In the Age of Divine Authority, What Do I Do About My Clingy Deity?

The writing style is excellent, not too plain and dull, nor too literary to affect the perception. The character creation and perspective change are also just right. Several characters have distinct personalities. It does not favor one over the other. It only focuses on the protagonist and writes the other supporting characters too brainlessly. The plot development is also very smooth, and the reasons for the protagonist's location transfer are also very clear, making it very clear to read. At present, the only two minor problems are that there are some typos, which somewhat affects the perception, but it can be modified and it is not a big problem. Another point is that the single heroine in the label is definitely Yaoyao. I don't know how the author plans to deal with Zhimu's emotional line. Is it intended to be a female supporting character who cannot be loved? It depends on how the author plays it, other than that there are no big flaws. The climax of the plot is quite rich, and it doesn't always feel like a dull routine. The skipping of some scenes also improves the viewing experience, and the performance of the protagonist is also more to your liking. Overall, I feel that the writing is very good. However, due to the strange promotion of Red Persimmon, this book seems a bit lonely and not many people read it. I hope that more people will read the book in the future, and I also hope that the author can persevere. So giving five stars should be regarded as a encouragement to the author.

The author's writing is very good. I feel that the reason for the lack of people is mainly because the relationship with the female partner is a bit too close. I feel that it would be better to write less about that scene. Other aspects are great. I hope it can keep going 😘😘😘 The scenes with Su Zhimu are obviously much less. The author's writing style and plot are indeed very good, and the emotional line with the heroine is much more in the third volume. I rarely read Western Fantasy, and I have only read two books (not counting this one). It is comparable to the one in "You're In Love, Aren't You", but the emotional scenes are better than that (maybe it's because I haven't seen much Western Fantasy, and I haven't seen any better works, 🤦).

The book is very good, but the little girl will be very controversial. Her relationship with the male protagonist is very special. It is a foreshadowing that is difficult to complete. It may help the male protagonist a lot in the future, but the more it is like this, the less likely it is to be a single woman. The author went a bit too far in writing about the girl's sincerity towards her friends, but comparing it with others shows the innocence of a child. I suggest other readers to bring a child's perspective when reading that paragraph, otherwise it is easy to be biased by stereotypes.

The story is very good. To be honest, I think the rating of this book should be above 8.5. It shouldn't be so low. It's a pity. In fact, for me, I prefer to change it to multiple female protagonists because she split into two and became two existences. Both of them have feelings for the male protagonist. Even if they are a whole in theory, they are two individuals with very different personalities. Secondly, there is Su. The author has portrayed her character and image so well that it would be a pity if they were not together.

The strength of the male protagonist looks uncomfortable, and he has been suppressed and beaten. The author also said that if he has no feelings for Su Zhimu, then he should not be ambiguous. The kiss on the hand is not very acceptable. I hope to explain the relationship earlier, and the emotional line with the female protagonist is a bit slow. Otherwise, everything else is fine. Come on, author [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]

Not much to say, I was lucky to find this book on Tomato. The plot is quite smooth, I highly recommend it! Ps: I would like to give a suggestion to the author. Since it is a single female protagonist, you should keep a certain distance from other female supporting characters. Like Su Zhimu, they can be very good friends, but in some places they are really a bit too close.

The author writes very well, please, author, don't break it 😢😢 Don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it, don't break it Don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break, don't break.

Very nice! The author's writing style and plot design are very good, and the narrative rhythm and characterization are also well combined. But author, have you forgotten the word "relaxation" in the introduction? The plot always has ups and downs, making me worried about the fate of the characters 🤦. I hope Bai Yu and Ling Yaoyao can have a HE in the end. Don't make me beg you.

It feels like there are still two heroines 🤔 It will be difficult to end this situation if Su Zhimu doesn't accept it. If it is a single heroine, then the girlfriend is more like Su Zhimu, so are they the same person? 🤔

New book!!! Come on!!! Go ahead!!! Lord Yaoyao bless me!!! I'm about to break the defense. What kind of scoring mechanism is this?