[Rebirth+Main Attack+Double Cleansing+Redemption+HE]
Rebirth Overlord Attack + Pure Love Sadness
In the small world, there is always a beloved child of heaven. As the protagonist in the small world, he is commonly known as the son of fate.
They are knowledgeable, perseverant, and knowledgeable.
However, in the world where Xu Bai lives, there is also a professor with both virtue and art and a high position who can be called this name.
The protagonist, who originally had a smooth life, was tortured physically and mentally due to a bug in the world. He wasted his life and died in a corner where no one knew.
Xu Bai: Is he the person you are talking about? ? ?
Xu Bai asked, pointing to the professor who was speaking politely and clearly on the podium.
201 Flapped its wings and flew beside Xu Bai: Yes, yes, it's him.
Xu Bai shrank his neck and buried the lower half of his face in his clothes: "Then how can I save him? First, I'm not a student. Second, I can't beat a mandarin duck. I see that the professor likes the student very much. How about forgetting it?"
The system was worried: If you like anything, bah, that's a scumbag. He deceives money, feelings, and body. He absorbs all the halo from the protagonist. The world will collapse because of him! !
Xu Bai: What does that have to do with me? ?
System: It has nothing to do with you, but the mission reward is rebirth. Are you sure you don't want it? ? ?
Xu Bai's eyes flashed. He didn't want to be threatened, as long as he lived.
Yes, he was killed last night, and when he was dying, he was bound by this so-called system.
Silent
System: Are you sure you don't want to do the task?
Xu Bai's heart skipped a beat: Do it! ! !
The system proudly dug its non-existent nostrils: Come on! Host! I'll call you from the side.
Reader comments
As of now, it's okay, but I feel like the overall emotional line is a bit fast. One problem I have is that after his parents found out that the male protagonist was in good health, they felt a little anxious to get him to work quickly. But it stands to reason that the male protagonist's physical condition has not been very good since he was a child, and then he was dying for a time. After suddenly getting better, his parents no longer care about his health.
I see that the overall writing is great now.
It looks pretty good so far
It feels good
I like it, I hope my brother's love can go smoothly [shy]
As of now, it's okay, but I feel like the overall emotional line is a bit fast. One problem I have is that after his parents found out that the male protagonist was in good health, they felt a little anxious to get him to work quickly. But it stands to reason that the male protagonist's physical condition has not been very good since he was a child, and then he was dying for a time. After suddenly getting better, his parents no longer care about his health.
I see that the overall writing is great now.
It looks pretty good so far
It feels good
I like it, I hope my brother's love can go smoothly [shy]