Master Is a High-Risk Industry

It feels really good, but I don't know if it's np. After all, I feel like each one is delicious. Master is really super gentle and [admiring] everyone's character is really good, not a thin stereotype. The setting is also very enjoyable, but I feel that the protagonist's presence is too low in the early stage, and then it becomes high later on. I feel that the protagonist's role is a bit too small. It is a group portrait and there is no clear protagonist. However, the introduction also mentions Xiao He as the protagonist. Even if the supporting role is described from the perspective of the protagonist, I will not feel that the supporting role overshadows the protagonist. However, a large part of the article has nothing to do with the protagonist. It's a bit heartbreaking for the protagonist. It would be better if it was marked first as a group portrait article.

It's pretty good-looking, but it has a few flaws. The first thing I discovered is that the difference between female videos and male videos is that female videos don't focus on the realm of cultivation. This doesn't count, I'm just mentioning it. The second one. I watched the snake encounter. A group of villagers, a group of ordinary people hacked to death a snake demon with thousands of years of cultivation. Even if he didn't resist, his scales couldn't be so fragile. How could he hack him to death? And can't we go to the nearby mountain to catch a few pigs? Then fly back and feed them? Logically speaking, it should be quite simple for him to fly around for thousands of years, and then his younger brother, let's call him younger brother. The price of the forbidden technique is just ten years of coma. It's also quite interesting.

At present, there are no poisonous points. It is an atypical fairy tale. However, I hope that the protagonist has more roles. Although some of this is a little bit of a share, another is a little bit of a bit, but I still hope that they are all he and live in harmony. I don't think much about it, but I think the background is quite big and the system is also weird. Let me give a five-star to encourage the author first.

Sad, the book is a good book and the writing is not bad, but why is there a deputy cp [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

So far, it's still good-looking overall, and the interaction between master and apprentice is also very warm. It's not the same as the traditional fairy tale novels. In fact, it's still rare to see this kind of fairy tale novel where the time traveler is not the protagonist, and the real victory or defeat is determined by strength.

Fortunately, it is a group portrait article, and it is not as shocking as some people say, but the protagonist may not be able to stand it. The number of appearances of the protagonist is indeed too few. The image is shaped by other people's perspectives and memories. There is a deputy CP (if you don't like it, you can avoid it). In terms of articles, the author is very innovative and thoughtful, the plot is novel and not boring, and his writing skills are good, but some places are a little inconsistent. If you are not very picky, this book is a good book worth reading.

It's good-looking, it's a group portrait + slightly funny + little knife (there are more stories about the apprentices, the master doesn't appear too much, the early stage is a bit like the perspective of the third junior sister), it contains a lot of time-travelers + modern words, I feel that the author is also happy, the junior sister's speech is a bit like Lu Yan's complaints. Everyone has an interesting personality and each has his or her own characteristics. Master is not a modern person. He has a bit of a heart-throb attribute. He has a good CP, but he can compete with everyone. He has a secondary CP. It's just that the space transition is a bit stiff and the ending is a bit rushed.

Nice! Tomatoes are relatively serious. They are either up to date or willing to please and be affectionate. This article is really beautiful

After reading the previous chapter about the Twin Sisters, I felt a faint sense of be. This kind of beginning is quite rare. It's quite interesting and a new experience. I usually read cool articles. I wish the author a great success.

It's actually pretty good, but I feel like the perspective is unclear and the protagonist's presence is sometimes low.

Very, very beautiful. I like this kind of group portrait article very much, and Master is also very good. Although Master is often written from the perspective of others, it makes me feel that Master is such a good person! ! !

Five-star praise is given. It's a pity that I can't accept the delay. [Cry]

It is simply a breath of fresh air for tomatoes, and it is also a rare two-men cultivator. I am more and more looking forward to who the Master will be the cp with. [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

Very gentle writing style, very healing.

I admit that I basically read the first few chapters about the third junior sister in one gulp, but the later chapters get better and better, hehe, the author's writing style always has a kind of eloquent tone, light and quiet, I like it [send heartfelt] [send heartfelt] It looks good, it looks good, I want Kuku Hyun, I want to eat, eat, eat

Teacher, I really can't distinguish CP clearly. I feel a bit confused for no reason. Please give me some help. But the teacher wrote it very well, and I praise the author.

Protagonist, why can't I see you?

This plot is very attractive to me so far, and I am very much looking forward to the next development. Big boost to the author💪💪💪

Looks good! ! A bit of a group portrait! I like [send heart] [send heart] more, more, more!

Very good book. Very delicious

This article is super, super, super good to read. It's just that everyone is so miserable o(╥╥)o

It's very interesting. I originally came here for forced love. Although there was no forced love at the end, I have to say that the writing was really good. Each character was very three-dimensional, but the ending was a bit rushed.

There should be plot, emotion, and clear and compact rhythm.

Super pretty! ! It's to my liking www. The ending is still unsatisfactory.

This book is so beautiful. It's so exciting. Every character is unique. I can feel the author's feelings for each character.

Like to look good, love to watch

The group portraits are cultivating immortals, and the plot is funny

It looks great, good luck to the author!

Very attractive writing style

It looks great [laughs] Come on, author! ! !