
Corpse Brother: My Father Is the Commander of the Yanhuang Army
尸兄之我的父亲是炎黄司令
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 801k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 16d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
233Chapters
15Reads
6.7kReads · all time
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I originally wanted to give it three stars, but more stars are just encouragement. After all, there are very few people who write about Brother Corpse, and even fewer people wrote so many words. I really can't bear it. But I still have to talk about the problem. First of all, the novel seems a bit confusing. For example, where does the protagonist's strength come from? Why can't he kill the Centipede Corpse Brother at the beginning, but it doesn't take long for him to have heaven-level strength? There is also the suspicion of deliberately pandering to keep the plot close to the original work. Originally, under the butterfly effect of the protagonist, some things should not have happened, but they still happened. For example, the plot of the young leader of the Blood Lotus Cult having a barbecue in the cemetery was completely killed by the protagonist in this book, without giving any clues. The chance of being turned into a corpse, but in the end I still followed the original plot, and there are those imitating Erduo/Ghost Stick/Evil Arhat Corpse Brother. I can understand it, but imitating it once is enough. This is already cheating the corpse king. After all, how can it be easy to train a human master from scratch from scratch? How can I repeat the imitation? Will this maintain quality? It stands to reason that under the interference of the protagonist, the plot will change more and more later on, but in fact, apart from saving Erdo/Gui Gun/Evil Arhat and others, the overall plot is still following the original main plot, and it does not show the butterfly effect that fan fiction should have. If the protagonist is weak, it is fine, but the key is that he still has enough strength to make changes. As a result, the main plot has basically remained unchanged, which does seem very inconsistent.
Very pretty.
A bit like human-computer dialogue