Demon Lord: the Little Pillow Is Not a Rebel Disciple!

Ambrosia! Brothers are welcome to join. The author is a knowledgeable high school student. The first ten chapters are a bit man-machine and purely foreshadowing. The subsequent plot is very enjoyable to watch and there are no poisonous points. The author avoids it very well. I have to say that the setting of the protagonist and Yu's brothers is so wonderful. For readers, there is a wonderful feeling of two souls. On the one hand, the protagonist is his ideal self, and Yu shows his true side as a loser. The design and words are very consistent with the character. Come on, author! Take good care of you! [Blowing kiss]

The overall direction of this book is very good, and the emotional appreciation is also very good. The overall direction of this book is very good, and the feelings and appreciation are also very good. There are also the activities of the protagonist and the master, and some descriptive scenes are described quite well. It can be seen that the author has worked very hard to describe, even if it is not allowed to be described, because Tomato officially does not allow such indescribable scenes to be written, and the author has also worked very hard to restore it as much as possible. It is already very good. There is also the interaction between the master and the male protagonist. The animation is also very interesting, and overall it is very good. However, the interaction between the male protagonist and the Master has been less recently, and there are some intimate scenes with the Master. Well, the author has been thinking about the plot recently, or writing other plots, and there has been less interaction with the Master. Basically, It's some interactions with other female protagonists. Because this book has multiple female protagonists, it's impossible to write about just one master. On the whole, there are a lot of scenes with other female protagonists. I suggest that the author should focus more on the master. After all, the master is the male. The main palace of the main character is also the master of the male protagonist. More attention should be paid to the description of the master and the male protagonist. After all, the entire story line is developed around the male protagonist and the master. If the relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is over-developed, it will not be good, but then the female protagonist The supporting aspect also needs to be developed, because this is the whole book, and it needs more female protagonists. If it is an optical master, it is not good. Overall, it is very good so far. This book is very good. I hope the author will continue to keep it up, because this book is There are multiple female protagonists. Some female supporting characters still need to be described more. You need to familiarize yourself with this book. This book has multiple female protagonists, not a single female protagonist. Please recognize the reality. It is not enough to just write about the master and the male protagonist. There are also other female supporting characters that need to be written. If you don't like it, If you like this book, you don't have to read it. Please don't blindly deny the results of other people's efforts. If you say that the author's writing is not good, some of it is your personal problem. If you only want to read about the male protagonist and the master, then you should find a good book with a single female protagonist. Why should you read this one? Since you want to read it, then read it carefully, be unreasonable, don't make malicious comments, and don't deny the achievements of anyone who has worked hard but got no reward. It's very hurtful for you to do this. I ask fellow Taoists to pay more attention. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Please don't maliciously criticize the author. He has worked very hard to write, why can't you accept him? Even if this book is not well written, fellow Taoists, you don't need to criticize it or say something you don't like. Once you change to another book, there is no need to deny other people's achievements here. Have you participated? How do you know the dangers involved? No, it's hard work and fatigue. Don't make malicious comments. Be good at making good friends. Please keep this in mind, guide friends.

The plot is good, I give it 5 stars, I hope the author will stick with it. When it comes to buying shoes, I saw the shadow of the Queen [Thinking]

The author must continue writing!

It's okay, I have to eat it quickly, the male protagonist is not in charge, come on author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Good 👀 It's good to read, the author is strong, but the heroine could be less →_→

Very beautiful. Keep up the good work.

It's good-looking. Although sometimes the male protagonist will hurt another woman because of a disheveled bowl of water, at least he can remedy the situation in time. It's also quite sweet, especially Jiu'er, who is considerate, gentle and charming [Adoration] Although the ending is not bad, there is no difference between so many stories ending without telling the story and ending unfinished [smile]

If you are persuaded to leave by the ratings, then I can only say that you are still too young, brother. Apart from the little doubts in front, I can only say that the bag is good-looking. Anyway, I like it [smile][smile][smile]

Emm, the author is great, how long will it take to win the master? He has written nearly 600 chapters, only kissing, and nothing else. The heroine has taken everything that should be taken, except for the great heroine, the master [shy], but I have to say that the author has great literary skills, and the emotions are delicate. Each heroine has her own unique character. The plot is not bad, but the later writing is a bit flawed, which is innocuous and can be read.

It's a very light and simple article, nothing poisonous. Good luck to the author.

Handsome guys and beauties are here to comment again? Go read the text (¬◡¬)✧

Although I have only read five chapters so far, I feel that the writing style is a bit stiff. According to the comment section, the author is a high school student, so it is still very good. Tentatively rated four stars, I will come and read it carefully tomorrow [exploration]

Come on author, it's great

Support is pretty cool

It's nice. I just want to ask the author whether it's true that the protagonist's fox tail is written in the article or it's a mistake. @ I haven't seen the tail [crying]

The stranger is like jade, and the young master is unparalleled in the world. I feel that Brother Yu is the protagonist of Sun Gusheng, Zuo Fei, and his younger brother Zheng Wu. [Adoration] In fact, I quite hope that it will be a single female protagonist who only loves the master, if both of them are yandere [Adoration]

It's okay, but there are too many male protagonists

It's very, very, very beautiful. Five stars. It's not easy to write a book. I am a "Shen Nong". It's very beautiful. I highly recommend it. Everyone should read it! ! ! , (It's raining here, I thought my umbrella was broken, but it turned out that all the umbrellas were broken), (What, you said I tore it? It's a naked slander, I want to sue you for libel!)

It's not bad. I like Master Baby the most. I really like Chong Master and Rebel Disciple. I feel that the article should be very long. It's still early to go to the upper world. I like to focus on daily life.

It looks good. The first few pictures are very bland, but the later ones get better and better. The content is very different from the introduction. Reading a novel and getting stabbed? [Smile]

Excellent, I especially like this kind of harem story, not a prisoner, everyone has their own distinct character, and I also like the emotional drama described by the author, just keep it as it is. I really don't understand why this rating is so low

It's really beautiful, and the descriptions are very detailed. Each character has a different personality. Can the second male lead Yu Xingtong be deleted? I really like that character. . .

This is the only book that made me read it from beginning to end

Can Shu Hua be resurrected?

Very good, good luck to the author

Not bad but no details [laughs evilly]

Very funny, good looking

Big cheers for the author

Very beautiful, highly recommended [laughs][laughs][laughs]