Quick Transmigration: Playing the Ex in a New-Top Novel

Overall, it's about the same. After reading the first small world, it's pretty good. Chapter 20 is over. It settled down in the first hour, the ups and downs were not particularly big, and there was no sense of CP. And I don't know why, I might just fall in love with it. The first small world cp, the emotional line may not be too heavy and ranked behind the others, so it may not be so outstanding. The pace is very fast, but because the pace is too fast, it is over without much going on. When I look back, I find that the overall plot is not special. How should I put it, it is just ups and downs. Very gentle

The writing is very good and very skillful. There are no hard bugs in the plot. It is very friendly to the brain and the story line develops very smoothly. Do you understand? There are not many ups and downs, but it looks very reassuring.

It's okay. It's a futile main story. It's very suitable for people like me who like to watch love in progress and show affection in front of supporting characters. I feel that the ending is a bit rushed but there is a bit of foreshadowing. Although it is bl, it can be seen that the author intentionally wrote most of the superiors as women. Regarding the previously hotly debated question of whether looking at men is a backstab for feminism, I think the author consciously wants to coexist. Although it may be a bit immature, I think this is a good start.

I like digging for treasures, especially this kind of book that not many people have read yet. My taste is pretty good, and the author's writing is good. It's not easy to find such a book in Tomato's main area that the protagonist can read. If you work hard, author, and keep updating, at least tens of thousands of people will watch it. Come on!!! (How do you know I have almost 20,000 likes in total)

The overall writing is pretty good, the plot is smooth and the writing is good. It's just that the emotional scenes are a bit simplistic, but overall it's still very attractive. Keep up the good work, author, and look forward to future developments! 😘

It's very interesting, and it's an immersive role, but one thing needs to be made clear. This is not a unit story. If you can't stand the protagonist having multiple wives, you probably won't be able to watch it. But I think it's okay. After all, when you are with someone, you are really single-minded.

This is not the traditional kind of story that insists on being bloody and slap-in-the-face. Most of it is about relatively ordinary daily life, that is, the daily love life of a young couple. I just hope that the author can control the comments. When I read a book, I prefer to read the comments. Seeing some people who don't like this kind of writing posting bad comments really affects the viewing experience [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I think it's pretty good. I just clicked on this book with the intention of passing the time. Unexpectedly, this book broke my initial expectations. I thought this book would be no different from what I had seen before. Maybe it was sweet, maybe sadistic, and too boring. But if I were to describe this book, it would be like plain water. Regardless of whether the protagonist or other characters are doing "their own things", everyone is very sensible. I thought it would be pure love, but in fact the proportion of love is not large, it can even be said to be small, no, it should be said to be "bland". The protagonist and other characters have their own things, which is bland, making me feel, maybe, a little less love❤️. Whenever I feel like this, the author's writing seems to take me out of the "vulgar script", which is unexpected and expected. Just - very witty, just like boiled water. But in fact, if you want to read about passionate and deep love, then this book is obviously not suitable.

There are no obvious flaws (just my personal opinion, I am an omnivore), and the plot and emotions are pretty good, but I can tell it is a new author so I won't be too picky.

It's a pretty good book. The first short story may be a bit unclear, but fortunately, there's no big problem. The subsequent short stories are also quite interesting. The interaction between CP is quite natural. There may be some issues with the setting. I feel that the relationship between the original owner, protagonist, and CP cannot be studied in detail. If you are really confused, just treat it as another self in a parallel world. Then, it should be the author's writing. The characters of CPs in each world are actually similar. Let's just look at them in slices. The story is quite interesting. Most of the small worlds are very fast and not laggy. It's good.