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Very good, very passionate, and very youthful. I saw a lot of small volleyball articles in 🍅 that contain a lot of ambiguous CP descriptions with unclear meanings, but I think the characters described in small volleyball are very pure, rich in friendship, competitive spirit, passion, competition, caring, kindness, unwillingness to admit defeat, touching, glory and growth. Rich, I feel that competing with each other, caring for each other, and taking care of each other are more suitable for the hot-blooded group of small volleyball. Compared with the ambiguous CP, it is more suitable for the competitive CP. Every time I see ambiguous CP appear in the small volleyball fan fiction, I feel that the passion, youth, and friendship have changed, and it feels weird. (Personal opinion, if you disagree, just pretend you didn't see it) (I rarely post comments, please forgive me for inappropriate wording) The characters of the two brothers described by the author are somewhat complementary. The King of Juan system is very well arranged, allowing them to compete, take care of each other, and grow together. The writing is very good, very passionate and youthful.

When I first read the introduction, I thought it was some kind of brotherly combination that never fell in love but only killed each other, with a "my stupid brother, you can never surpass me" style of painting, but it turned out to be a great brotherly love! Sorry, I am narrow-minded👉👈 But the content is really good to watch. I think the rhythm is quite compact. The proportion of daily activities is less than expected. However, it is very happy to watch everyone gradually grow up in the competition in a compact competition, and the system scenes mentioned are not many. I personally like this kind of type. The protagonist is not a pure cheater. It is really gratifying and gratifying for those who have worked hard since childhood to watch it step by step and down to earth🥹! Nice!

The descriptions are very detailed, some details are particularly well written, a few balls are written with great feeling, and some small characters are even well described. It already feels like a small volleyball game. But I hope to add more famous scenes of the younger brother, but sometimes I can understand the author. After all, the protagonist is the older brother, but emotionally he still wants to add the younger brother's plot. Although I have watched Little Volleyball several times, I have never understood it carefully. I think some comment sections will say that the author has some flaws and the plot is not consistent. However, this is rare, and the general writing is relatively consistent. Moreover, readers who raise such opinions can already show that they hope that the work will get better and better. If it is not correct, it also expresses the author's strength. I personally think that the flaw in this book is mainly that the protagonist system will evaluate some numerical values ​​​​of each player's strength and other qualities. This cannot be said to be bad, and the author writes the player values ​​based on what can be said to be official data, but I still feel that it is a bit uncomfortable to judge the level based on data. But overall, the plot of the numerical values ​​in this article is acceptable. It can be said that the flaws do not cover up the flaws. One of the plots that I admire the most about the author is that when the protagonist first integrates into the team, there is an integration process. This detail is particularly good. Whether it is the actual integration or the process of alternating aces, it makes people feel a sense of reality, and it feels like this character has a sense of flesh and blood. Come on, Dad, I really like this article you wrote. I hope you don't find it verbose. These are my true feelings. Finally, thank you to the author for your hard work. I will continue to pursue Yuzhen's story. I just took another look at the comments and my statement was slightly wrong. I have watched the volleyball anime several times, and I generally know the direction of the manga, but I don't know much about volleyball knowledge. The author always includes volleyball knowledge when writing games. Some readers will point out the mistakes in the volleyball knowledge in the author's games. Of course, I don't know if I am wrong, but for someone like me who doesn't know the rules of volleyball very well, it doesn't affect the viewing experience at all.

(I don't speak very well personally and have no emotional intelligence. Please don't be sarcastic. I have been following this book for a long time. It can be said that I read a hundred chapters. After watching so many volleyball fandoms, I feel that it is rare to see the plot be so coherent, and the protagonist is powerful without forgetting the original protagonist. When I first read the first episode, I thought that like other fans, I would pay attention to the power of my original characters and forget about the original protagonist. But the author did not follow his own writing and story, and wrote a richer chapter in their originally rich life. Later, when I saw their volleyball process, the details of each person's unwillingness, hard work, and efforts behind the scenes were a richer part of their original lives. Some of them may not be shown in their stories, but their sweat on the court and the games they won are all steps forward for their efforts. I really like this story. It can be said that I have been reading fanfics for so long. From other platforms to this platform, I have rarely seen the competition written in such detail and well. I hope the author can keep updating until the end of their story

Nice! Love watching! The rare Gemini stars are completely different from Gemini 🦊. The protagonist brothers have really put in a lot of effort for volleyball. They are not invincible by relying on golden fingers. They are both talented and talented. Their interpersonal relationships and teamwork are very detailed. Very loving, you won't lose money if you invest♡(*´∀｀*)(*´∀｀*)♡

It's very, very beautiful [Love] [Love] [Love] This book made me read it from day to night, from the first to the last picture. I lost the other account and changed to another account to continue reading! I haven't read the original work, but I will read it specifically for this book (plus my friends' encouragement) The love all the readers have for the characters in it really makes me shed tears when I read it. The characters are very good and the readers are very good. [Love] The atmosphere in the comments of this book is also very good, no one quarrels [Sending Hearts] (I commented when I read the fandom in my own circle) The discussion is so noisy that I have never dared to read the comments. This book really healed me [almost crying] [love] [love]) Seeing the readers' discussions really makes me feel soft [sending my heart] [sending my heart] Most of the authors, including the authors, are very good-natured people. Let's talk about the work itself. The author's writing style is really good, the rhythm of the plot is well grasped, and the character creation is also very good, which made me realize the personality charm of every character in it. The two babies, Yuji and Youzhen, are also very cute! And generally the protagonists in fan fiction are a bit flat, but Yuji's portrayal really shows the author's intention, he is a full-bodied character [Love] Come on! I will follow you all my life!

Just this cute Ji Ze brother cb Xiang Shuang! ! ! The protagonist's volleyball ability is developed step by step by himself. Although there is a system, it can only look at the numerical values. It has no other use at all and can be ignored. It can be seen from many details that Xiao You really cares about You Ji. It is a group portrait. The author not only highlights the strength of the protagonist, but also makes the entire Qingcheng volleyball club improve. Instead of letting everyone in the original work highlight the strength of the protagonist like a background panel, there is a feeling that everyone is working together for victory [crying] [crying] [crying]

It is a really beautiful book. The author's writing style is very good, the writing is very planned and the plot arrangement is also very good! It's very engaging and makes people want to keep reading! ! ! Sometimes it touches me very much. The friendship and brotherhood between them are very good. Yuzhen Youji is so handsome [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's really to my liking. Nowadays, there are a lot of passionate fanfics in anime that are written as love. I don't understand. We are obviously playing partners, team members, and comrades together since childhood. (Don't blame me, I don't fantasize about Oikawa Toru as my boyfriend. I really like him. The feeling on the court) shouldn't it be a friendship that exudes the flavor of youth? The author will update it soon. I really want to see Oikawa Tooru and his teammates playing volleyball. Although Oikawa Tooru will eventually go to the world, I still want to see more of him when he was a high school boy playing volleyball with high spirits✊✊✊

It looks good, looks good, looks good. One of the things I like very much is that the protagonist's abilities are not brought about by the system or born with talents that are not very good at practice, but are developed by the protagonist bit by bit every day. The system serves more of an auxiliary function, and hard work will lead to rewards. The interaction between the protagonist and his twin brother is also super cute! The rough and tumble is very loving and fun. The highlights of the characters in the original anime have not been obscured, they all have their own shining points! Moreover, this book is the only one among the many volleyball youth fanfics I have read. The author will write down the positions of both sides before each game. I have also checked and understood some of the rules of volleyball moves. It can be seen that the author is really attentive. This is really impressive! It's great! In short, my opinion is that it looks good and must be pursued!

Very good! I never thought I could give a rating! That must be a five-star review! (σ≧︎▽︎≦︎)σ.

The characters of Yuma Yukichi are becoming more and more full-fledged. From the king of scrolls who just got fun through involution and the two teenagers who were shadowed by school violence, they gradually turned into two twins who are affectionate, powerful and fragile. They are extremely delicious [admiration]. The characters are as vivid as if they came out of a book, or they are full of vitality like real characters. But teacher, do you still remember our system? And can you write more igniting scenes to make us happy? Please teacher During the seventh brush, I suddenly thought of some things, such as some interactions between Yuzhen and Youji, which are similar to really letting Yuzhen let go, so that Youji can truly grow, and Yuzhen's scroll king system helps at critical moments, and the accidents that will occur during the game make Yuzhen completely mature. I am particularly looking forward to it. I want to see the author add or mention it a little bit.

It's super good-looking, it must look good.

It's super good-looking, and the characters in it are all very cute.

Well, I watched it using another account, so the duration was short. It's a very interesting and rare volleyball novel. It doesn't have too abrupt descriptions or embarrassing plots. Well, I don't like to describe too much about appearance, and there are also some overly ambiguous behaviors before we get together, so the whole story is very comfortable to read. There are no flashpoints. They are all really good brothers. Most of them are on the volleyball team and there are competitions. It is a very passionate sports show. The sports show is to burn the passion. But maybe the author didn't know what to write after the game (I can totally understand), so it was a bit confusing, but some sudden quarrels made up for it.' I like it. I recommend it to friends who like CB. Even if you haven't read the original work.

Oh my, why am I so good-looking? (Cross out this sentence) ... Ahem... The writing is good in a simple summary, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the details are appropriate. None of the characters are OOC! A very, very rare thing in fan fiction! ! ! ... Cough cough cough... The atmosphere is very similar to the original. The author's writing is very good, and it is middle-to-upper-level excellence that is rare in many fan fictions, even on Tomato. Tsubasa Yuma and Tsubasa Youki are two super, super, super cute babies [][][]with great contrast. I feel like there's something big going on behind the scenes. It seems like Xiao Youji's problem is the biggest, but it's actually Xiao Youzhen who has the big hidden danger [Thinking] Yuzhen and Youji are well integrated into the world view of Little Volleyball, the plot is natural and smooth, and the characters are well shaped from a little bit of description. They are all vivid individuals. In one word, they have a "feeling of living people", and there will be no situation where the characters in some fan fiction are thin and seem to be expressed for the sake of expression (in a nutshell, the character image is not stiff). The whole book is full of memorable points, such as Iwaken's position at the top of the food chain in the team; the contrast between Yukichi's aloofness and social fear; Yuuzhen's sometimes deep and deep attitude, and other times as lively and cheerful as Hinata Shoyo… The pace is moderate and doesn't feel too fast or too slow. The description of what happened, the description of the scene, the description of the action, etc. Are all detailed and appropriate, and they are explained clearly without making people feel long-winded. The overall evaluation is five stars. It's good to watch and I'll read and write more. (Some random thoughts: It feels like a very long plot line. The predicted situation of Xiao Yuzhen's problems being revealed is slowly being revealed, and there are quite a few original world views of Xiao Volleyball, so it will probably take some time to finish. I hope the author will not stop updating, it is a really, really good book [Love] [Love] [Love])

It's very nice and the descriptions are very detailed. It's one of the best volleyball fanfics so far. If you're short of books, you can read it. It's super nice. It's super nice. It's super nice. It's super nice. It's super nice. It's super nice. It's super nice. It's super nice. Super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking, super good-looking. The writing style is very calm, but super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice, super nice

The characters are portrayed so well, the interaction between the brother and the younger brother is very delicate, clear and logical [like][like][like]

I particularly like this one. . The character creation is very good, the characters are very three-dimensional, and the original protagonist is the center but does not steal the limelight of other characters. There is no Mary Sue plot where everyone revolves around the protagonist. The author also knows the personality of the original characters very well, and will also carefully write the plot of the original novel. In short, this book is particularly good-looking! ! !

This book is really eye-catching, highly recommended! ! ! It's been a long time since I've seen such a pure hot-blooded group portrait article, and I've read a lot of hot-blooded sports fanfics, but now everyone likes to write about emotional ambiguity, which lacks the pure feeling of hot-bloodedness, because there are not many authors writing fanfics now, and if the quality is not good, I will not be picky about it. I am short of books. I was really surprised to see this book. It is so pure and I like it so much. It is the feeling and the style I dream of! Moreover, the author also wrote very rich and good characters. I really like the cute contrast between the brothers. The descriptions of other characters are also very good. The writing is really great! ! I hope there will be more of this type! ! ! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] (I really have another choice for the CP article) [Crying]

It's so beautiful, it's the top one among all my volleyball fans (*^O^*)

The writing is very good. While it is close to the original work, it also adds its own thoughts. So far, I think the protagonist and Oikawa Toru are actually two very similar people. Their personalities are very similar, and they are not geniuses with absolute suppression. For example, Kageyama and the King, as well as the protagonist's younger brother and the protagonist, are all suppressed by another character. Oikawa's original work has never participated in a national competition, and the protagonist is an ace, but he is always remembered as the second setter brother, but they all bloomed their own flowers with their persistence and sweat.

It's a very good book. The protagonist is very strong, but not too exaggerated. Within the acceptable range, I actually recommend Inarizaki, so I was reluctant to read fanfics about other teams before, but this time I was really attracted. Fortunately, I didn't step on it. I found that Qingcheng is also a super cute and super good team. The author didn't step on it. I can feel the author's love for all the characters. Of course, the protagonist has not been wronged. Then the author has not updated for two days. I rarely try to finish the article. Many of the articles I liked before were trapped by ptsd, and then I became particularly sensitive. I felt that the author was not active in the comment area at the beginning, and then he was not so active in correcting typos and so on. Author, please don't be fooled. I really love Yuzhen Youji, and I'm really looking forward to the next plot. Dear author, we are behind you [crying] [blowing kiss]

This book is very in line with my personal taste, passionate yet funny. Many competitive anime fanfics have systems, and the golden finger is very open, but this often loses the flavor of passion. The reason why we like anime like "Volleyball Boy" is because the protagonist's hard work, optimism and positive energy have moved you and me, right? Even if you are knocked down, even if you fail, you will still love this sport. You will still stand up from thousands of failures and continue to work hard and sweat until you succeed. This fanfic is like this. The protagonist and the people around him all share a love for volleyball and work together for a common goal. Although there is a system, the system is more about informing readers of each person's ability value, and at the same time, it also encourages our little Yuzhen to work harder and become an excellent volleyball player. Overall, this novel is a fine product, with a reasonable setting, a passionate and youthful theme, and some laughs, making it very easy to read. It's really great [like] [like] [like] I hope the author can continue writing, come on [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

Good-looking, I feel sorry for Yuzhen, he is obviously very good and a genius, but he has always thought that he is not good enough due to the more talented Youji since he was a child, but in fact he is also a genius and a target in the eyes of others. I also feel very sorry for You Ji. He was bullied as a child, which caused a psychological shadow. I hope he can go out and have more friends in the future.

Don't interrupt, don't interrupt, don't interrupt, don't interrupt, don't interrupt, don't interrupt, don't interrupt, don't interrupt! ! ! It's really beautiful, big brother, please, please, don't stop updating, don't stop updating, don't stop updating, don't stop updating! ! ! There is no OOC in the character's mentality or anything else. How apt! ! ! Don't stop updating, don't stop updating, don't stop updating, don't stop updating, don't stop updating. I have read a lot of anime derivatives before, and they have stopped updating. It's too difficult. Please, don't stop updating, don't stop updating, don't stop updating, don't stop updating! ! ! It's really good-looking, really good-looking, really good-looking, really really really really really really really good-looking! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

This is my favorite of the Little Volleyball novels I have read in Tomato. The writing is not stiff and the plot is pretty good. The main character has an interesting personality. They are twins, and the protagonist "Yu Zhen" is the older brother. He has a system, but the system does not carry much weight. He is only mentioned a few times at the beginning and has no sense of existence. My younger brother is a very talented person and it feels really cute. When he saw the grinding, he was so scared that he thought it was caramel turned into essence, hahaha. Especially when you want to make friends with Momo, just like Momo, look down and look down, it's cute.

I like it very much, but I have always forgotten to rate it [crying] [crying]. Yuma Youji is a very good brother group, and they are the kind who are talented and hardworking. I like it very much. Although there is a system, the system presence is weak, almost nonexistent (in fact, I feel that the author may have forgotten that there is a system [laughing] [laughing]) Yuzhen does not rely solely on talent. Most of them rely on their own efforts. In the book, you can see Yuzhen's progress and growth. He has failures, but he also has successes. The characters are three-dimensional and full. Although he is not an aborigine, there is no difference because Yuzhen has completely integrated into the world. All the members have no cb and no ambiguous intentions. Everyone is a good baby [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

I like this kind of friendship-oriented book. I feel that other non-CP authors will secretly write some ambiguous deceptions. This book is really good and very friendly to people who are not into CP [crying][crying][crying] I don't know why I want to write about the bad taste of wearing women's clothing.

I read it on another mobile phone. This book is the best among fairy books. It is the best sports fanfic I have read so far! ! ! ! Totally not enough! ! ! When will the author release the 100th chapter and surprise everyone? ? ! ! More updates from the author! ! ! I have never seen such a beautiful article in my life, it's like watching a TV series! ! I really like Brother Jizeze! ! Very very beautiful! ! !