow Long Aotian's old routine of traditional time travel novels, and maintain my own unique style. Finally, I will always like Concubine Wei [salute][salute][salute]
What a great treasure. I guarantee five stars with my reading of more than 600 books. [Crying] This book is so damn good-looking. The pace is moderate and the writing is humorous. Sometimes people can't help but laugh, and sometimes they feel scared. The characters of the current protagonists, Wei Guifei, Huizong, and Shen Erqian are all very three-dimensional. There is good and evil, and the protagonist walks on thin ice step by step from being wary to trusting. Originally, I didn't like reading these new books that were just released, but now I finally understand why the new books have such five-star reviews. I was scared to death when I saw only 4 people urged me to update them. Don't stop reading them. I highly recommend reading them!
Come and read this book, you can enjoy reading novels and learn history at the same time. Moreover, there is not a single wrong sentence or typo in the updated chapter. I feel that the author's basic writing skills must be very solid! There is no golden finger for ordinary people to travel through time. They all rely on human connections and sophistication. This is the spiritual awakening that we ordinary people should watch! Treasure article, I rushed to the sisters first!
Five stars actually feel like it should be four stars, but considering the new author, I can't be too picky. The writing style is also okay. It seems that it is an older reader. It is better to have a system to pave the way and use modernization. If it can be more ancient, it will be more popular, but modernization can naturally lead to the change of Wei Guifei. Anyway, it is really good, come on, come on, few people who read it hope not to stop updating [crying] [crying] [crying]
The story is interesting, good, and worth following!
It's pretty and interesting.