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The author should be encouraged when writing for the first time and give him a 4 points! But can I give you a little advice? Can you not describe the voice after each conversation, for example: "His voice is loud, his steps are steady, etc. There are many of these. If repeated too much, it will be offensive! You can express it in another way: At this time, there is a loud voice, etc. [Cry] [cry]

I feel the writing is quite good, the plot is rich and compact

Yeah, it sounds pretty good. Yeah, it sounds pretty good. It's pretty compact. I give you a five-star review. Come on, hurry up.

Still pretty

The plot is compact, fascinating and very beautiful.

This book is very well written and wonderful

Come on soon!

Very well written. Score is low

Super exciting and beautiful [like]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Not bad. I like the character of the heroine Shu Ning. She is ruthless to the enemy, decisive in killing, kind-hearted, and protective of her own people. It's just a pity that the senior brother died.

The author's writing is very good and the plot has ups and downs.

Super pretty! The plot is exciting and progresses quickly! [Smile][smile][smile] It's very beautiful and the heroine is very strong! [Smile][smile][smile]

It's very well written, just a little bit better than average.